A village, a piece of wasteland transformed into a forest, a man, a few women, an artificial lake, a few buildings, a few acres of orchards, a group of children and their parents, of course there are songs, and travel.
This is a simple story, but also a boring story.
Reader comments
I finished reading it in one day. This book is like a person's autobiography, and it is all picked up. It does not mention any of the difficulties in life.
Anyway, I enjoyed reading it. Sometimes I wonder if it would look better if I changed the first person in the article. After thinking about it, I think it might lose the flavor if I change it. Anyway, it's very confusing, but the punctuation marks of the dialogue can still be added.
I think the author can open another book based on the content of this book, use this book as a story outline, and write a 2 million-word novel. I will definitely follow it.
I have never read this kind of book before, because I always walk away from books written in the first person, so it feels very fresh, I am very immersed in reading it, and I like it very much. Although there are some flaws, I still gave it 5 stars.
Finally, this book is more comfortable to listen to than to read.
After reading it, I felt somewhat emotional, and it can make people feel emotional, which shows that this book definitely has merit. The author is a novice and has made many minor flaws, but that does not affect the fact that it is a good book with more advantages! The only thing that makes me a little unhappy is that Xie Wanru is missing at the end! [Laughing] Okay, that's it, it will be on the bookshelf. If the books are deserted, I can dig them out and read them. Writing a book is not easy, five stars encourage you! Multiple female protagonists yyds! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
I hope the author will work hard, write better and better, and continue to write a new book!
The plot is okay, but you're not used to the format and the change of persons.
It's okay. It's pretty.
It's probably the author's first time writing a book, so the content is unfamiliar and lacks a sense of immersion. People say it's hard to read, but I endured it at the beginning, and by the end of it, it's pretty good. Five stars for encouragement.
The writing is okay. The pace is quite fast
Although writing on the blackboard is not good, I love reading it😁
Come on, it's much better than many rebirth novels written by great writers, although it doesn't have any particularly exciting content. In fact, plainness is the truth, and good writing is good if it can be substituted. Write the next book well
I kept reading the diary that day until the woman blocked the road and couldn't stand it anymore.
I finished reading it in one day. This book is like a person's autobiography, and it is all picked up. It does not mention any of the difficulties in life. Anyway, I enjoyed reading it. Sometimes I wonder if it would look better if I changed the first person in the article. After thinking about it, I think it might lose the flavor if I change it. Anyway, it's very confusing, but the punctuation marks of the dialogue can still be added. I think the author can open another book based on the content of this book, use this book as a story outline, and write a 2 million-word novel. I will definitely follow it. I have never read this kind of book before, because I always walk away from books written in the first person, so it feels very fresh, I am very immersed in reading it, and I like it very much. Although there are some flaws, I still gave it 5 stars. Finally, this book is more comfortable to listen to than to read.
After reading it, I felt somewhat emotional, and it can make people feel emotional, which shows that this book definitely has merit. The author is a novice and has made many minor flaws, but that does not affect the fact that it is a good book with more advantages! The only thing that makes me a little unhappy is that Xie Wanru is missing at the end! [Laughing] Okay, that's it, it will be on the bookshelf. If the books are deserted, I can dig them out and read them. Writing a book is not easy, five stars encourage you! Multiple female protagonists yyds! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! I hope the author will work hard, write better and better, and continue to write a new book!
The plot is okay, but you're not used to the format and the change of persons.
It's okay. It's pretty.
It's probably the author's first time writing a book, so the content is unfamiliar and lacks a sense of immersion. People say it's hard to read, but I endured it at the beginning, and by the end of it, it's pretty good. Five stars for encouragement.
The writing is okay. The pace is quite fast
Although writing on the blackboard is not good, I love reading it😁
Come on, it's much better than many rebirth novels written by great writers, although it doesn't have any particularly exciting content. In fact, plainness is the truth, and good writing is good if it can be substituted. Write the next book well
I kept reading the diary that day until the woman blocked the road and couldn't stand it anymore.