Junior Master************

It looks good, but the heroine may be a bit of a virgin. According to the heroine's personality, she should kill a certain green tea when she encounters it. You can try to make the heroine more decisive in life and death. Also, let me ask, what is the relationship between the heroine and Xiao Jing?

It looks good, the author's writing style is also good, vivid, with some humor, and it is not offensive. Watching the heroine's coquettish actions will make you laugh unconsciously, but I also have a few suggestions. I hope the author will not misunderstand [shy] and can write the heroine a little more ridiculous. I think it will be more interesting [blowing kiss], because this is one of the few books I have read that I am satisfied with😘I will be a long-time fan of the author when this book becomes popular [Sending Hearts]

I think this book is very good-looking. Recently, I have been particularly interested in reading the kind of literary criticism. But I also like this kind of writing. I hope the author can update it soon.

Beautiful, the heroine is very strong

Nice! ! ! Is there a male protagonist?

Zini and Yinshuang are so cute! ! !