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It's okay, it's just an invincible story at the beginning. What do you think about the fact that the main character's combat power is overwhelmed just after a few chapters?

It looks pretty good. It would be better if there are no knives in the follow-up.

I agree with this book. It has great potential and room for development. It feels like watching a TV series. It's great! ✧(◍˃̶ᗜ˂̶◍)✩The author must (emphasis added) not to stop updating, otherwise I will be sad ヾ(≧▽≦*)o, (and there is also Loli Kawaii) The best book, the best book! φ(゜▽゜*)♪

This book is very suitable to my taste (I think you gentlemen should be able to talk about it) [smirk], I will read anything about loli and tentacles, but there are too few at the moment. I hope the author will write more books, and I also hope this book will prosper. The author shouldn't cut the book all the time, it's very uncomfortable o(´^｀)o @radish

It's very nice, but a little lacking. Big boost to the author!

It's not bad, but the part where the two daughters were stripped naked felt a bit too toxic. I hope the author will work harder and try his best to make this book get better results (I hope the author will change the previous toxic points).

I'm a real fan too The book style is an imaginary world of Microgram series. A story about a time traveler who traveled to another world and became Gauze Nicholas. The cause is the system mission: Cultivate the nine sons of each race to become the most powerful. After that, the plot begins with the ninth son. (There are some things in the article that well-read people will understand: Wei Er) In the previous article, the second of the nine sons sneaked out and caused trouble. Since there was already an example of blowing up a city without being punished and being worried about their safety, it can be seen that Saya only cares about her ninth son, which also caused the second son to sneak out and cause trouble and be arrested and destroy the empire (none of the nine sons should be normal...) (Alice succeeds as the new king) The current plot is Zhiyuan's college life with a little bit of Saya's plot. In the early stage of the college life, it is relaxed and joyful. Later, Zhiyuan's exposure of the identity of the blood royal family leads to the revelation of the hidden ancestor of the blood clan (TM's just disappeared) (Saya goes crazy) The book describes a light-hearted yet dark style. Zhi Yuan's college story is very light and cheerful on the surface. Zhi Yuan's relationship with his roommate is light and sunny (Dai Lu) and the principal's sister's strict education has some unspeakable helplessness. However, he assassinated Zhi Yuan and others, she killed the students, and he kidnapped Zhi Yuan. This is a very dark world. From the darkness of a single person exposed by Saya's destruction of the empire, to the darkness of a group of high-ranking students who killed innocent people indiscriminately, evil has already appeared. (Please correct me if there are any errors or omissions. My memory is not good and I have forgotten the plot) The author's book review is a bit unclear. "It's not the protagonist, a certain white-haired dumpling." It doesn't mention who is not the protagonist or a certain white-haired dumpling, but the protagonist is most likely Paper Kite. The place where the plot begins is "Outside the Territory". So far, it has spawned the protagonists, the nameless fog that still isolates the outside world from the outside world, two outside gods, and the god Pan summoned by the altar (it is speculated that the three pillar gods, including Azathoth, are all outside the territory)

A soft and cute loli like a kitten, The devilishly cunning and seductive loli, A beautiful and natural Lolita like an elf, An angelic, pure and holy loli. A combination of all ideals and beauty, Lolita in fantasy... Inadvertently, I have been impressed by you. We are lolita control, Born for you. We are lolita control and we support you as our master. We are Lolicon, your loyal followers. I sing for you and paint for you, my waist is thin and my legs are thin, even the deer in the forest sigh. Bright eyes and beautiful face, the blue sky and clear moon make me feel ashamed. It's such a real, unadorned dream, Indestructible, our goddess... Show your Lolita ways!! Loli is the root of all female promiscuity. Everything is the will of the universe. Loli is the way to go~~~ Let's burn your Loli soul together. Let's close our eyes and imagine Loli's cute face, slightly raised breasts, and tender skin. Pink thighs. Red lips. Petite body. Shining. The faint fragrance on her body and the pure white panties. Hmm~~~~~. You are already impressed. What are you waiting for? Join us now. Please follow me and shout: Loli is so cute~~Loli is so awesome~~Loli is the way to go~~~~~ Carrying forward Luo Li Daodi's slogan~~~use your "words" to promote "truth"!! Use your "body" to realize the "kingly way"!! Use your "hands" to push down "Lori"!! Seize the "future" with your "sincerity"!!

I've watched a lot, except that the change from level 300 to level 100 is a bit toxic. Although I know it has not weakened the protagonist's strength, it is not enjoyable enough to watch. To be honest, I came in because of the novelty of the subject matter.

The protagonist is invincible. The current system is another personality of the protagonist. The previous one has been promoted (the second personality downgraded the level from 300 to 100, although it is fake, but the protagonist does not know), so you understand.

Saya is very timid, but her children are her enemies, so it is understandable that Saya destroyed the royal city to save Zhiyuan and Eve. After all, Saya is chaos, and she doesn't remember her past life. Zhiyuan and Eve were raised by Saya, and they have the tempers of children. Chaos and law are normal, so I don't know what they are talking about. However, the sensationalism between Alice and Sera later felt a bit awkward. (Well, I think it's a bit embarrassing) Finally, I'll deduct one point from you, keep up the good work. I want to see Shaye! I want to see Shaye! I want to see Shaye...

Although I don't know how to comment, I still like this book. I read the toxic points mentioned in the comments, and I don't think it's a big deal. After all, you have to arrange some surprises to make the story change, and the plot to have its ups and downs, so that it won't be dull. It is also a common writing method. Moreover, the article contains quite a lot of daily parts, which I personally think is relatively relaxing. The characters are also relatively distinct, and the writing style is okay. But what attracts me the most is the setting and theme of the article. As an evil lolita, she brings a bunch of babies of different races. (Not accurate, after all, I don't pay attention to details when reading, and I don't remember anything.) As for the Ke system... Although it has little to do with this article. However, if the author wants to write a plot related to evil gods, my suggestion is that it should be related to identity and thinking about good and evil, so that it will have a little depth. Of course, it doesn't matter whether it's deep or not. What's important is whether it's good-looking and whether readers can buy it. Anyway, we will pay the bill. Come on, author, support! ! ! (A lot of nonsense.)

This system is really, forget it, overall it's pretty good-looking. I don't know if I'll see this system disappear in my lifetime.

It was originally good to watch, but I felt a little uncomfortable watching the part where I was demoted [smile]

It's very interesting, very beautiful, the subject matter is very good, and I like the plot very much. Don't understand why the rating is so low.

Some people say that people with improper outlook on life kill people indiscriminately. Apart from the eldest sister, who is sure that she is human? And they didn't kill indiscriminately (either they were enemies or they were hostile) But the seventh daughter (I think she is the seventh) is really naughty.

Great book, but it's a pity it's gone. It seems I can find it now. Come out of the dark room?

It's quite to my liking, but the painting style is a bit darker. If you can't accept the protagonist and villain, don't read "Send the Heart", which is a Cthulhu novel with a more everyday style.

It's very nice. I hope you can control the scale. Tomato's website is often blocked for no apparent reason. Resurrection, I love books! 😭

I think it's pretty good After downgrading, the author later changed it back to [eating melon]. The downgrade was probably because the author was afraid that he would have nothing to write about, so he created Yaozi [laughing awkwardly]. After all, if you don't downgrade, how can there be a plot to save people later? Just use your strength to push over.

Who doesn't love tentacle lolita? I hope the author will write less poisonous points and the characters' values ​​​​do not be too dark, which can easily drive readers away.

It's broken. It seems like I've entered a dark room.

It's a nice comment. Those bad views and poisonous points are pure nonsense. Support the author greatly! ! ! [Blowing kiss]

Very well written, full of XP points

The content is actually quite good, that's why the rating is a bit low. The disadvantage is that the level is reduced from 300 to 100, which disgusts the impatient audience. Although it is written that this is just a trick of the system, it is actually still level 300, but it gives the audience a view that a boss has become a commoner and is still restrained by the system. If this stain is removed quickly, maybe the score can be higher. There are also many sub-lines at the back, which is not friendly to viewers who like to watch the main story, but there is nothing that can be done.

Author, I want to appear in your book [laughing evilly]

Why do I feel like the protagonist is not invincible enough?

It's super cool. Also, the level is still 300, but the protagonist doesn't know himself. The more you watch it, the better it gets. Don't be fooled [laughs] It's just that the main characters have bad views, but I like it [laughs evilly] Why is the popularity of it becoming less and less popular recently? Such a good book should not be buried

Loli+TieTie+Daily+Invincible+Micro combat. This is simply the love letter in my dream [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration]

Fortunately, there are enough good anime, otherwise it would be really difficult to imagine the characters in my mind. There are too many lolita.