Fighting Double Pamish: Encounter in Another World

Come on, grasp the rhythm, and lay out a few more chapters before shouting slogans, instead of "for Liv" and "March to Hell" very quickly. Describe more big scenes and the determination of the commander. The details can be better. I look forward to the next update.

Among the Zhanshuang fanfics that don't have many tomatoes, the quality can be said to be the best. I think the speech, plot, macro and detailed description are all very good. Maybe the author has a better understanding of politics and history. I can only say that he is worthy of being a good leader in the new era with comprehensive development of morality (morality), art (art) and intelligence (intelligence) [blowing kiss] But should I say it or not, can it be done faster? [Anger] I can't see enough. Also, can anyone help me, this cute new chief, who is over level 90 and doesn't understand anything [face covering] Finally, I hope the author will update it well and continue to work hard to make this book bigger and stronger [shy] (The author replies to me) Chirp Mi Chir Mi

It's so nice [laughing] There are really few articles about Zhan Shuang, I hope the author can write more

Now that I have read Chapter 27, I would like to express my opinion. First of all, coming from the neighborhood, I feel that this setting is quite good. The author should want to follow the flow of land reclamation and farming in another world. Secondly, the overall level of this book is above the average level of Tomato. If the author is writing a book for the first time, I can only say that it is definitely pretty good. Then, there are some shortcomings that I personally think. First, there is too little description of the environment in the different world and lacks a "sense of world"; Second, there are few psychological descriptions of the structure, which cannot reflect the characters in a profound and three-dimensional way, and the language of the structure is mostly derived from the "stereotype" of Zhan Shuangzhong, lacking the "breath of life", which makes people feel a bit fragmented; Third, the transitions in some places are too abrupt and the connection is not natural enough, but this is normal and 99% of Tomato books cannot do this. The above is just my humble opinion. Finally, I want to say The echo is number one in the world! [Sinister smile]

After reading this book, what do you think? There is a feeling of comfort like using Fiji clams and the surprise of eating sweets when eating Akaashi

Although the unfolding of the plot is a bit magical, it is unexpectedly watchable. It may be a bit annoying for some demanding old bookworms, but as a small category of Zhanshuang fandom, it is really watchable! Come on, author, it's not easy to find a worthy warrior, don't let down our expectations! (The more you write, the more gifts you will get.) It's really pretty~

I finished reading it in one go. It was not enough. I got to chapter 23. I feel like this book could be called "About Me Fighting Doubles in World War II" [Thoughts]. If nothing else, the author's writing style is very good. I give it five stars.

Battle Double is great~ The characters are also well drawn, but crushing them in a low-level civilization in a different world seems to be uninteresting (-1🌟). I look forward to returning to the Dual World Gossamer Kurono and Konghua Pest in the future.

Take a closer look at the good Zhanshuang fanfics, but they are not friendly to newcomers, and they are not very attractive to some Zhanshuang players who want to understand the changes in the plot of Zhanshuang. The reason why it is easy for fans to get into the game is because the world view is familiar and similar to the game. In this case, because it only brings characters, it makes it difficult to watch in this new world view if you are not very good at cooking and fighting with two characters. The most important thing is that for fans, the familiar world view is the reason for quickly getting into the game. After all, it is Tomato. For something as profound as shaping a new worldview, it is still classified as a fan, so it is inevitable that there will be few people.

Full marks, please keep writing, this is the expectation of countless chiefs! May every son of humanity who returns to earth be safe! ! ! [Praise]

It's Zhanshuang, okay, okay. Five stars, 🍅There are really too few Zhan Shuangshu, this is either very poisonous or full of stars [eating melon]

Of all the Tomato Wars double-texts I have read, this one is the second one. No one dares to say it is the first one. It is very good in all aspects. The only drawback is that the Thai Marubi and the plot progress are a bit slow. There is really nothing wrong with the rest. If it can successfully achieve the chapters and production that a normal novel should have, and in this way, it should be able to get a 9.0 Rating. Here I wish the author to reach a rating of 9.0 Or high as soon as possible! It was very good, but it ended so suddenly that I couldn't stand it. Overall, the protagonist is clear-headed and won't do very smart things. The only annoying thing is that the book is too short. Assuming that he can write more than 300 pictures, the score is at least 9 points. How to say it? It's not an exaggeration to say that he is the true god of the double realm. It's a pity. I think it ends too early. If it is written again, the author may not be able to write it. But I feel that Wang Qi is still too early. , If I can write more than 300 photos, I should be able to get a rating of 9 1. What a pity [crying][crying][crying] The above paragraph was said in 24 years, and this paragraph was said in 25 years. It's been 25 years, and it's still not okay? I still want to see it! Such sober-minded novels are really rare. To be honest, it's a pity that they make people laugh so much. If I could have written a few more, I should have won 80 and 90. Deduct one to revive the author [crying][crying][crying]

I gave the previous chapters 5 stars because I felt like I could get 5 stars after reading it. The following chapters are given 5 stars because the full score is only 5 stars. Words can convey sonorous and powerful emotions, but this magnificent emotion cannot be summarized in words [crying]

It's so beautiful. I'd like to give it a thumbs up. I hope the author won't stop.

Generally speaking, the passing line is higher. Because the characters are created by the same author, we only consider whether there is a character collapse. So far, we have not found any. Moreover, the change in the character's stance is not abrupt and is quite normal.

It's rare to see a good-quality story about two combatants. The overall look and feel is good. No poisonous points are found, and the character design is not broken. It's just that the number of words is too few at the moment and I'm not really enjoying reading it. But I'm not sure whether it will break down in the future. I'll wait and see.

I like the plot very much, and the protagonist's character is very suitable. I don't want to be moved and motivated by myself after losing it, and desperately say that I can't do anything. I also think of Mei Yi's words, "Compared to this world, you (you) are more important."

The protagonist is either angry or on the way to being angry [laughing and crying]

Will Shabier and Corredor be guest stars? [Learned][Learned][Learned] At first I thought it was the Hammer version of Zhanshuang, but as I looked further I realized it was the Bone King version [face covering]. The protagonist is very cautious and every step is carefully planned. The strength of the protagonist team is far superior to the natives. His subordinates and teammates are extremely loyal to the protagonist. The protagonist is wholehearted to his teammates and is absolutely ruthless towards the enemy. The only difference is probably that one Tutu is human and the other Tutu is non-human [laughing and crying]. The plot has all the interesting points [like]

Just because this book promotes such great ideas in a different world, I give it a five-star rating. Author, I think highly of you [Like]

Zhanshuang is already relatively niche, and there are even fewer fans. It is often said in the Zhanshuang circle that Zhanshuang is good at everything but not fun. Indeed, but I think the plot of Zhan Shuang is remarkable in the second game. But KL just shoots out knives when he has nothing to do, which makes people look very depressed. Although the chief is good, his personal weakness and indecisiveness, coupled with his sense of responsibility for the fate of mankind, also destined that the structures around him will not have smooth sailing. I only want to save the earth and regain it, but who will save the people around me? The author has greatly filled this gap in my heart. He is not a virgin, not indecisive, and focuses on his companions. He was willing to give everything he had for them, but at the same time he did not lose the brilliance of his former chief who was uniquely human. Not only that, the author also did what the commanders have always wanted to do but couldn't: escape from Konghua's control. After Xiaolu's transformation into a butterfly, I felt really uncomfortable. I believe the commanders also felt the same. After thirty years of hard work and overcoming all difficulties and obstacles, Xiaolu walked out of the Tower of Diversity, but did not wait for the morning light and fell into the commander's arms wearing her new clothes (let's not talk about winning the resurrection match later). This is torture for Xiaolu, the commander, and us in front of the screen, but the author makes up for this regret. Xiaolu did not sacrifice her life for the fate of mankind, but became Lucia who belongs to the commander alone. This makes me feel very comfortable as a chef, hahaha. I still hope that the author will continue to write more. Zhanshuang doesn't have much traffic, and I can't force it. I will always support it. Finally, I want to ask, is there a good brother in the book club group who can post it?

I'm looking forward to the following plot, and even more looking forward to what will happen to the protagonist and the constructs in the future. By the way, let me ask again, it seems that this should be the adventure of the protagonist and the constructs at the same time [smile] [please update]

I've heard about Zhan Shuang for a long time but haven't played it yet. I got into it after reading this book. The Crimson Prisoner is so handsome [Admiration] The most important thing is that the protagonist is treated really well [Shy]

I just want to know if the body can fall in love? [Laughing evilly] Can we kiss? Can it be done? Can I write these? [Sinister smile]

It's not easy to see the better Zhan Shuangwen. The plot is relatively novel. It breaks away from the plot view of the Zhanshuang world. It has a good way of dealing with the conflicts between the factions and characters. It's not brainless.

I really said that when I came to the new world, it didn't give people a very abrupt and bizarre feeling at all. On the contrary, it adhered closely to Zhan Shuang's world view in all aspects, and then slowly resolved all contradictions and other things. The content of the performance was well written, the characters in all aspects were in place, and the content was also very exciting. This is directly from the divine book, five stars, five stars, five stars.

Unity requires a price, victory requires sacrifices Although some are too one-sided and too ideal, why should I be so realistic when I've already read novels?

I won't say much, other than to express that the content is awesome! ! ! ! Let's give it five stars first! [Laugh][laugh][laugh]

Damn, that's awesome. I finally have some good books to read. After playing for so long, I couldn't understand the first few books or they were too short [laughing and crying]

This novel is very good. The mastery of the plot perfectly solves the "all the way forward" sense of deja vu caused by the problem of combat power. The description of the characters is very specific and very consistent with the game. It is useless to say more. I strongly recommend [Note]