Honghuang: This Dao Ancestor Is Too Despicable, the Demon Ancestor Has Collapsed

Personal Writing style: average author level Imagination: A bit better than ordinary authors (mainly because the plot has been changed, but it still doesn't feel as eye-catching, and the introduction to the realm is not as exciting as I've seen similar ones before) Overall, on Tomato, this novel is very good and can be called first-rate.

I hope there will be a female protagonist, and the female protagonist will be Rahu

The honest writing is good, but if you want to be able to read it, you have to be able to accept the protagonist's help for weapons and weapons, and being treated as an unlimited power bank. It's no big deal and you don't talk back.

Choice 1: One-star negative review! Just for light and justice, without asking for anything in return, loyalty +1. Choice 2: Two-star negative review! If you light a fire for those who come after you, there may be a lucky person who successfully avoids lightning and gets a reputation +1 (a positive bonus will be obtained depending on the effect). Choice 3: Five-star review! I would rather let the world down than let the world let me down. Let's step on the pitfalls together and bear the poison together! This novel does not have gorgeous language decoration, but impresses readers with its plain and true feelings. The sentences are smooth and coherent. The psychological portrayal and detailed description are very successful, giving people a sense of aftertaste! From a literary point of view, the material selection is very novel, the angle is clearly visible, the language is plain yet elegant, concise yet full of meaning, and it can be called a model of modern novels! This book shows extraordinary literary skills despite its plainness. It can be said that every word is a masterpiece and every sentence is a classic. It has reached a height that is elusive for us. From an artistic point of view, this book still needs to be improved, but its significance is far greater than the success itself. As the saying goes: "A galloping horse, a shooting vulture and a bow, the heaven and the earth are in my heart!" I really deserve to be the founder of the new generation of Wuli World! After reading this book word for word, my heart couldn't calm down for a long time! How could there be such a wonderful novel in this world? I couldn't believe my eyes. Since the reform and opening up, I thought that no novel would ever impress me. I didn't expect to see such an exquisite book today. You made me deeply understand the saying "There are people outside the world, there is a world outside the world". After reading this book, I dare not reply easily. I am worried that my vulgar language will tarnish this rare novel in the world. But I still replied, because I felt that if I could not leave my own footprints behind such wonderful literature, it would be a regret in my life. Please forgive my selfishness! No matter how gorgeous the words are, it is impossible to describe the brilliance of this book, so I just want to say this: If you can fool anyone, you will be the best! Hello, author, I am your fan. I feel really uncomfortable when I see some people making fun of you. In my heart, you are a kind person who keeps working hard for your goals. I will always support you, so can you kowtow to me? I hope you will not be ignorant of praise. The author is going to tell you a story:hurry up the coarse tightlyrough How much do you understand?

It's very good. I personally think it's non-toxic. It's different from traditional prehistoric times and worth a look.

I've read Chapter 9 so far. This book is okay. It's a high-end prehistoric book. There haven't been many conspiracies yet. I've seen the latest chapter. That Luo Hou has been struggling with the protagonist. If you want to watch Pure Tao Zuliu, you can give up.

Great, I haven't seen a self-created novel in a long time.

Let Hongjun and Luo Hu be together quickly!

Isn't it bad for the author? It's so short. It's finally time to suppress Luo Hu. Why don't you just add another chapter [face covering] to shock me quickly. After all, I read this book just to make fun of Luo Hu Hongjun's CP [laughing evilly]

Taiyi's Taiyi Road feels that after achieving Dao Fruit, it will merge with Pangu, allowing Pangu to revive in an alternative way. At the same time, he feels that once Taiyi achieves Dao Fruit, he will directly surpass Hong Gou, Sanqing and others, and directly aspire to be the first person in Dao Fruit.

Great book. I haven't seen high-quality prehistoric literature in a long time.

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Nice! ! ! ! Come on! ! ! ! ! !

This book is quite good. Can the author write more about it? Come on, I hope the author will continue to work hard and follow hundreds of chapters a day. Don't be afraid that I won't finish it. I promise to finish it and the author will update it soon! ! ! ! ! !

This novel doesn't look like there is a rustle in it, but there is a hint of rustle in it.

I hope Luo Hu is the heroine. Let me give the author a rating first, and then I'll take a closer look. So far, it's pretty good @

The world view is big and the power system is also very good

No matter it is a real Hongjun or a fake Hongjun, under the general trend of heaven and earth, they will eventually embark on the same path, come on👏

It's not bad. Old bookworms in the Prehistoric Kingdom think it's okay. The character design and all aspects are good. Some of the problems of the traditional Prehistoric World have been solved in a different way. It can be said to be a high-end Prehistoric World but it's a little different from the myth. The only shortcoming is that the realm is a bit messy and the divisions are not very good.

The idea of ​​opening up your own cultivation system is eye-catching (≧v≦) I hope I can write better in the future (∠ω< )⌒☆

Can Rahu cultivate the way of the world under the pseudonym of the protagonist, first creating, then destroying? Or with the protagonist, the protagonist creates the world, and Rahu destroys the world?

I don't like what happened with Rahu later.

It's pretty good. In the future, you can create all the worlds in your body.

The world view is grand and consistent with the original work, and the system is self-created but can be reasonably integrated into the plot. It is much better than some ancient novels.

Okay, I hope the heroine Rahu

This book is about meeting and killing Luo Hou.

It's the first time I've seen such a beautiful world view.

The level of power in the prehistoric era is well written, and it's finally not the low-end prehistoric one.

The author of Niuma Shusheng has finally updated. [Smile][smile][smile][smile]

Okay, come on, author [laughing evilly]