The System's Fairy-Raising Log

Yes, it's very good-looking. The author has portrayed different characters in detail, which makes it interesting to read. However, I think there are a few things that are not very good. The first is that I think that the appearance of the protagonist improves too quickly. It does not take many chapters to improve the appearance very quickly. The advantage of writing this way is that people's continuous pursuit of the protagonist is conducive to the development of the subsequent plot. However, writing this way highlights a problem. Since the protagonist is so good-looking, then it should be written in this way. It cannot be written that the appearance is improved again, and it will hinder the development of the subsequent plot. The second protagonist seems to have confessed a little too quickly. It has only been 60 photos and he has already confessed his identity. Confessing his identity as Lily will make the subsequent plot more difficult to write. People like Qin Yan, Xiaoyi and others will probably not continue to pursue the protagonist. The feeling of this kind of novel is that people want to improve their appearance and be sought after. Without this, it is difficult to write, but this is only my own point of view. The development of the plot is still in the hands of the author. Thirdly, I think the author didn't like Lily a bit, but I could still read it. When I saw Wang Yuanyuan's chapter, I couldn't stand it at all and skipped it. But I didn't say Lily was bad. The protagonist, Tao Ranran and so on, I could barely read it. Anyway, cheers for the author.

The writing is quite good, but the content is a bit similar to Piccolo's book about Xiaobai [Chigua] [Chigua] [Chigua]

Are you a fan of piccolo? I see you are a fan of Piccolo, so I can only give you three stars.

It's very beautiful, but the author remembers to take a rest. Come on, the author is great!

It looks good, but can the heroine keep some distance from other girls? The most important thing is not to have a harem! ! !

This book by the author is very similar to the two books I have read before, and the overall plot is similar to Piccolo. The details are very similar to the crisp sound. But overall it's pretty good.

Okay~~~~~Look~~~~~!

Come on, the book is beautiful

It's very good, everyone can eat it. Although the pace of this book is a little faster, it is full of details that still make people feel like they are the protagonists.

It's a bit like "The cute boy turns into a beautiful girl at the beginning"! [Pinch][pinch]