[Yandere Lolita] + [Tsundere Royal Sister] + [Cute White Hair] [National Games + Live Broadcast + Strategy + No System + No Brainlessness + No Routines]
It's not a fast-paced rules and weird story. There is reasoning but not much. It is more about daily life. The pace is slow. I hope everyone can read it slowly.
Jiang Lin, a person who has reached the extreme decline in real life, was selected as the "Chosen One" during a jump from a building and went out to represent the Dragon Kingdom in the world of ghost stories. However, when he entered the world of ghost stories for the first time, he did not get any talents. He only got a "book of strategies" and was forced to start a strange life...
Reader comments
It's a very interesting book. It tells the story in a weird and strange way. I hope the protagonist can be stabbed by the sickly sister [laughter]
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Five-star praise
The presence of the Book of Contract is too low, I think it can be added
A protagonist can inherit the memory of the original owner, and each
Any copy of Kaitan can be used, and the period is permanent.
However, you can inherit the memory later, and you can also use the ability of the captured person.
If it doesn't work at first, you can tell the readers in advance.
I feel that there is no need to change it into a weird object at all. I can just write it as a miracle.
Talent, it seems that this can still be snatched, the talent is not that good
Easy to snatch, the first one can be obtained by relying on the protagonist
Push forward your own abilities and show your abilities. When the time comes,
When you emerge from the world of ghost stories, you can still take some initiative.
Right, so as not to be passive when talking to some people
Overall, it's well written and quite interesting.
The first copy is a bit frustrating, but later on the protagonist will start to take the lead.
233 Likes
There are some problems, such as the ability of the Book of Contract is actually not very strong, and its sense of presence is relatively low.
The presence of about 20 photos is relatively low. In this case, the content will be boring and boring, and most readers will
It will just slip away. I suggest the author change it.
If the data is not good, hold on. If you finish writing one million, you will be successful.
The second part of your novel is much better.
You can also consider making the protagonist grow up faster, but this requires considering the writing style.
If it's not good, it's a failure. If it's good in the back, it's useless. Readers will run away from the front. But the plot in the back is good. Your book is okay.
The author's writing is delicate and smooth, and the story is exciting and interesting. You can catch up to the last chapter in one breath. It is a good book, worth reading, appreciating, and pursuing! [Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like]
Very good conceptual structure, this book is a bit interesting.
The characterization is full, lively and interesting, the writing is smooth and delicate, the content is rich and fascinating, the story plot is ups and downs, compact and coherent.
Worth looking forward to recommending
I think it's pretty good-looking, maybe it's the yandere theme that really appeals to me. Although many people say that the heroine is very poisonous, I feel a little indifferent (maybe because my heart is already riddled with holes), but I will still get angry when I should! (Gb head teacher gun goes to Xiba)
With unique rules and ghost story settings, it presents an adventure full of horror and wisdom. A world full of suspense and crisis is cleverly constructed. Jiang Lin's high IQ and luck become the key to passing the level. The plot of the novel is compact, logical, and endlessly memorable.
Through carefully designed rules and strange plots, it presents a world full of horror and crisis. The author skillfully sets many rules and skillfully displays the characters' dialogue and psychological changes, creating a tense and exciting atmosphere. The plot of the novel is highly logical, the characters are reasonably set, and it is full of emotions. It is a good book worth reading.
The new book opens up another story, collect it and give it a thumbs up, continue to follow it, keep it up, it's very interesting, like it [Like] [Like]
Yes, it's really good to watch. I couldn't bear to stop and stayed up late to finish reading it!
The plot is very imaginative, the protagonist's character is lovable and good-looking, keep following it [Like]
What a pair of yandere brothers and sisters. The novel is so wonderfully written. The content is weird and attractive. The more I read it, the more I like it. The plot is not protracted and has ups and downs. It is very interesting. I must support the author greatly.
The content is rich, the plot is exciting, and it is very enjoyable to watch. I just like watching this kind of weird rules.
I've been watching it all afternoon, it's beautiful
A very attractive novel. This is my first time reading this type of novel. I read the latest chapters in one breath and couldn't stop at all. The author's writing style is very delicate and the characters are full of characters. It's beautiful and worth recommending [Like]
The writing is wonderful. I particularly like this kind of writing. It is very bright. The plot is compact and the structure is full. I must support it with five-star praise!
Not bad, pretty good! The protagonist is very three-dimensional, and the plot is also quite exciting. I was emotionally ups and downs many times while watching it, and I was deeply involved in it. I couldn't help myself. It was just a bit lacking, and it was not enough to watch [crying]
A very nice article with brilliant literary talent, beautiful diction, simple language, fresh writing style, rich emotions, and full-bodied characters.
It's a pretty good book, written in great detail, unlike some random rules and weird talk.
I saw the weird sister who was forced by her teacher to take private photos. I was so angry and it made me anxious [smile]
The story is well written and worth recommending [sending heartfelt thanks], but it's a pity that the author can no longer afford to eat [face covering]
Wonderful story, beautiful [like]
A good book is just gone...
I came across this book by chance. I didn't expect it to be to my liking.
Although I didn't like the ending of the first volume, it didn't affect my opinion of this book.
It's okay, although it feels a bit familiar to some extent
I love her so much, especially my sister. She is so pitiful. It would be great if I could make a contract with him.
Is the weird sister a yandere? There are still many female protagonists, please update soon, I want to see the yandere sister stabbing the protagonist [sneaky smile][sneaky smile]
I watched the end of the first volume in one breath, and I just want to say: Alas, it's hard to calm down. I've read too many refreshing articles. When I saw the ending, I couldn't calm down. The story is eye-catching.
There are some flaws, the copy design is not very rigorous, but it is pretty good, the author will continue to work hard [Love]
I originally thought it was a horror and weird novel, so I clicked on it. When I realized it was just a trap, I was already sucked in. It was so interesting.
It's a very good book, it's my favorite type. Please give it a thumbs up to the author and update it soon.
It's a very interesting book. It tells the story in a weird and strange way. I hope the protagonist can be stabbed by the sickly sister [laughter]
[Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Learned][Learned][Learned] Five-star praise The presence of the Book of Contract is too low, I think it can be added A protagonist can inherit the memory of the original owner, and each Any copy of Kaitan can be used, and the period is permanent. However, you can inherit the memory later, and you can also use the ability of the captured person. If it doesn't work at first, you can tell the readers in advance. I feel that there is no need to change it into a weird object at all. I can just write it as a miracle. Talent, it seems that this can still be snatched, the talent is not that good Easy to snatch, the first one can be obtained by relying on the protagonist Push forward your own abilities and show your abilities. When the time comes, When you emerge from the world of ghost stories, you can still take some initiative. Right, so as not to be passive when talking to some people Overall, it's well written and quite interesting. The first copy is a bit frustrating, but later on the protagonist will start to take the lead. 233 Likes There are some problems, such as the ability of the Book of Contract is actually not very strong, and its sense of presence is relatively low. The presence of about 20 photos is relatively low. In this case, the content will be boring and boring, and most readers will It will just slip away. I suggest the author change it. If the data is not good, hold on. If you finish writing one million, you will be successful. The second part of your novel is much better. You can also consider making the protagonist grow up faster, but this requires considering the writing style. If it's not good, it's a failure. If it's good in the back, it's useless. Readers will run away from the front. But the plot in the back is good. Your book is okay.
The author's writing is delicate and smooth, and the story is exciting and interesting. You can catch up to the last chapter in one breath. It is a good book, worth reading, appreciating, and pursuing! [Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like]
Very good conceptual structure, this book is a bit interesting. The characterization is full, lively and interesting, the writing is smooth and delicate, the content is rich and fascinating, the story plot is ups and downs, compact and coherent. Worth looking forward to recommending
I think it's pretty good-looking, maybe it's the yandere theme that really appeals to me. Although many people say that the heroine is very poisonous, I feel a little indifferent (maybe because my heart is already riddled with holes), but I will still get angry when I should! (Gb head teacher gun goes to Xiba)
With unique rules and ghost story settings, it presents an adventure full of horror and wisdom. A world full of suspense and crisis is cleverly constructed. Jiang Lin's high IQ and luck become the key to passing the level. The plot of the novel is compact, logical, and endlessly memorable.
Through carefully designed rules and strange plots, it presents a world full of horror and crisis. The author skillfully sets many rules and skillfully displays the characters' dialogue and psychological changes, creating a tense and exciting atmosphere. The plot of the novel is highly logical, the characters are reasonably set, and it is full of emotions. It is a good book worth reading.
The new book opens up another story, collect it and give it a thumbs up, continue to follow it, keep it up, it's very interesting, like it [Like] [Like]
Yes, it's really good to watch. I couldn't bear to stop and stayed up late to finish reading it!
The plot is very imaginative, the protagonist's character is lovable and good-looking, keep following it [Like]
What a pair of yandere brothers and sisters. The novel is so wonderfully written. The content is weird and attractive. The more I read it, the more I like it. The plot is not protracted and has ups and downs. It is very interesting. I must support the author greatly.
The content is rich, the plot is exciting, and it is very enjoyable to watch. I just like watching this kind of weird rules. I've been watching it all afternoon, it's beautiful
A very attractive novel. This is my first time reading this type of novel. I read the latest chapters in one breath and couldn't stop at all. The author's writing style is very delicate and the characters are full of characters. It's beautiful and worth recommending [Like]
The writing is wonderful. I particularly like this kind of writing. It is very bright. The plot is compact and the structure is full. I must support it with five-star praise!
Not bad, pretty good! The protagonist is very three-dimensional, and the plot is also quite exciting. I was emotionally ups and downs many times while watching it, and I was deeply involved in it. I couldn't help myself. It was just a bit lacking, and it was not enough to watch [crying]
A very nice article with brilliant literary talent, beautiful diction, simple language, fresh writing style, rich emotions, and full-bodied characters.
It's a pretty good book, written in great detail, unlike some random rules and weird talk.
I saw the weird sister who was forced by her teacher to take private photos. I was so angry and it made me anxious [smile]
The story is well written and worth recommending [sending heartfelt thanks], but it's a pity that the author can no longer afford to eat [face covering]
Wonderful story, beautiful [like]
A good book is just gone...
I came across this book by chance. I didn't expect it to be to my liking.
Although I didn't like the ending of the first volume, it didn't affect my opinion of this book.
It's okay, although it feels a bit familiar to some extent
I love her so much, especially my sister. She is so pitiful. It would be great if I could make a contract with him.
Is the weird sister a yandere? There are still many female protagonists, please update soon, I want to see the yandere sister stabbing the protagonist [sneaky smile][sneaky smile]
I watched the end of the first volume in one breath, and I just want to say: Alas, it's hard to calm down. I've read too many refreshing articles. When I saw the ending, I couldn't calm down. The story is eye-catching.
There are some flaws, the copy design is not very rigorous, but it is pretty good, the author will continue to work hard [Love]
I originally thought it was a horror and weird novel, so I clicked on it. When I realized it was just a trap, I was already sucked in. It was so interesting.
It's a very good book, it's my favorite type. Please give it a thumbs up to the author and update it soon.