Drinking Water Makes Me Strong? I’m Invincible Under Heaven

The writing is good, but the common problem among novice authors is that they all have the same dialogue, haha

I like this character, but... There is no specific improvement process and the plot is too monotonous. It's like there's no outline written. But, alas, there are some novices who do better and are more literary.

I saw 30 photos. Overall, they are pretty good. There is nothing poisonous about them.

[Smile][smile][smile]What a good book

You see, the male protagonist has very upright values ​​and the bad guys deserve what they get.

This book is so beautiful. Five stars.

So this thing is fan fiction.

Give reality a Kong Hua

If you can deceive someone, it counts as ten stars⭐