Naruto: Being Redeemed by Kushina and Starting to Plan Everything

I imagined an ending where the Kyuubi was plundered, and then Kushina was killed by people from Konoha. The protagonist jumped directly from the second magatama to the Mangekyo Sharingan, opened his own Sharingan Eye Technique, and then made the world feel the pain, creating a world with only Kushina [smile][smile][smile]

The writing is very nice, but can we have a few more harems? I personally prefer the harem [laughs evilly]

Gaga is good to watch, the plot moves quickly, the development is high-quality, and there are emotional lines. The only shortcoming is the timeline, but whether it is fan fiction or not, everyone has this problem, so don't use the normal timeline when watching it.

If you keep writing at this quality, it will be a good-looking fanfic. I hope you won't have any wood escape or reincarnation eyes in the future. You can get a Thousand Hands Physique to increase chakra, but don't turn on the plug-in too much, otherwise it will be meaningless. You can open a kaleidoscope and exchange it for the Eternal Eye through the system. It's good. After awakening the Mangekyo and having so many skills, you are already a Kage-level expert. After all, you have killed jounin randomly. How can you be an elite jounin? This wave will deduct big points.

I hope it's a good one with a single female protagonist, good luck to the author!

Let's put it this way, the author should not abandon the book midway again. Such good content is worth reading. Anyway, it suits my taste [learned] [like] [like] [like] [like] [eat melon] [eat melon]

It's okay, but the protagonist insists on finding other Jinchuuriki and I don't understand why. Originally, the heroine was not well-received by the villagers, and she didn't seem to have any other friends. The fact that she became a Jinchuriki and was not well-received by the villagers got rid of it. As for being careful about the Nine-Tails uprising, that's not the case later. With the Myriad Eyes opened, I am qualified to negotiate with the Kyuubi, and it is not just about fooling the Kyuubi through understanding the future. As for the system behind it, I'm afraid it can also increase the heroine's combat effectiveness. Having a Kyuubi basically only has advantages and no disadvantages.

The protagonist seems to be an anti-hero, and there is nothing toxic so far, except for the inaccurate timeline of some events, but the comic itself is not that rigorous, so fans don't have to force it.

It's good so far. I suggest that the descriptions of expressions during fights and dialogues be richer. I think the character portrayal can be improved. After reading more ⑦ points, I feel that the characterization of this book is a little better. I think it is the ⑦ point [face covering] and there are too many random intrusions, Demon Slayer: Kimetsu no Yaiba, I haven't seen this stuff, but I have seen related pictures. You can also create your own ninjutsu in the later period. Don't limit yourself to anime skills. So far, in general, it is safer to give four stars. But in Tomato, it is a rare good book. I don't have to read it now. After reading it, go and read something else. Some of the poisonous points can't be detected without reading carefully, but you can also taste them. Anyone who doesn't mind too much can give it a try. Demon Slayer and Pirates have entered it randomly, so I want to give it up. I feel that there are more intrusions later, too little.

I think it's very interesting. The protagonist has some tricks but not too much, and he actively shows his value for the sake of his wife. He doesn't hide it like other stories and makes me feel frustrated. There are no bugs in the logic, and the plot is quite interesting. At least it is different from other high-scoring Naruto stories so that I won't get tired of reading it. I don't understand why the score is so low. I hope the author can keep writing [please update]

Update soon, ehhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh.

The relationship with Kushina is well written. Come on, it's so good and I love watching it.

The writing is very good, Kushina has a single heroine, and there is no big problem. The main character is a relatively cold person, which is more in line with the character. He only treats people who are considered to be within his circle, such as Kushina, Orochimaru, and Kakashi, and will do anything to those outside the circle. Also, I feel that the points given for events are too few. For example, Obito was buried. First, the human body cost 500,000. What to do with the rest later? You can't just explode all at once in the later stages.

By the way, aren't the descendants of the two children of Old Man Six Paths Uchiha and Senju? The protagonist is a throwback to his ancestors by combining the blood of these two races. So the protagonist himself has the ability to evolve the Samsara Eye and does not need Hashirama cells at all. If you are not a senior Naruto fan, please don't criticize if you are wrong!

This article is the best one among the many Naruto fanfics I have read, and it is a rare masterpiece. There is no sense of inconsistency between the article and the original work, and the author puts forward unique insights into Konoha's political system. Five-star recommendation.

There is no problem at the moment, and I have seen Chapter 27. The emotional scene with Kushina is also very good. I hope it can be maintained and more appropriate. I also hope it will be a single female protagonist. The only drawback is that the update is too slow.

This book is good, but it seems to be limited by the author's imagination (Pig's Knuckle has the blood of Senju and Uchiha) He hates Uchiha and Konoha, so he doesn't do any good to Uchiha or even kills them. However, I didn't see his actions against any Senju clan, and judging from Chapter 50 of the finale, the author knows the Ichikiki himself, and he has never revealed that Pig's Knuckle knows what the future will look like, so there is no need to feel strange to them~_~

I once read the comment section, but there were a lot of bad reviews, so I didn't read it. However, there were always good recommendations, so I gave it a try. Well, to be honest, in general, I felt it was okay. After all, there are always people who will pick and choose any perfect book. The system here is really impressive. It can only be said that there are gaps between the systems. The weak system strength is a hindrance to the protagonist. Otherwise, Senju Uchiha must have become a god long ago, but it is actually meaningless to see too much of premature invincibility. , I have expectations for growing up slowly. I can only say that the requirements of readers are different, and the time point is also a bit different from the original work. But after all, it is a novel, and some changes are normal. The hero sacrifices other people's hearts for his wife. It's understandable. It doesn't matter whether I like Kushina or not. Everyone has their own preferences. Gentleness is only given to those around you. Help those geniuses who have been tricked by Konoha. Fight against Konoha F4. Sometimes it really relieves your anger. I hope it doesn't end~

I have finished reading it now and am waiting for the update. The whole book is full of small twists and turns, but the big ones are nothing. Moreover, some book friends have noticed that the author wants to finish the book quickly. The final plot feels too fast. The author of the updated chapter does not describe the grand view of the war. It always gives me a feeling of a battle involving dozens of people or one or two hundred people [face covering] From the moment Minato wakes up, it gives me a feeling of chaos. The protagonist lets the original NPC know the causes and consequences of the war. Obito and Nagato clear their names in advance, and Madara becomes a ghost. If you don't mind the plot of the original work, you can watch it. Although it is not particularly good material, it is not objectionable. Those who are not interested in reading can give it a try [cover face][cover face][cover face][OK] After reading it, the ending is a bit confusing...

Compared to Namikaze Minato, the protagonist is a selfish, cold and hypocritical person, but also kind and ideal to the extreme. Chapter 108 I really can't understand what I'm doing, it's so stupid

This type of book is quite interesting, and the characters are quite good. I have a few personal opinions. 1. The story is a bit slow, but it is inevitable due to system reasons. But I still hope it can be improved to speed up the progress of the plot a little, and this kind of long story is also very comfortable to read. 2. The protagonist is not strong enough. Currently, the protagonist is the pinnacle of the ninja world (except for the monk). The main character is the blood of the Senju and Uchiha. So why can't he use Wood Release? The blood of the Senju seems to be useless. There are many six levels in the later period. It is very troublesome for the protagonist to participate in the promotion of strength. The Senju clan has Yang chakra and the Uchiha clan has Yin chakra. These two are also a way to develop strength. It is only four or five years since the Fourth Ninja World War. Of course, how to write it is the author's business. I am looking forward to the future development.

The part about cutting off the limbs is a bit romantic, but overall it's okay so far. I hope to reduce this kind of plot as much as possible in the future. It feels like there is nothing else except Kushina.

[Remind the host that if the host does not have the prerequisites for the purchased ability, the witness points spent will be increased five times. Every time a major event is witnessed, the system will randomly provide three rewards for the host to choose one. The system's random rewards are not limited to the ninja world but do not exceed the ninja world. ] So this setting is gone?

The dark version of Naruto is indeed a rare protagonist in fan fiction who does not deal with the Naruto faction and the Uchiha family at the same time, but it is indeed reasonable. For this deformed world, opposition is not absolute, but absolutely not opposition.

A very good Naruto fanfic. Naruto and Sasuke have the most normal outlook. The writing is very good. The tragedy that the protagonist failed to prevent before he grew up is very real. Highly recommended.

I've read Chapter 270, and there's nothing too bad about it. It's just that the author sometimes types the names of characters wrong, and the process of the protagonist becoming stronger is a little blurry. Overall, this book is one of the few good books written by Naruto fans.

Why did it drop to 8.2 Points? I must give it a thumbs up for such a beautiful Naruto story. Whether it's the novelty of the protagonist's character or the storyline, every step is well-founded. It's not an invincible story, but it's also very interesting to become invincible by relying on oneself.

The protagonist has a clear distinction between love and hate. If he is not a virgin, he will blow it up anyway! The only shortcoming of this book is that it is updated too slowly, only two chapters in one day! Hurry up and update 30 chapters a day

The ending is a bit rushed. There is actually room for control in the follow-up. I would rate it 9.5. I think the male protagonist's participation in the later period is a little less. There should be more witness points in the later period. He can have power beyond Otsutsuki. It would be better if some permission settings are added. The later period will be a bit messy, but overall it is very satisfying. It is very comfortable to watch, especially in the early part of the male protagonist's betrayal and rebellion against Konoha. Every character is vivid, especially Minato's change.

It's pretty good for me at the moment [sending heartfelt wishes] Come on [like]