Harem novels, with many female protagonists, tend to be daily, slow-burning.
As a proton, isn't it normal for me to visit brothels all day long?
As a time-traveler, isn't it normal for me to be a copycat and coax girls from a brothel?
As a time traveler, isn't it normal for me to have a young and beautiful Aunt Qin?
Reader comments
Come on, the characters are well described and the male protagonist is also romantic, but the improvement in strength is too slow. It can be seen from the details that each heroine retains some ability to protect herself, but it feels like there may be a long chapter later, and the current plot is relatively long.
My suggestion is to improve the rhythm of the plot a little bit, not too much, just a little bit will do.
There is also a change in the mentality of the protagonist. To add a little more, it should not only retain the romantic and open-mindedness of modern people, but also have some desire for strength and decisive killing (this actually already exists)
Of course, the most important thing is to update more. As a slow reader, I spent an early morning reading it.
But after all, this is 🍅, a free novel. I don't dare to ask for too much, so I'll give you 5⭐️
How well written it is, I really like it, and you can't help but like it.
The novel belongs to the historical and Machiavellian genre, but what attracts me is: (35% calculation + 20% light and funny language + 35% emotion + 15% character's flat personality). Stressed people like to read
I hope the author will not write a purely martial arts story about two armies confronting each other. I personally think that the last 65% is more important.
Oh, right! Happy New Year!
It has potential, a good food source [like][like][like]
It's rare for me to find a good book that suits my taste. The characters are well described, the story is interesting, and the digging is reasonable. I hope the author will continue to work hard. As long as it is not too censorship, it should be another excellent fictional historical novel.
Because they are so similar, I always compare the protagonist with Xu Buling, and then I feel indecisive. However, judging from his life experience, it is normal for an invincible prince with dragon muscles and tiger bones and Qilin strength, a young man who has never been on the battlefield or fought against anyone, not to dare to act casually in this whirlpool.
The emperor's uncle doesn't eat meat at the moment, but he sees the main character as a chess piece in the game between his father and the emperor. He still lies down every day, afraid of this and that. The main character is currently incompetent in literature (strategy), and he doesn't work hard. He just copies poems to flirt with girls, which feels like it is not interesting. Xu Buling can't eat meat in the future, but there are fights at least. Why do I feel that this protagonist is so useless? It's rare to find a book that is as fierce as the prince. Let's raise it.
The author is great. Reminds me of Mr. Guan Guan. It would be great if this book could be as good as his. Even if the plot is somewhat similar, I can bear it. Well, I can wake up laughing even in my dreams.
Come on. There are very few people who write good harem novels.
I saw the latest one in one day, it's good, I like Xiaoguai's unreasonable behavior, the kind of contrasting cuteness that only a queen can bring. The male protagonist's character is also okay, with a bit of the seriousness of the slow male protagonist among the scoundrels. There are more than two chapters in one chapter, it is large in volume, and the plot is at least much better than mindless novels. You must keep writing it, at least it must have an ending, and you and your aunt must achieve success. Don't let a good book leave you with regrets.
I have read your previous books and found that your current writing style is not only sophisticated but also concise, and the overall framework and plot are still very good. If you keep writing at the current level, it will definitely be a masterpiece. The only requirement is that there are no eunuchs [laughing and crying]
It's very well written [Love], I look forward to a perfect ending.
Now that I've seen it, I think it's great. The relationship between the protagonist and each character is also very delicate, and the world structure is very touching. I hope the author will work hard and write it down. I look forward to the updates every day [Like] [Admiration]
Not bad, just a little short
I like the protagonist's aunt very much
Not much to say, the emotional aspect is amazing
I kept raising books and raising them, but suddenly they died...
It's very good, but now there are less people watching it. When there are more people, the score should be higher.
The description is delicate and the language is vivid. The characters have distinct personalities, and the most important thing is that the male protagonist is not a eunuch! ! Eating meat in large quantities means that I have only eaten meat once before. However, there is an advantage to slowing down, which can make the relationship smoother and the explosion more natural. Everyone who likes harems can give it a try.
The writing is clear and the characters are vivid. Considering that the article is a bit short and the plot is not evaluated, it is worth looking forward to.
I just like to see detailed descriptions
It feels like a potential stock
Entering the palace? Is this
Byd, why is this book always being reviewed?
It's nice to look at and worth eating [note]
It's okay so far. I mainly feel that there are too many female protagonists and the relationship is a bit messy. This will require the author to have a lot of control over the plot and writing skills in the future. It may be easy to plant minefields. It is recommended to appropriately control the number and relationship of the female protagonists. There are also some things that the author can pick out in detail, such as the division of realms. In addition, the ability of pig's feet does not seem to be enough. It may be better to add some IQ.
It's a daily novel, which I personally like better.
There are many doubts in the book, but it is not dull.
The characterization is more delicate,
The foreshadowing in the plot is sometimes confusing.
When filling in the holes, you will feel a sudden realization.
Worth a look.
The details of the characters are well handled, and each character has distinct characteristics, which is quite good-looking. However, the protagonist lacks a sense of real strategy, especially in this low-martial world, where force is of little use. I hope it can more reflect the feeling of the protagonist strategizing and winning thousands of miles away.
The whole book is very comfortable to read. Otherwise, it is very novel and not very cliché. It has suspense, pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger, a harem, the male protagonist has a very good character, and although there are many female protagonists, they also have distinct personalities. It's a pity that I found it after only chapter 31. Everyone knows the torture of waiting for daily updates.
Very exciting. Highly recommended.
Give it a lick, maybe it will make you angry
Well written, keep going.
Okay, it's very detailed.
Full of fainting, full of fainting, must be full of fainting
Come on, the characters are well described and the male protagonist is also romantic, but the improvement in strength is too slow. It can be seen from the details that each heroine retains some ability to protect herself, but it feels like there may be a long chapter later, and the current plot is relatively long. My suggestion is to improve the rhythm of the plot a little bit, not too much, just a little bit will do. There is also a change in the mentality of the protagonist. To add a little more, it should not only retain the romantic and open-mindedness of modern people, but also have some desire for strength and decisive killing (this actually already exists) Of course, the most important thing is to update more. As a slow reader, I spent an early morning reading it. But after all, this is 🍅, a free novel. I don't dare to ask for too much, so I'll give you 5⭐️
How well written it is, I really like it, and you can't help but like it. The novel belongs to the historical and Machiavellian genre, but what attracts me is: (35% calculation + 20% light and funny language + 35% emotion + 15% character's flat personality). Stressed people like to read I hope the author will not write a purely martial arts story about two armies confronting each other. I personally think that the last 65% is more important. Oh, right! Happy New Year!
It has potential, a good food source [like][like][like]
It's rare for me to find a good book that suits my taste. The characters are well described, the story is interesting, and the digging is reasonable. I hope the author will continue to work hard. As long as it is not too censorship, it should be another excellent fictional historical novel.
Because they are so similar, I always compare the protagonist with Xu Buling, and then I feel indecisive. However, judging from his life experience, it is normal for an invincible prince with dragon muscles and tiger bones and Qilin strength, a young man who has never been on the battlefield or fought against anyone, not to dare to act casually in this whirlpool. The emperor's uncle doesn't eat meat at the moment, but he sees the main character as a chess piece in the game between his father and the emperor. He still lies down every day, afraid of this and that. The main character is currently incompetent in literature (strategy), and he doesn't work hard. He just copies poems to flirt with girls, which feels like it is not interesting. Xu Buling can't eat meat in the future, but there are fights at least. Why do I feel that this protagonist is so useless? It's rare to find a book that is as fierce as the prince. Let's raise it.
The author is great. Reminds me of Mr. Guan Guan. It would be great if this book could be as good as his. Even if the plot is somewhat similar, I can bear it. Well, I can wake up laughing even in my dreams. Come on. There are very few people who write good harem novels.
I saw the latest one in one day, it's good, I like Xiaoguai's unreasonable behavior, the kind of contrasting cuteness that only a queen can bring. The male protagonist's character is also okay, with a bit of the seriousness of the slow male protagonist among the scoundrels. There are more than two chapters in one chapter, it is large in volume, and the plot is at least much better than mindless novels. You must keep writing it, at least it must have an ending, and you and your aunt must achieve success. Don't let a good book leave you with regrets.
I have read your previous books and found that your current writing style is not only sophisticated but also concise, and the overall framework and plot are still very good. If you keep writing at the current level, it will definitely be a masterpiece. The only requirement is that there are no eunuchs [laughing and crying]
It's very well written [Love], I look forward to a perfect ending.
Now that I've seen it, I think it's great. The relationship between the protagonist and each character is also very delicate, and the world structure is very touching. I hope the author will work hard and write it down. I look forward to the updates every day [Like] [Admiration]
Not bad, just a little short I like the protagonist's aunt very much
Not much to say, the emotional aspect is amazing
I kept raising books and raising them, but suddenly they died...
It's very good, but now there are less people watching it. When there are more people, the score should be higher.
The description is delicate and the language is vivid. The characters have distinct personalities, and the most important thing is that the male protagonist is not a eunuch! ! Eating meat in large quantities means that I have only eaten meat once before. However, there is an advantage to slowing down, which can make the relationship smoother and the explosion more natural. Everyone who likes harems can give it a try.
The writing is clear and the characters are vivid. Considering that the article is a bit short and the plot is not evaluated, it is worth looking forward to.
I just like to see detailed descriptions
It feels like a potential stock
Entering the palace? Is this
Byd, why is this book always being reviewed?
It's nice to look at and worth eating [note]
It's okay so far. I mainly feel that there are too many female protagonists and the relationship is a bit messy. This will require the author to have a lot of control over the plot and writing skills in the future. It may be easy to plant minefields. It is recommended to appropriately control the number and relationship of the female protagonists. There are also some things that the author can pick out in detail, such as the division of realms. In addition, the ability of pig's feet does not seem to be enough. It may be better to add some IQ.
It's a daily novel, which I personally like better. There are many doubts in the book, but it is not dull. The characterization is more delicate, The foreshadowing in the plot is sometimes confusing. When filling in the holes, you will feel a sudden realization. Worth a look.
The details of the characters are well handled, and each character has distinct characteristics, which is quite good-looking. However, the protagonist lacks a sense of real strategy, especially in this low-martial world, where force is of little use. I hope it can more reflect the feeling of the protagonist strategizing and winning thousands of miles away.
The whole book is very comfortable to read. Otherwise, it is very novel and not very cliché. It has suspense, pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger, a harem, the male protagonist has a very good character, and although there are many female protagonists, they also have distinct personalities. It's a pity that I found it after only chapter 31. Everyone knows the torture of waiting for daily updates.
Very exciting. Highly recommended.
Give it a lick, maybe it will make you angry
Well written, keep going.
Okay, it's very detailed.
Full of fainting, full of fainting, must be full of fainting