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Surprisingly good! It's really unexpected. Although the first supporting character doesn't have a particularly bright personality, he does have an IQ! The plot is logically advanced and makes people want to read on. Although the plot progress is slow, the author's writing is very good. Overall, it's surprisingly good, highly recommended! There are so-called poisonous points mentioned by other book friends, but those poisonous points are based on the logic of their readers. But according to the author's plot logic, all the so-called poisonous points of the author based on the author's story background are logically self-consistent, and there is no so-called poisonous point! According to the author's story background, worldview and behavioral logic, he is reasonable and has not found any inconsistencies. At least as of now, the main line is advancing slowly, but steadily and firmly.

I originally thought that I would be blessed with more children, but I didn't expect that I was really ready to serve the country and the people. The plot is also good. It doesn't become invincible all at once. It's better to watch it step by step as it is now. The male protagonist is very thoughtful, and with more system rewards and strength, he can really save a country by himself. The heroine (personally guessing that she is the empress) has too few roles yet, but her talent is first-rate and her looks are good. I can't guarantee that the protagonist will let her manage the government and hide away in the future.

It's very beautiful. Believe me, getting this book is like a sudden rain after a long drought.

It's pretty good, the plot is quite smooth, and the characters are quite fleshed out, but the point is that the whole text is short, and the author will update it soon [cry] [cry], be careful, I won't be in a hurry to send you a box of goodies [sneaky laugh] [sneaky laugh]

Okay, okay, the author has secretly opened a new trap, and the book is quite good. Then I will take this first comment

Comfortable, seems to have a clear rhythm, everything has its own rhythm, there is no sudden feeling, it is smooth and done in one go, but the quantity is a bit too small, the author has more updates, it is difficult to not be popular with this kind of quality The pace is a bit slow, which is purely a matter of personal preference. Anyway, I found it very comfortable to read.

I stayed up all night to read it. The title is outrageous, but the plot is good and not cliché. The writing is also very smooth. The realm is novel but the descriptions of aspects are too complicated and complicated. It is not a good viewing experience. Every time the protagonist encounters a problem, you can draw something that can solve the problem immediately. It is no problem to solve the crisis in the beginning of hell. Later, when you get stronger, you can consider setting up some suspense to make the plot more ups and downs. I look forward to the subsequent plot (already updated with gifts!)

It looks great, come on! It's best to have more, but you should also consider your health [laughing][eating melon] It's still a bit short now, and it makes me want to keep it [eat melon], but I still have to take the author into consideration [cool]

I like this, the concept is novel, and the writing is good, but I actually want to read more about the adventures in Taichu [face covering] [face covering] [face covering] because only treasure hunting in Taichu is the most enjoyable (in my opinion). Secondly, there is no clear introduction to the protagonist's current strength. I I'm afraid that the author will conceptualize and blur the strength for you later. Anyway, there is no conceptual comparison so far. Later, he casually defeated the enemy and then said it casually.

It is indeed a refreshing breath of fresh air in the novel. The description is decent, and the progress of the protagonist is not too false. I hope that the subsequent development will not be too abrupt; and the character creation is more careful. For example, the author used a large space to highlight the character of the empress, and there is enough foreshadowing for the protagonist's feelings, and there is no brainless criticism. The character creation of the supporting characters is also given, but recently too many characters have been added, which makes people feel a bit empty. Hope you can work on it! The author still needs to speed up the promotion of the main plot. Although the description and highlighting of the characters are more important, author, your story frame is not suitable for dragging on for too long, and the protagonist has no intention of taking the initiative to attack the empress. The empress's emotional line is dragged out too long, and mixed with the various interludes between the main plots, it will give people a sense of It feels very messy, and although the protagonist has a lot of equipment, it is not used at all. There are too many critical hits in the lottery, which will give readers the feeling that the protagonist's strength has increased. The careful layout of the protagonist does not fit well with so many equipment given by the system. The charm of the protagonist is also in the middle. If the charm continues to increase, it will be very empty, because It is difficult to write specific changes, and you cannot have a good response to the characters in the story, so an imaginary value like charm is not as good as directly adding the character's favorability and loyalty. At least before it is maxed out, you can still put some restrictions and regulations on the character's behavior; however, in terms of the immortal cultivation system, this does have its own It has unique insights and many good innovations. For me personally, the author's down-to-earth style of cultivating immortality is more to my liking. It's just that it doesn't fit well with the system. But the author worked hard to write the book, so I give it five stars. Good advice may hurt your ears but it helps your actions. Don't be affected by bad book reviews. Just choose the best suggestions and opinions. The path the author has taken is still very good. Come on! Also, I hope the author can improve! (Update soon!)

The best thing about this book is the introduction. The text and introduction seem to have little to do with each other. The text is full of daily running accounts. Looking back, I think about what I read after reading Chapter 140: After tying up the empress, there is nothing else besides restricting freedom. Then the protagonist opened a few shops, formed an army of thousands of people at his own expense, and resettled the refugees at his own expense. I even felt that after the protagonist tied up the empress, the empress could no longer appear without affecting any plot.

It's a very good book, but it's so sad that it's been discontinued. Resurrection, my author [almost crying]

The setting and everything are very good, and the plot is also good, but the pace is slow and the plot is too slow. Also, can you be more stable in updating? I know you have a double version, but you can't patronize another book.

The subject matter is good and the protagonist is in line with popular tastes. The plot is compact and begins with the goal of serving the country and the people. The love plot in the later stages should be good. I hope the author will continue to work hard and this book will be a hit [please ask for more updates][please ask for more updates][like this post]

Alas, I just stayed up late these days to catch up on the latest chapter. Although the pace is a bit slow, it gives a very clear plot and is not boring at the same time. It has ups and downs and is just right.

It's good to watch, but I haven't updated it for a month or two. I don't know if I can see the follow-up [crying]

It's so beautiful, I can't stop! I hope the author will update more frequently! Come on, come on, come on!

It's a very good book. It doesn't seem to have any bad points at the moment. Let's look at the author's back.

Not bad, especially the idea. It breaks away from the previous fantasy system. I wanted to break this system a long time ago, but I don't have the ability. Although your subject matter is not novel, it is brilliant in terms of content.

Really good. The strategy is imaginative. I also like the character of the main character.

The book is really good. Come on, author.

The plot of this book is still okay. Personally, I think the biggest poisonous point is the Lu Mansion in Chapter 140. From a realistic point of view, the plot seems reasonable, but after all, it is a novel, and it must be artistically processed to make it acceptable to readers. As long as it looks reasonable from the reader's perspective, otherwise the scolding will be in vain. [Think]

It's good, but it's too slow emotionally. I watched it all night. I watched it at 5 o'clock. After watching it, I said, OK, nothing more. I still haven't seen the plot I wanted. Can't we get on track quickly? . .

Interesting plot, good writing, highly recommended

The writing is good and detailed hehe (the first thing I do every day when I wake up is to read the three updated chapters). The characters are also very distinct, and the plot is not boring and very vivid (I think the most successful thing is that it allows people like me who can't stand the fast pace and are used to refreshing writing to keep following it. Hahh) Come on, author

Hahaha, it's interesting, interesting, and really interesting. I haven't seen a book like this in a long time. The author's writing style is good, the setting is good, and the plot is also very well controlled. As long as the author's synopsis does not collapse and the plot is not particularly bad (of course, this does not mean that the current plot is not good), the minimum score can be 9.4 Of course, the most important thing is the update speed. Otherwise, with this amount, it would really be kept on a bookshelf. If the guarantee is not complete, it will be forgotten one day (I am a typical example of raising books to support nothing [cry][cry][cry][cry])

It's a good-looking novel. Although the plot is slow, it's step-by-step, so it won't make people feel bored. The writing style is also comfortable to read. It doesn't feel rushed or slow at the same time, but it also maintains a sense of relaxation.

It's a very good book, with well-drawn characters and rich content. Although the plot advances a bit slowly, it is more clearly organized. The details are a little bit unreliable, but it's innocuous. Overall, I still think it ranks high in the Tomato Ranking. (Purely personal opinion) Tsk, how can I put it, there is nothing wrong with it in the first few chapters, but then I started to write in a strange way that I didn't understand. The classical Chinese is not classical Chinese, the vernacular is not vernacular, it seems uninteresting, and there is a feeling of being uneducated and forcing cultural words. Let's just say that this is a tomato. What people want to read is not classics. Those who want to read classics have gone to the library, which is a bit wrong. [Rolls eyes]

The writing is smooth and the plot is exciting. It is a rare good book. Although it has just started, as long as it does not collapse in the future, it is possible to get a 9.0 Or above.

Read it with your brain. The changes in the male protagonist are minor in this article. The empress' process from being bullied and disobedient, to being imprisoned and scared, gradually getting used to it, to giving you a mouth is not impossible is described very well [Learned]