On Which Yandere Apprentice Is Better?

The characters are well described, but I can't read stories that are very yandere. I hope Shen Ming can become less yandere in the future [Sending my heart]

It looks good. I want to hurry up and see the apprentice holding the master down.

Don't say anything else. I started following Yandere Kiss Mei. The plot of that book is really good and very erotic. It can even be said to be the most lustful one I have ever read in Tomato. I believe in the author's portrayal of yandere, and this book did not disappoint me. I have been following the book since it first opened. The current rating is completely worthy of the level it deserves, and it should even be higher, just because of the particularity of the subject matter (it is difficult for books about yandere to get a rating of 9.0). This book is also unique in the entire tomato yandere world. I hope the author can write better and better and write more and more [Sending my heart][Sending my heart]

It looks great, come on! Don't be like the last book (although I don't know what the last book was like?) [Laughing] (Note: I know the above letter is sealed. I also have the previous book, but I don't know which paragraph it is.)

The author, the writing is so good, can you write it to more than 1,000 chapters? I really liked when the heroine played with the hero when she was a child. I really like this book😍😍😍

Overall, it's okay. The male protagonist has a particularly good personality. But due to the male protagonist's high reputation within the sect and the fact that he has befriended female protagonists everywhere, this should have been a pseudo harem. Because the eldest heroine is a yandere, it is difficult for other heroines to get on the stage, so the later content should be about several heroines competing for the male lead. Looking forward to the follow-up content

The author's portrayal of the yandere is also unique in the entire Tomato. The book is slow-burning and belongs to the growth and development type. In the early stage, the character is mainly created. While the master and apprentice are fighting each other every day, the inner changes of the heroine are sculpted, which mainly changes with the behavior of the male protagonist. Over time, the character gradually becomes yandere. In the beginning, the male protagonist is not aware of it and just treats it as a master-student relationship. Little does he know that the female protagonist has undergone earth-shaking changes in her heart, so in the later period, the female protagonist becomes stronger and changes her ways to torture the male protagonist. Friends who like this kind of works can say that they have found a treasure. It is worth a look and highly recommended👍

This is a novel that I developed slowly. I can say that this is really similar to the yandere I can think of in reality. It is because of the personality problems of the heroine that she gradually became a yandere. Although the degree of yandere is not deep, the content is perfect and there is no extreme madness (morbidity). I have developed it since I was a child, and it is a single female protagonist and male protagonist that are very consistent with what I have in mind. There's no dark side, it's quite simple. The early content can be called the pinnacle of yandere novels (don't question it, I'm specifically reading this type of book. If you object, it means you don't understand). The heroine has unique talents and learning abilities, so everything is planned. If you are a fan of yandere characters, I suggest you read this book!

The author doesn't give her away. The interaction between Pig's Feet and Li Qiao'er was quite good. I really regret not watching it. But it is a yandere novel after all, let's see the author grasp this degree [love], don't give up in the end (╬◣㉨◢)

Oops, overall it's really good, but the details of the emotional language need to be optimized. The writing is a bit stiff, but it doesn't have much impact. You can make up for other aspects [laughing][note][note] Hahahaha [licking the screen] The author will update quickly! [Cry][Cry]!

So far, the content is quite good. The protagonist is vivid and has a cute apprentice. ⚈₃⚈ Gradually rely on no system. It is not rebirth. It is time travel. It is good to watch. It is not like those old-fashioned plots. It is worth watching but the update is too slow and the content is too little. It is recommended that the author take out all the saved manuscripts, otherwise Gou Gou will be ten centimeters short. This book is quite interesting. The protagonist traveled through time and was raised by bears. Hahaha, giant pandas have no system. Then they were tricked by an old man into becoming his apprentice. By coincidence, he took on a female apprentice and wanted to trick her into becoming his own labor force. Then he was raised crooked and slowly became a sickly child. I guess the rest of it will be interesting. I hope the author will update it soon. I feel that this book is particularly interesting and unique.

The writing is okay. It has a faint flavor of bad luck in the early stage. The rhythm is okay. In the later stage, as long as there are not multiple female protagonists, the writing is delicate and the foreshadowing is in place. The ambiguous relationship with the female protagonist does not go beyond the limit. Some people in the comments said that it is an ambiguous story with a single female protagonist. I feel that the female protagonists are more to highlight the image of the female protagonist and can also pave the way for the subsequent plot. I don't care about anything else, single female protagonist. The main character just needs to persevere, but if there are two heroines, then give up immediately. The main character is bohemian and has a fairy-like temperament. The description of the heroine is also acceptable. Download the cache backup first to prevent being blocked [sneaky laugh] [sneaky laugh] [sneaky laugh]. There are very few master-disciple single-female protagonists in Tomato without a system. The rhythm is so well grasped. It is a hundred times better than the stall selling Dali at the beginning of the game that even the king can't understand.

It's a very good book. The characters are very full and the personality is very vivid. In particular, the innocence of Shen Ming's childhood is very detailed. The only fly in the ointment is that the recent update is a bit too slow [crying] [crying]

Needless to say, I have seen Chapter 35 so far, and I have a good impression of it. It is a blast in the early stages of God-Slaying. The early stage is actually quite good. There is no need for the author to belittle himself. At least from the perspective of an old bookworm like me, the character creation is very successful and the plot rhythm is sure. But since I skipped reading, I chose to read. There are some bad parts and problematic parts that I may not have seen. At present, I think the only problem is that the girl from the Li family (can't remember the name), the process of developing feelings for the male protagonist is a bit too far-fetched. It seems to me like this at the moment. The slow and easy writing in the early stage is very good, but I don't know if it will collapse later. The plot rhythm is unmatched by Ledi's super acceleration.

It's really good to read. I haven't seen these novels in a long time. It doesn't have a bunch of plug-ins and fancy systems like other novels. The relationship between the male and female protagonists is natural and warm. Strong sense of immersion. Some shortcomings are that the image of the male protagonist is hoped to be more decent. The future plot will have a single female protagonist, no harem, and single-minded treatment of the disciple. I hope it won't be like some other novels where the collection of a bunch of women is too frivolous and disgusting. Affection is the proof that I love you.

I have to say that I quite like this author's books, especially this one. The break in the previous book can be seen as a dream ending, and the ending to marriage is pretty good (although the dream ending is **). I like the character of the protagonist of this book even more, and this time it is a development series, which is still very good. I just hope that this book will be completed smoothly [Like]

It's well written, but I feel like the female protagonist's talent is overwhelming the male protagonist, and the male protagonist is currently higher in cultivation than the female protagonist. To be honest, I really don't want to see the male protagonist locked up in a dark room [face covering] [staring] [eating melon]

I watched this book rise from 8.2 To 9.0. I thought the heroine Shen Ming was very cute [shy] and was different from other yanderes. She is a high-IQ type of yandere, much better than those yanderes who abuse the male protagonist at every turn. Moreover, the emotional development of this book is relatively natural. In other yandere books, the yandere falls in love with the male protagonist to death from the beginning. This book gradually develops into a yandere, but this kind of yandere is very good to the male protagonist and is very possessive, but this is in line with the characteristics of a yandere [Thinking].

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I like to read single female protagonists, but after reading this book, the protagonist feels that it is better to start a harem. Unlike other novels, I fell in love with the male protagonist as soon as I saw it. This is very slow and reasonable🥱,,,, brothers, can anyone recommend a harem to me? You don't just fall in love with it all at once. You have to be slow and slow. Who can recommend me a harem? For slow-paced movies, don't fall in love with the male protagonist as soon as you see him.

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The quality is very good. It is exactly as described by the seller. I am very satisfied. I really like it. It completely exceeds expectations. The delivery speed is very fast. The packaging is very careful and tight. The logistics company has a good service attitude and the delivery speed is very fast. I am very satisfied with my purchase.

The writing is good, but I read Chapter 180, why is the car speed so slow? Although there are some plots with other supporting characters, it is really not enough [Punch Out], the pace is quite slow, but the plot is not boring, the male protagonist's character is also very attractive to me, the character characteristics, and the emotions in it are relatively delicate in my opinion, it is worth watching [Like]

The author just needs to stick to his own ideas and write the story. After all, everyone has different preferences. Just calm down and read it carefully. Even a slow-burning book has its own unique flavor [Blow kiss]

This book is really good. The heroine has a lack of personality and meets a noble person and becomes a yandere [face covering]. She is also extremely intelligent and scheming. She is also very ruthless. I like the male protagonist and he doesn't act pretentious. I just want to face it. I just hope it will end well.

The world view and realm are pretty good, Shadow of the Ancient World, and the character creation is really good. It's a lot more fun to watch if you save more of it, but it might seem a bit boring if you follow it bit by bit. However, such a traditional and innovative book should not be so popular.

It's very beautiful, the only drawback is that the heroine has grown up [punch out]

It's pretty good to watch, but if you think the development is too slow, you can give up, but I just like to watch the development, okay?

Although the tone of the book is very bland, from what I have seen so far, I think the character creation and author's writing skills are quite impressive.

It looks good, please add more, other readers will do everything 😭😭😭