I Can't Stand Avoidant People

I've been very busy since school started recently, and I'm so confused that I won't be able to finish writing 😢

This is my first serious review of a book, so please forgive me if it offends me. If the score is out of 10, I think it can be rated 8.2 1 (10 Points for story setting) A two-line structure is adopted in setting the world view, and the entire story background is unfolded from the perspective of Liang Lin. It is clear and easy to understand without losing suspense, and the theme selection is relatively novel. And the last few chapters form a perfect closed loop 2 (7 points for plot structure) The main line is clear and does not deviate from the plot. The structure of Chapter 62 is short and concise. If you have read it, you will feel that it is just right. But if you have not read it, haha, I think it is too short and you will not want to read it. Therefore, the lack of chapters is a major factor in the novel's low popularity. Three (9 points for character creation) The characters have distinct personalities, and the supporting characters are not just tool men, they have their own emotions, backgrounds and arcs. The growth and relationship changes of the protagonists Lin Han and Lin Xiumu are three-dimensional. A variety of methods are also used in shaping methods to allow readers to feel the mood and personality of the characters in details. Four (Writing and Narration 8 points) In terms of narrative, he is not only a simple lay out, but also good at using environmental descriptions to heighten the atmosphere and using objects (like pink notebooks) to hint. What is especially important is that the psychological descriptions are delicate, but some psychology is too complicated) Five (Personal experience, i. E. Reading experience, 7 points) I listened to the last 20 chapters in bed last night. When I listened, I really wanted to hit the author as a sandbag, so I got up and punched the air. Although this story is very reasonable, I want to ask you: wouldn't it be good to write Lin Han as Lin Xiumu's sister? Why are you torturing me?

Come on, the story is great! I watched it very carefully. Everyone's character is very distinct. Although the protagonist has two names, there is no confusion at all. It's super, super good, cheers for the author! It's a pity that no one sees it. I'll try my best to help you promote it😀

The story is great, but can you please be kind and tell me the direction of the plot? At present, it seems that Lin Xiumu is a super heartthrob... But in reality, Mu Qingfeng is weird. At least tell me if Lin Han has an official role QAQ

It looks good, the characters are well drawn, the storyline is exciting, and the psychological description of the characters is very impactful, but the ending...

What about my winter solstice? I won't give you an ending [what] [what]

It makes up for it a little bit.

I like this feeling of heartache. It's okay for the author to write a side story if he has nothing to do.

The rescued boy should fall in love with the savior at all costs Treasure author, great writing