Can Drinking Water Make You Stronger? I Am Invincible in the World

The writing is good, but the common problem among novice authors is that they all have the same dialogue, haha

I like this character, but... There is no specific improvement process and the plot is too monotonous. It's like there's no outline written. But, alas, there are some novices who do better and are more literary.

I saw 30 photos. Overall, they are pretty good. There is nothing poisonous about them.

[Smile][smile][smile]What a good book

So this thing is fan fiction.

You see, the male protagonist has very upright values ​​and the bad guys deserve what they get.

This book is so beautiful. Five stars.

If you can deceive someone, it counts as ten stars⭐

Give reality a Kong Hua