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Reader comments
If you guessed correctly, this should be the author's debut novel, or the second one. The concept and framework are quite complete, but there are still many flaws in the details. For example, whether it is between relatives, lovers, or friends, they are all addressed by their full first and last names, which sounds quite awkward. The narration part can use the full name, but the characters in the text should not. Furthermore, I don't know what type of writing the author defines this work to be? Cool article? Abuse? I felt that after reading it, I was either happy or unhappy, tortured or tortured. There are several villains in the article who have survived unscathed to this day, but the heroine is still the one who endures the pain and torture. This is quite puzzling. Okay, I won't go into too much detail. Anyway, I still have to give the author a thumbs up. After all, writing is not easy, so let's keep working hard later
If you guessed correctly, this should be the author's debut novel, or the second one. The concept and framework are quite complete, but there are still many flaws in the details. For example, whether it is between relatives, lovers, or friends, they are all addressed by their full first and last names, which sounds quite awkward. The narration part can use the full name, but the characters in the text should not. Furthermore, I don't know what type of writing the author defines this work to be? Cool article? Abuse? I felt that after reading it, I was either happy or unhappy, tortured or tortured. There are several villains in the article who have survived unscathed to this day, but the heroine is still the one who endures the pain and torture. This is quite puzzling. Okay, I won't go into too much detail. Anyway, I still have to give the author a thumbs up. After all, writing is not easy, so let's keep working hard later
Well written, ups and downs
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