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It's quite nice to read, and the writing is good, but the author doesn't seem to treat the female players as human beings. They are all brothers. There are no female or neutral words, and it doesn't look at whether the author is male or female. When I saw the updates, there are still only male ones. I can only say that it is a bit difficult to criticize. I don't know if the author will modify it. There is also the setting of Honghuang, because Honghuang was originally compiled by later generations, and different settings must be different in different novels. However, Chang Xi and Xihe, two women and one husband, are a bit shocking. If you can't accept it at all, don't read it. What's more, the whole story is basically Tian Li's words, and there are no female players at all. Well, I originally wanted to give a low score, but I am worried that the author just didn't think about it, or maybe he will change it, so I can only look forward to it. I saw some news, so I came back to see how it was going. After reading the catalog, the heroine felt so aggrieved. Why did those Tian Li harass you? They made such a big fuss, but you just let it go. You lost face because of nothing wrong. Is face important? Tian Li has gold at his knees and can see them kneeling everywhere. What's the use of face? He also said that betting doesn't count. It doesn't count what you bet. Moreover, he wrote several chapters about the plot of betting, plus more than ten or twenty chapters of foreshadowing. After reading the title, he didn't finish reading it. The idea of ​​going there is that the game is not bad, but other things are messy. The younger brother is simply a burden. And after reading other comments, I thought it would be changed. The result is that it is almost all Tian Li. Girls have some impressions of the female protagonist and an anchor. The author is Tian Li pretending to be a woman, right?

It's so beautiful. The world view of the second game is really shocking. I want to play this game [laughing and crying]. I feel that this game is quite culturally confident.

I beg for an update, ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh This article is completely in line with my preference: the description is smooth and the content is logical, with very few bad sentences. The content of the novel is an interstellar background, with the ancient Earth culture missing. The heroine designs a holographic online game as a time traveler. The written content has left some foreshadowing of the mystery of the protagonist's life experience. The current game content is based on a large number of ancient Chinese myths. It can be read from beginning to end in one go. The description of the big scenes in the game and the forum style complement each other. After reading the update, I am still not satisfied. I just want to beg the author to update 1,000,000 chapters [Sparrow Food Masterwork]

The content of the game is written in more detail, and it looks quite interesting, but is a game made by a female protagonist only played by men? Except for Qiqi, a girl who appears more often, the others seem to be all men. They are referred to as brothers. Moreover, they write insults on female channels and even mention their mothers. This is difficult to comment on. However, I quite like the writing of the game and will continue to read it. I very much hope that the author can change this male-oriented sentence structure.

The shortcomings are obvious, but the flaws are not concealed. It is great and great. There are not many articles about female video games and even fewer that match this theme. I remember that Lv Shui had read a lot of prehistoric novels and now the subject matter is much cooler, which is a double joy for me. Come on

It's quite good-looking. I don't know why the score is so low. It does have some quirks, but I don't think it deserves the score. The score is too low. I didn't read the first two or three chapters because I didn't really care about the important premise, I just wanted to see the content of the game. Some of the content is a bit toxic. For example, when exploring the map (which needs to advance the plot), instead of making a server-wide announcement, they privately chat with a certain player to help explore. This is very strange. I can only say that you should either change it or ignore it, because if the chat history is revealed, many players will quit the game, but overall it looks okay. It's cool to step into God's perspective. In my daily life, I look at it when I want to. Usually I skip it and just glance at it. There is still a hole that has not been filled. That Kunpeng didn't explain the cause and result after swallowing the book, right? I didn't see it. Update update! Overall it looks good!

This book is really good for the same genre, and there is no messy thing that will delay the heroine's career. It's very pretty👀👀👀👀. Just give it a try. I think it must be very good [laughing][laughing][laughing]

It's a good book, I like it very much. It has more than eighty chapters so far. The game was fun to write. The only problem is that there are fewer barrages in the back. There are some barrages left by book friends in the front to have fun and popular science. At the back, I don't know if they have been swallowed or something, and I can only see the barrages criticizing the titles (I know it's very harsh to say this, but I just feel like this. I went in excitedly to see the discussions about the plot, but everyone insisted on calling them "brother", which is really uncomfortable)

I watched it when I saw the recommendation on the list. It's quite interesting. With more than 70 chapters, it's just the beginning. I look forward to the follow-up. It's very fascinating. I just saw the updated part in a short time. The description of the game is super excellent. I feel that the scenes are described with great care. The writing is very graphic. I was excited when I watched it outside the screen, and my heart was beating a little fast🤣 I personally like the paragraphs describing the game () and I also gained a lot of science knowledge by the way. I hope that I can have more perspectives to appear in other tasks in the future.

The plot of the game is quite exciting, but there are too many clowns. I just want to watch the game, and those business wars really affect my mood when watching the game. . No more chasing, what a disgusting business war, just keep this book until it is finished.

I really like the feeling of watching the creation of a new world. It is obviously a familiar story, but in this narrative, in the efforts of the players to do something, and in the process of the evolution of events; there is a sense of immersion, a sense of substitution, grandness, and greatness. When I switched from Ancient Times to Three Kingdoms, I still couldn't switch over. I felt that the military camp where Qiqi was born was too gray, and the world suddenly changed from the beauty of mythology to the grayness of soldiers and civilians in the ancient setting. As the capital is moved to survive and fights are fought, more character illustrations and grievances are illuminated. In the gray background, fluttering flags are raised, and a long and muffled horn sound is heard. The people were struggling and hesitant, the undercurrent of the war was surging, and small frictions continued. As soon as the announcement of the crusade against Dong Zhuo came out, the air was filled with the tension of the coming storm... It was tied, but it was not a loss. At least I saw the dust settle in one night [laughs] Otherwise, I almost couldn't sleep. Although staying up for half the night is almost the same as not sleeping at all. Now players are waiting for Sister Jiang's update, and we are also waiting for a big update. Hungry, rice

It's very interesting and beyond my expectation. The plot mainly revolves around the game and the players. The heroine doesn't write much about her daily life and there's nothing trivial and bloody. I like this very much. The writing is also very good. The author has written the game, the prehistoric world view and the players' actions and reactions very well. It's very harmonious. After reading the introduction, besides this prehistoric game, there will be many other games. However, there are currently seventy or eighty chapters in Prehistoric and it seems that there are many plots. It seems that the author plans to write a long story. I am looking forward to it. I hope that I can keep writing in this style [Blow kiss]

The plot of the whole article is good, and it can be seen that the author is somewhat familiar with history. The writing is good and bad. Maybe I am listening to the book. I feel that I often hear repeated descriptions such as "speechless". The descriptions of the shock of players facing big scenes are almost all descriptions of being speechless. If the description of players' emotions apart from the game plot content can be improved, the viewing experience will be more comfortable.

My humble opinion: 9 points is definitely there! Very shocking! The layout is huge! The context is very clear, and the development history of Chinese civilization is presented. The author has strong writing skills and has a profound research on Chinese culture. On the subject of cultural self-confidence, this book is the best I have ever read! The author is absolutely pure history major! It has feelings, pictures, imagination, and details. It's a great book! (Random thoughts: Maybe the cultural sentiments are too shocking, and the picture descriptions are too shocking, which makes the character descriptions not clear. Before typing this paragraph, I thought hard and found that what impressed me most was the author's description of history and mythology.)

After reading all the updates so far, let me talk about the advantages first. The writing is excellent, the characters are three-dimensional and the plot is excellent. However, there are many and long descriptions of the game content. At present, the plot is repetitive, changing the soup without changing the medicine, but there is nothing I can do about it. Copying official documents is like this. , Otherwise there is no way to write [face covering] I think the best thing about this article is that buy one and get one free, interstellar➕prehistoric➕ancient times, this setting is really unique, the content is very interesting, although it is a bit boring after reading too much, but it does not hinder her good-lookingness at all

It's so pretty and classy! There are obviously many cute female characters hidden in this book, such as the soft Lin Qiqi, her warm-hearted roommate, Wang Yian, and Nuwa who created the world. They all have a strong sense of presence~ As for the Three Kingdoms chapter, there are mostly boys, because it needs to fit in with the real historical background. You can't force Cao Cao to be a little girl ( ◜‿◝ )♡And in the author's game, after players enter the game, regardless of whether they are male or female, they have certain positions. It depends on personal luck. But the author, I really like the prehistoric chapter and the Three Kingdoms chapter. When can I update it soon? I can't keep up with my eating speed. Could you please post your manuscript (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡, people don't read it enough, why don't you give it five stars? I'm afraid that you will be proud and delay my update speed, then I will lose a lot ෆ╹ .̮ ╹ෆ

I'm wondering how to praise this book. In fact, I have been interested in the subject of history since I was a child, and I have been amazed by the background stories of celebrities. Whether it is the stories of scattered mythological systems or the romantic affairs of historical figures, they are very interesting to listen to. The story I understand is fragmented after all. When I found the context of time in this story, I felt a sense of wonder. From playing a small character to watching the Three Kingdoms Struggle for Hegemony, that sense of powerlessness was driven by the historical process. Once again, I deeply experienced the simple and straightforward cruelty called "holding the emperor and commanding the princes". It gave me many different perspectives to see the entire historical story, from a novel story style, allowing me to understand these stories and I watched them with relish. Over the years, I feel more and more that I can't stand those slow things anymore. It's not that they have a problem, it's that I have some problems. The appearance of this book uses a novel angle to let me experience these slow things again, which makes me feel very happy. Thanks 💕

Actually, it's okay. I didn't see much of the words "men are more men" and "brothers" mentioned in the book review. Except for one or two sentences at the beginning, "brothers" seems to be replaced by "family members" later on. The male-female ratio in this book is actually quite balanced. If I have to say, there are more female characters, and the author doesn't. Is there such a thing as a rebellious girl? As you can see from this fourth game, she is essentially a female lead, but the female protagonist has less roles, but this is also good. You can read it as a story. You don't need to read other reviews. If you think this book is bad, you can read other female channels with the same theme. That is the real "male channel"

This book is the best novel of the same type I have ever read! The world line is complete, the player participation is high, and the scalp is numb! It is understandable that players regardless of gender should be addicted! Highly recommended!

It looks good, the writing is good, and the content is good. The first game, Poker and Mahjong, is a bit bland, but the second game is really good. The game is perfectly combined with the ancient times. Now I am writing about the Three Kingdoms, which is also great. I highly recommend it.

The content of the games is pretty good, but it feels like the store is too big and a bit laggy. So far, there are only three games that have been updated, and there are only three games including the happy card table. There are only so many games in The Great Desolation and Three Kingdoms. There are no other games in the story text. I guess it is a very long story. Also, there are too many plots about the black heroine, which makes it uncomfortable to watch.

The heroine travels through the interstellar world. An orphan. Together with his cousin, the two are dependent on each other. There is a holographic world in the interstellar world. Because of the cultural gap. The heroine uses the history and culture of ancient earth to make games. Start making your first money with the card game Poker Mahjong. Then participate in game competitions. Out of the prehistoric world game timeline game world.

The game designed here is really beautiful. Although it has been turned into game content, it completely tells the changes in the prehistoric period. It was such a shock to the soul. I suddenly discovered the charm of dust returning to dust and earth returning to earth. We came from the earth, and naturally we have to return to the earth. It's been a long time since I've seen a game originally created by the author that's so shocking.

It's very interesting. I read it in one go. I've always liked this type of writing. This is the first time I've read it on Tomato. The writing is not bad and it's very interesting. I hope we can read it to the end tomorrow! (Every time I look for articles, I can find articles that are less than a month old. Every time I look for articles, I have to wait for countless updates of this article. I am desperate)

It's awesome. It's a very shocking Chinese civilization article. It's not an old routine, it's very new, and the writing is not embarrassing.

Progress: 188 Regarding the famous scenes in the ancient game, I was so excited to watch every one of them. Whether it was Nuwa patching up the sky or Houyi shooting the sun, it was full of epic feeling. Yes, I only watched Honghuang. There is also a story about the Three Kingdoms that I didn't watch and skipped it. Overall it's pretty good, it would be better if the pace could be faster.

It looks good. I look forward to the content of the Three Kingdoms. There are too many things to fight, and it should be more interesting for players [eat melon]. However, the battle strength of the ancient world seems to be a bit broken. If you want to see more game authors, please update quickly. Don't wait any longer. [Asking for more updates] [Asking for more updates] [Hold it]

The writing is pretty good and very interesting, especially the second game [like] As for the third game, the heroine did not admit that it is history, but the Three Kingdoms is indeed history, alas, but it is difficult for the heroine to admit that there is a gap in civilization, and she feels powerless

Super Invincible is very good-looking. The first game was very good, but I didn't like the second game of Three Kingdoms very much. I hope to go there soon. The one in Underworld is good-looking. I have seen similar games.

It's very interesting. It's more than just a simple narration of the game. The plot of the game is very well described. I've been imagining that scene. "Prehistoric" I really want to play it myself. Although I'm not interested in this period of history of "Three Kingdoms", this game also gave me some additional understanding. I watched it for seven hours on the first day, and now I'm following the series. I hope the author will finish it, it's so good.