Famous Teacher Yue Buqun: as My Apprentice Becomes Stronger, so Do I.

Many people look at Lao Yue with contempt. In fact, Lao Yue has done the best he can in his position. The author is very good, reinterpreting the new Lao Yue and performing a different Huashan School.

It's rare for a fan to understand the relationship between the original work and the original work clearly, even if there are occasional flaws, the faults cannot be concealed! The author is attentive! Feng Qingyang's loneliness is a bit understated, and his martial arts skills are also a bit understated! Just my personal opinion, good luck to the author!

If you read it carefully, the author really put his heart into writing it. There are many people who have not read the original work and criticize the author. I read it carefully and feel that what the author wrote does make some sense. Come on. Before, I always thought that Linghu Chong was the bad guy and Yue Buqun was the good guy. Thank you to the author for his seriousness and rigor.

Yue Qun, the master of all realms, Yue Lingshan, the wife of all realms

The writing is very good, not mindless, and it is not a big deal if you have a golden finger.

Very well written! Nowadays, there are not many Swordsman fans who can write based on the characters of the original novels, or even none at all!

I feel that Yue Buqun in Swordsman is the good guy, and Linghu Chong is not a good guy at all. He is gone.

The author has indeed read the original work, instead of writing it after reading a few fan TV series

To be honest, among the fan fiction of Swordsman, this book is considered to be food and fodder. The plot is solid, the words are meaningful, the description of the characters is not personal, and the original work is respected. The shortcomings are that there are few descriptions of the protagonist, the conflicts are weak, and the excitement is obscure. Only the ending explodes. It makes people feel that although the book is eloquent and hundreds of thousands of words, the structure is more like a short martial arts novel. However, the flaws do not outweigh the flaws. This book is truly a masterpiece among Jin Yong's world-traveling novels and is highly recommended.

The book is quite good, but some people in the comment area talked about Linghu Chong and Yue Buqun. I found that some people not only haven't read the original novel, but haven't even watched the TV series, so they are criticizing it. After reading a few marketing accounts, they just said righteously about the original work. I really don't know where they are, what a double standard.

The writing is very good. Huashan Yue Buqun has modern thinking and naturally no longer sticks to the rules. With the blessing of the system and the joining of a generation of swordsman Feng Qingyang, the unparalleled Huashan sect has naturally been successfully achieved. However, it ended too quickly. Before he could enjoy it, he was already invincible.

It's okay, but the system is not very powerful. Also, where is your group chat? Even if not, can you focus on cultivating talents? The key, key, key, can you go there early? My sister's baby is already so old. Damn, Wei Wu's legacy is not so arrogant.

The writing is really good. Shaolin and Wudang should be positioned like this. There are few flaws in the whole book, and the plot is also very rigorous. The final battle is also well arranged.

It reveals the intricate interests of Jianghu. In this circle of interests, there are too many people who have no choice. When Yue Buqun relied on his golden finger to make Linghu Chong, the young Bai of Jianghu, return to his rightful place, this Jianghu reveals a bloody story from another aspect.

This is the best Xiaoao fan I've ever seen. Please give it a try and update it.

A strange flower among the cookie-cutter Xiaoao fans (a strange flower in a complimentary sense)

[Laughing] The characteristic of Tomato author, stopping updates for no reason [laughing]

I personally don't like the original version of The Swordsman, because The Swordsman. . . On the contrary, I prefer Tianlong, because I like it a lot, leave a lot of blank space, and read a lot of related fanfics. I read this Xiaoao fanfic this time. At least it feels good so far. The author has read the original work and has his own ideas. The writing is not bad. I feel that it can be played at the starting point. I was pleasantly surprised to see it on Tomato

Not bad, but too single

Not bad, not mindless

It's not even long at once. It's not even long at what time and half. It's not full at what time and half. It's not full at what time.

The writing was okay, but it seemed like there was more space describing the apprentice. So I can't give it five stars, and it's not enough to be cool.

Except for some inconsequential or poorly written supporting characters that sometimes occupy several chapters in a row and are boring, the overall story is pretty good, and I still have some unfinished thoughts after reading it.

The overall effect is great. It shouldn't be only 6.5 Points. It's just that the feeling of fun could be increased.

Five stars, overall good, at least there is no plot that insults IQ.

Yue Buqun is basically not included in the last half of the group drama, and it is only in the finale.

Five-star praise. Although the description of martial arts is not good, the plot logic is well described. Well written and full of details. It's a pity that the ending is poorly written and unfinished.

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Good looking, recommended👍

I'm looking at the protagonist