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Yes, it's very good-looking. The author has portrayed different characters in detail, which makes it interesting to read. However, I think there are a few things that are not very good. The first is that I think that the appearance of the protagonist improves too quickly. It does not take many chapters to improve the appearance very quickly. The advantage of writing this way is that people's continuous pursuit of the protagonist is conducive to the development of the subsequent plot. However, writing this way highlights a problem. Since the protagonist is so good-looking, then it should be written in this way. It cannot be written that the appearance is improved again, and it will hinder the development of the subsequent plot. The second protagonist seems to have confessed a little too quickly. It has only been 60 photos and he has already confessed his identity. Confessing his identity as Lily will make the subsequent plot more difficult to write. People like Qin Yan, Xiaoyi and others will probably not continue to pursue the protagonist. The feeling of this kind of novel is that people want to improve their appearance and be sought after. Without this, it is difficult to write, but this is only my own point of view. The development of the plot is still in the hands of the author. Thirdly, I think the author didn't like Lily a bit, but I could still read it. When I saw Wang Yuanyuan's chapter, I couldn't stand it at all and skipped it. But I didn't say Lily was bad. The protagonist, Tao Ranran and so on, I could barely read it. Anyway, cheers for the author.

It's very beautiful, but the author remembers to take a rest. Come on, the author is great!

It looks good, but can the heroine keep some distance from other girls? The most important thing is not to have a harem! ! !

This book by the author is very similar to the two books I have read before, and the overall plot is similar to Piccolo. The details are very similar to the crisp sound. But overall it's pretty good.

Come on, the book is beautiful

It's very good, everyone can eat it. Although the pace of this book is a little faster, it is full of details that still make people feel like they are the protagonists.

Did the author change later?

Can you send me pictures of this book?

I've been in a bad mood these past few days and I've tried my best, but I can't sleep [angry]

It's pretty good, but I only watched the first part 1-21. My feeling changed after that. It feels different later on. I feel like two books are put together and I can't read them anymore.

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I'm a native dog, I like it.

The smell of green tea is a bit strong, and I threw myself into the boy's arms Well, how should I put it? There are also some questions with other boys, which are a bit ambiguous. This is not good, and it is easy to get stuck. Well, it's not clean, the heroine, it's almost obvious that she's going to have a harem.

Woo woo woo, it's so beautiful [I'm about to cry]

Very well written, keep up the good work!

Very good, very good

It's okay, it's pretty good-looking.

Very interesting and beautiful

Personally I think it's good

To be honest, it's okay

You can also use a weakened version of Xia Xiaobai

Xia Xiaobai? ? ? ? OK OK

Why has the book been taken off the shelves?

This book is just the beginning. You also know the problem. I will improve it in new books later.

The plot is okay, but it feels a bit short

This book is very good, I will continue to work hard on the next one

Everything was fine, but it felt a bit weird when the two girls got married in the end. Also, it's too short. I hope the author's next book will be longer [Like][Like][Like]

Pretty good, why is the rating so low?

It's very good, I can't get enough of it, I still want to see it. Still want to see, still want to see, still want to see

It looks so good, I stayed up late watching it