I Kept the Empress on Too Tight a Leash, So Why Is She Looking at Me Like That?

Surprisingly good! It's really unexpected. Although the first supporting character doesn't have a particularly bright personality, he does have an IQ! The plot is logically advanced and makes people want to read on. Although the plot progress is slow, the author's writing is very good. Overall, it's surprisingly good, highly recommended! There are so-called poisonous points mentioned by other book friends, but those poisonous points are based on the logic of their readers. But according to the author's plot logic, all the so-called poisonous points of the author based on the author's story background are logically self-consistent, and there is no so-called poisonous point! According to the author's story background, worldview and behavioral logic, he is reasonable and has not found any inconsistencies. At least as of now, the main line is advancing slowly, but steadily and firmly.

I originally thought that I would be blessed with more children, but I didn't expect that I was really ready to serve the country and the people. The plot is also good. It doesn't become invincible all at once. It's better to watch it step by step as it is now. The male protagonist is very thoughtful, and with more system rewards and strength, he can really save a country by himself. The heroine (personally guessing that she is the empress) has too few roles yet, but her talent is first-rate and her looks are good. I can't guarantee that the protagonist will let her manage the government and hide away in the future.

It's very beautiful. Believe me, getting this book is like a sudden rain after a long drought.

It's pretty good, the plot is quite smooth, and the characters are quite fleshed out, but the point is that the whole text is short, and the author will update it soon [cry] [cry], be careful, I won't be in a hurry to send you a box of goodies [sneaky laugh] [sneaky laugh]

Okay, okay, the author has secretly opened a new trap, and the book is quite good. Then I will take this first comment

Comfortable, seems to have a clear rhythm, everything has its own rhythm, there is no sudden feeling, it is smooth and done in one go, but the quantity is a bit too small, the author has more updates, it is difficult to not be popular with this kind of quality The pace is a bit slow, which is purely a matter of personal preference. Anyway, I found it very comfortable to read.

I stayed up all night to read it. The title is outrageous, but the plot is good and not cliché. The writing is also very smooth. The realm is novel but the descriptions of aspects are too complicated and complicated. It is not a good viewing experience. Every time the protagonist encounters a problem, you can draw something that can solve the problem immediately. It is no problem to solve the crisis in the beginning of hell. Later, when you get stronger, you can consider setting up some suspense to make the plot more ups and downs. I look forward to the subsequent plot (already updated with gifts!)

It looks great, come on! It's best to have more, but you should also consider your health [laughing][eating melon] It's still a bit short now, and it makes me want to keep it [eat melon], but I still have to take the author into consideration [cool]

It is indeed a refreshing breath of fresh air in the novel. The description is decent, and the progress of the protagonist is not too false. I hope that the subsequent development will not be too abrupt; and the character creation is more careful. For example, the author used a large space to highlight the character of the empress, and there is enough foreshadowing for the protagonist's feelings, and there is no brainless criticism. The character creation of the supporting characters is also given, but recently too many characters have been added, which makes people feel a bit empty. Hope you can work on it! The author still needs to speed up the promotion of the main plot. Although the description and highlighting of the characters are more important, author, your story frame is not suitable for dragging on for too long, and the protagonist has no intention of taking the initiative to attack the empress. The empress's emotional line is dragged out too long, and mixed with the various interludes between the main plots, it will give people a sense of It feels very messy, and although the protagonist has a lot of equipment, it is not used at all. There are too many critical hits in the lottery, which will give readers the feeling that the protagonist's strength has increased. The careful layout of the protagonist does not fit well with so many equipment given by the system. The charm of the protagonist is also in the middle. If the charm continues to increase, it will be very empty, because It is difficult to write specific changes, and you cannot have a good response to the characters in the story, so an imaginary value like charm is not as good as directly adding the character's favorability and loyalty. At least before it is maxed out, you can still put some restrictions and regulations on the character's behavior; however, in terms of the immortal cultivation system, this does have its own It has unique insights and many good innovations. For me personally, the author's down-to-earth style of cultivating immortality is more to my liking. It's just that it doesn't fit well with the system. But the author worked hard to write the book, so I give it five stars. Good advice may hurt your ears but it helps your actions. Don't be affected by bad book reviews. Just choose the best suggestions and opinions. The path the author has taken is still very good. Come on! Also, I hope the author can improve! (Update soon!)

I like this, the concept is novel, and the writing is good, but I actually want to read more about the adventures in Taichu [face covering] [face covering] [face covering] because only treasure hunting in Taichu is the most enjoyable (in my opinion). Secondly, there is no clear introduction to the protagonist's current strength. I I'm afraid that the author will conceptualize and blur the strength for you later. Anyway, there is no conceptual comparison so far. Later, he casually defeated the enemy and then said it casually.