HP: Crescent Eyes and Moon Face

It's rare to see a book written about Lupine. Although the rating was not high, I still clicked on it and read it. In fact, this is a very high quality book among HP fans. Not only does it have a good grasp of the characters, but it is also one of the best among fan authors in terms of writing style and research. You can see very vivid family members, and the emotional descriptions are very delicate (not just love, but also friendship and family). Another book about Snape is also quite good, and I recommend it to everyone. Perhaps the biggest shortcoming of Tomato is that it is too long, but it is not the author's original sin at all to be able to bear the energy to write a long work.

I can't wait to give it 10 stars. This is an author who has really read the original work, understands it very well, and loves this world. The heroine Nina has a very distinct personality, all the characters are very close to the original work, the story is very coherent and complete, the plot setting is very important, the plot dialogue is also very funny, there are many tears, and it meets all my expectations for a family story. And it really doesn't discredit or whitewash any character. James, the school bully, Peter's cowardice, and Severus' obsession can all be reasonably felt without any conflict. I also like this book about the trial of Voldemort the most. The first book I read did not defeat Voldemort, but made everyone face their fears and let him accept trial and death from the perspective of a sinner. The happy ending, the novel setting of the heroine, the distinctive and multi-faceted character settings, the funny writing, and the rigorous plot finally made this book shine in the world I love.

The author is really professional! ! ! I enjoyed reading the details. Basically every chapter has annotations. You can also learn some unpopular HP knowledge while reading the book. I like Nina very much! It's very real, it doesn't have the Mary Sue heartthrob setting (although I also like to read it), and the portrayal of other characters is also very good, without OOC. In addition, this book is really super fat, with more than 1,000 chapters... I have never read a HP fanfic with so many chapters, and it will probably take a long time to finish! I hope the author will insist on writing T T I will faint if this book is gone

It's a very interesting and reductive article ~ Childhood sweethearts' sour love (?) Each character is well described. It should be a transferred article. The quality is particularly high.

Before the postgraduate entrance examination, I diligently caught up to Chapter 866 in the storybook. I found out here yesterday that I caught up today. No matter how much you save, it will never be enough. Let's review the Potions Professor first. The author is one of my favorite HP authors, almost in the top 3 of all platforms. He has a good grasp of the restoration of the character's personality, and the deduction of the situation has flaws but is overall reasonable. The most valuable thing is that he has dug deeply into the details of the original work and restored scenes that are very original. This is the highest praise for fan fiction from me. The author's writing is characterized by being delicate and true, so the pace may be a little slow. For example, this book has more than a thousand chapters and spans seven years at Hogwarts. If you can immerse yourself in it, you can enjoy the reading experience of being present.

It's so good, I finally came across a story about Remus [I almost cried] Will Remus have a happy ending this time?

Nice! ! I have never seen anything about Remy on Tomato. Many of them are heartthrobs🥹🥹And this one is particularly fat. I hope that Remy and little Nina will be together forever🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹

The third book is written by a great author! I still remember the plots of the first two books. They are really very good. In fact, I am still looking forward to the next book written by my wife. I really want to know if there will be stories about Tom or Sirius hahahaha One thing I am very happy about is finishing a novel I love.

The characters have distinct personalities, and the descriptions of what different characters will do and what they say are very accurate. The plot is compact, full of details, and there are tears and laughter. For example, the description of the heroine participating in the Quidditch match made me excited. When the heroine won, I was really happy for her, and there was a smile on my face unconsciously, as if I was also celebrating her there. Many settings follow the original work, and will be marked at the end of the article, and the private settings will also be explained. Even the private settings are set as close to the original work as possible. I really love this kind of article. After reading this novel, I can't read other fan fiction at all. I wait for updates every day. I don't understand the low rating. It's really good-looking, super good-looking [Like][Like][Like]

A truly beautiful novel with an ups and downs plot, rich characters, beautiful writing, and detailed characterization. There are no straightforward formulas for refreshing writing, and it will not be as addictive as industrial saccharine. After eating it, you will feel that it is nutritious and the same. But it's also very refreshing. It's refreshing because I won't see weird speeches that make people uncomfortable. It's because of the rigorous logic and interlocking plots. It's because I can truly imagine such living characters and a real small world through the words. It's also because it reasonably makes up for those regrets. It's because the author doesn't make insignificant sacrifices for the so-called drama... It's just right and solid. This is my biggest feeling about this book. It is very suitable for readers who are tired of reading routine and entertaining articles and want to seriously appreciate the text. Ps: Personally, I think the real score should be at least 9.1. It's a matter of opinion. Tomato's rating is more similar to popularity or popularity. Of course there are good works in highly popular ones, but many times when you open the ratings and find that it's not to your taste, you're really annoyed. Literary wasteland, so I understand how valuable a truly good story is. I have read all the books from the potion supplier, and every book is beautiful! ! Looking forward to seeing you in the next book. Best wishes!

The author's writing is very good, and there are no cheats to make people laugh. The protagonist is a flesh-and-blood person, a strong and brave Gryffindor warrior. I have read the other two books as well. It started with potions, and then went to the story book to catch up on Malfoy and the previous content of this book. I recently discovered that Tomato also has this book. Each book is beautiful, and each protagonist has his or her own unique charm. The fight with Voldemort was so exciting! I love watching Nina fight. The duel competition is also great to watch. Looking forward to the following plot, come on, author!

The author is really awesome! This is the third book I have read. It has a completely different heroine and a completely different plot direction, including the way Voldemort died (except for the original plot). It is completely consistent with the details of the original setting. Originally I didn't like stories about relatives, but out of trust in the author I still tolerated the plot about the school bullies in the early stage. As expected, it became more and more interesting as it was written, and it unsurprisingly changed many people's be. There is no if line extra in this article. I feel that Lupine is indeed Nina's only solution, but it would be great if there were more sweet daily moments of getting along after the war. I can't get enough [laughing and crying]

It's really good to read... I'm fed up with the golden-fingered Mary Sues in other books, and I can't stand the inexplicable "snake yard position" and unlimited smearing of the Marauders, Lily and others in other books. This is a rare HP original female fanfic that not only makes up for the regrets of the original work, but also conforms to the original work, has detailed research, smooth language expression, and vivid and three-dimensional character depictions. The relationship between Lemmy and Nina is very touching, and the friendship between the six people is also very valuable... It's great to read.

It's absolutely fine. The author is so rigorous and sophisticated. It's really refreshing. I like the heroine's character. I really want to have a hearty chat with the author about the seven Harry Potter books for three days and three nights. It's been twelve years. From the children of Harry Potter to the parent generation to the stories of Beedle the Bard and even the origins and habits of various magical animals, I know everything about them. Why is there no course in the university that studies Harry Potter? People all over the world should read Harry Potter. J. K. Rowling should be the president of the world. And people who have never read the book and have only watched the HP series of movies made by David Coco, a person pretending to be a professional director, and who buy a magic wand to take pictures in the Universal Park, are not allowed to say that they are fans of Harry Potter.

It's very interesting, but I almost missed it because of the ratings. The character's personality, speech, tone, details and movements are all restored and very precise. Not only are the characters rigorous, but the plot is also rigorous. There is no cheating just because the protagonist is a private character, nor is the protagonist invincible. He is flesh and blood and very vivid. There is absolutely no separation from the character and plot just because one person is arranged. If you don't see the sequel, you would even suspect that the author would write out everything that was fatal in the original work. It is so rigorous that it can be read as a prequel and encyclopedia of the original work. It also carefully indicates which ones are official and which are private. The private settings are also completely reasonable. They are calculated based on the official settings and are not randomly set. All in all, it's very, very beautiful! The rating is really low! If I keep writing the extras, I can keep reading [crying] It's really beautiful! !

I don't understand why this book has such a low rating on Tomato. The teacher's writing is really good and the details are very exquisite. The heroine's image is very three-dimensional and she is not shaped into the stereotype of Gryffindor. The original characters are not OOC. The description of some plots is very delicate. Just the scene where Nina was bitten at the beginning made me cry [crying] The emotional line is also very well described. I was really stumped when I saw Sirius' emotional line towards the heroine, but I still side with Remus [eating melon] It's really romantic to see Nina transform the place with fluorescent lights, Nina is so good at it [Adoration] All in all, I highly recommend it. Don't be put off by the ratings. The writing is really good. If you like Sirius, you can search for the teacher's name on the Huaben Novel app. The teacher has published a novel in which Sirius is the male protagonist. Anyway, I've already read it [I understand]

This is a fanfic that is very detailed and exquisite. Some settings that were not directly written in the original work are also thoughtfully posted at the end of the chapters. The author is very attentive (it feels like he is more attentive than the potion buyer next door). Since I'm not very interested in Quidditch, I skipped through it. My current favorite is the scene before and after Sirius leads Snape to the Shrieking Shack. He is about to successfully see a bright future for Nina, but this bubble wall is still shattered overnight, and she has to face many struggling choices at once. Ps: Although I hate Peter in the original book, after reading it, I still hope that he will be a real Gryffindor (I always have the illusion that I am about to get lunch → →

Fine chaff! ! Absolutely fine chaff! ! ! The author's writing style is very good, and his emotional descriptions are very delicate. He is a breath of fresh air among a group of brainless foreign persimmons! ! The description of emotions progresses slowly like a stream of water, unlike those mindless spoilers who fall in love with the heroine at every turn. Moreover, the characters described by the author are very few OOC, and they basically fit the original work. Many of the things described are verified, and he can write notes, which is a bonus! ! Most of the whole book is well-founded and coherent, and it is definitely detailed enough. Maybe there are fewer people recommending Moon Face CP and not many people read it, so the rating is relatively low, but I think this book is definitely worth 9.0 Or above.

The charm of fan fiction is that you can see that everyone is doing well, and everyone's bad fate has been changed, but it does not deviate from the original work, and there is no OOC character design. The quality of all the literature in Milk Tea is extremely high. The pro-era story in this article is very touching. I feel astringent after reading it. Everyone is working hard for a better future. Each character has not departed from the original work. From the environment in which they grew up, no one's character is perfect, but they all have special shining points. After entering their growth environment, we can also understand the bad aspects of their characters. I will always love the efforts and dedication of my parents. The little Harry here will be a little baby who will grow up surrounded by love! Support milk tea greatly [sending heartfelt messages]

This book is great! It's really beautiful! Well, especially the author's level of care and rigor is definitely the most rigorous HP I've ever seen. In addition! Everyone's character design is very suitable, and based on the character's personality, the interaction and plot have led to a completely different but extremely reasonable direction from the original work. Of course, more plot about Dumbledore's line is not fully developed, but that may also be too lengthy. And what surprised me the most was that Peter didn't clean up his act harshly, because he was a little guy who was prone to internal friction, looked a little timid, easily led by others, and didn't have such great looks. But because of some details, he also had a point of support and something very reasonable for him to stick to, which prevented him from doing the same thing as in the original work. I had a lot of regrets, and those regrets in the original novel gave me some comfort. It's great that everyone can seek benevolence and receive benevolence, and basically get relatively fair results. At least I think Voldemort's ending is amazing. I never expected it, but it feels very sacred and solemn, and worthy of this gangster.

I don't know why the rating is so low. In fact, I wanted to give it five stars after watching a third of it, but in order to write a review that is more in line with this article, I chose to give it a rating after reading it. I can say that after reading this HP derivative book, I will stop looking for HP books for half a year. This book is so well written. It almost perfectly presents the lives and struggles of my parents. The author is the most meticulous about the original text I have ever seen. Basically, the author will indicate the source of every derived knowledge point in the text. It also allowed me to do a lot of checking and filling in the gaps in the HP world, and I learned a lot about the settings I had never understood before! It could totally be an original "Harry Potter" book. I really like Nina as the original heroine. I have read three HP novels that the author has put on Tomato, and Nina is my favorite. With flesh and blood, he is completely a little sun! Her simple heart and clear way of thinking have infected many people. She is a complete Gryffindor [crying] strong, brave, kind, and full of justice. She also has her own temper, which is very vivid, as if she really exists! With such a rich character set of the heroine, the author's description of the other characters of the Predator is what I most agree with about this book. There is no "whitewashing" of James and Sirius, it completely fits the original character design, and it can be said that there is no OOC! And Lily, the little angel [crying] [crying] [crying] The friendship between girls is also very beautiful, and Nina has also been speaking out for feminism! James and Lily are really charming, and the author also gave Harry the happy family he deserves at the end, the best parents in the world! The logic is very smooth, and you will just feel that it should develop like this. However, I am a little "dissatisfied" that after graduation is not exciting enough, the length can actually be longer, and the elimination of the Horcrux is a bit too easy. Compared with the longer campus life in the previous article, the latter part is simply not enough to watch. Campus life is actually a bit delayed. I always lose concentration when watching it, and I watched it for many days. But after graduation, I stayed up two nights to finish reading it. It was really exciting! ! ! Especially the Auror Death Eaters, the author's description of Order of the Phoenix and Voldemort's battle is very visual, and the meaning is endless. . My "dissatisfaction" is simply that I haven't read enough [crying] I hope the author can publish more articles. I will rush to support as soon as possible. The writing style is really good! One more thing, Regulus's new policy in the end really gave me a vision of a prosperous wizarding world, where magic never ends and Hogwarts will always be there.

It's great, it's quoted like crazy, almost every chapter has the original text or Rowling's manuscript to prove it, and even the Muggle stuff will be proven by history, it's so touching, I was so breathless when I read it before the fourth grade, moon face, you should enjoy this! Later I felt like he was like this. Loved everything about this book!

The story line is clear and complete, the heroine's three-dimensional character is dazzling, and the original characters are vivid and charming. The heroine Nina is a child who truly grows up step by step and becomes a flesh-and-blood child. I am so honored to be able to read such an awesome book for free. The best thing is the author's research, which is so detailed that I can't imagine how much effort it took. What impresses me even more is the changes made by the author. The author sometimes explains the development of the plot, and occasionally I see sentences like: "I arranged for xx to happen" at the end of the article. This feeling is so wonderful, like a soft-hearted, hard-working, little god. She threads the thread in the original story, connects all the nodes leading to happiness, and finally raises her little magic wand: "I declare that all this story has a happy ending."

This is not a time-travel novel, and there is basically no change in the history of the pro-era. However, the author vividly describes the images of the pro-era people. There is almost a certain amount of textual research behind each picture, like a reference. Based on a few strokes and other references from the original Harry Potter books, James, Sirius, Lupine, Peter Pettigrew, Snape, and Lily all appear vividly in this book. If it weren't for the female protagonist, this would almost be an interesting prequel to Harry Potter. The author also put a lot of effort into describing the characters' inner thoughts. The article provides a profound analysis of why James and Sirius bullied Severus, why Lupine and Wormtail became friends with them, why the three treated Pettigrew differently, and so on. There are also several people who describe the heroine's emotional journey very well. Very consistent with the images of these characters in the original Harry Potter books. Of course, under the influence of the heroine, although he did not predict the plot, Dumbledore discovered the Horcrux in advance by a strange combination of circumstances and defeated Voldemort before Harry Potter was born.

This is my third book and I have read it countless times. The author writes with great care, she must be a wife who loves HP. Professional and rigorous, the writing style is also very good, and not OOC at all. I hope everyone has a better ending in this movie and Wormtail doesn't rebel. It's all fan fiction, don't have any more regrets! Also, can you ask for a sequel to the parallel world of Sirius x Nina~

Ah, I'm so glad I finished this book. At first, I liked The Potion Buyer Next Door. This book has been on my bookshelf for a long time, but I was intimidated by the word count and didn't start reading it quickly. Fortunately, I read this book, it is worth it. The characters are very rich, and everyone has both advantages and disadvantages. In the early stage, when Remus kept avoiding him, I felt sick to my stomach, but at the same time I was touched by their friendship. Fortunately, I pushed through. In almost half of the places, the tripartite people finally figured it out. The author handles the bullying and brave sides of the hijackers very well. There are many tears in the plot of the girls' conflicts and bonds. Voldemort is not a big brainless monster. The situation is constantly escalating, and the comrades of the Order of the Phoenix have been working hard. Nice way to deal with it in the end! It's not a cool article, but everything falls into place.

This large text is very beautiful, and each character is described in detail. Nina is a lively and cheerful straight-ball player, and Remus is gentle and considerate. Of course, both of them have shortcomings, but they are the most suitable pair for each other. Only the readers know that almost half of the time before them, the younger sister was in and out of Remus. He was also very reluctant but could not break through the psychological barrier. Later it was said that it was pure sweetness. Lily is also a very, very good friend, and almost all the beautiful images of women can be found in her. James has many shortcomings but is willing to change for the sake of friends and lovers, and he has never judged people based on their blood, so Lily finds his advantages and is willing to be with him. This pairing can be regarded as another kind of pride and prejudice. Sirius is still arrogant on the inside. As a friend, he is very good, but even friends are divided into levels. She also has very attractive qualities, but she is just not suitable for her sister. If they are really together, it will be Remus's nightmare. In this book, Peter also changed from a timid little follower to a real friend, and made a lot of contributions to the small group. Of course, because of the reconciliation between his sister and Remus, although Sirius still looked down on him most of the time, he must have recognized this friend mentally. Mary is the image of most ordinary girls. She may be jealous of her friends, be afraid of some things, still keep secrets, and still apologize when she thinks about it. Of course, Nina and Lily don't care about these things, so they are still good friends. Everyone turned out to be good, very good works, and I stayed up late for three days to finish them.

It's so beautiful, the writing is very smooth, the characters are not OOC, and the details of the plot are very rigorous and elegant. . I really want to binge but I'm afraid of reading too fast! Fortunately, the author is very diligent in updating. I am really grateful for the fact that I can always read updates.

It is an excellent work among fans. The plot is fluent and smooth, the author has good research and follows the original facts, the writing style is not immature, the content is full and vivid, the daily plot is very cute, and the overall look and feel is comfortable. Remus is a very shy and avoidant person, and the portrayal in this book is completely consistent with his character. The plot is slow but not procrastinating, and the content is well researched. What can I say about the heroine set by the author? After all, most fandoms have two purposes: to vote for a favorite character and to change the plot to realize the dream. This belongs to both. I think the heroine was originally born to be a popular character, and the setting of a werewolf has no moral issues, and there is no need to go online; like most romances, there is the "obsessed male partner" Sirius, and this part of the plot is generally handled (however, Remus has always avoided Dora in the original work. From the perspective of the character, the author's arrangement is very reasonable, but it will be boring for readers).

Well written [crying] [crying] [crying] I have read all the HP articles of Milk Tea Teacher and enjoyed them [crying]