Introduction to Transformation: from Boy to Mother

It's been a long time since I've seen a transformation story like this that excites me. The plot is not cliche. The author also likes to play jokes and add some counter-routines. There are also a lot of updates. The author said that it can be updated three times a day [laughing] I just cried to death, so when will it start?

Very good, I don't see any typos so far. In terms of the plot, I usually watch it without thinking, so it doesn't seem to have any bad points while playing it. The writing seems to be quite smooth and there is no watery plot. I will definitely watch it

Rating: Enough fun (we found a small amount of novels in the memes) Brain: It is recommended to throw it away (we are a masked fool, not a masked genius) Suggestion: Believe in the God of Music [Like] If you don't like it, turn right when you go out and learn about Bushi

Finally, there is a transformation story that is not a traditional one. I read it in one sitting and felt comfortable. Although some of the content is a bit logically unclear, there is not much problem with the overall look and feel; the writing is loose and oriented towards daily life.

The look and feel is very good [Send heartfelt support] Five-star support I don't like the parts after chapter 60. Well, I don't understand the function of chapters 60 to 70 anymore. That person like Wang keeps having a sense of presence. (Spread hands)

The ancient Greek god in charge of jokes and counter-routines This book is finally finished. Let me share my general thoughts. Generally speaking, it is a good book that has a beginning and an end. The reason for the low rating is due to insufficient book reviews and some development and character perceptions. Let's talk about the advantages of this book first. Advantages 1. The counter-routine ideas in the early plot are very good and create a very unique style. Advantage 2: The plot has its ups and downs. Although it can be regarded as a daily novel, it is not as flamboyant as other daily novels. Advantage 3: The characterization is pretty good, at least the protagonist Bai Ran left a deep impression on me. Next are the shortcomings, and to be honest there are quite a few. Disadvantage 1: The writing style in the early stage is completely different from the writing style in the middle and later stages, and there is a strong sense of fragmentation. The author himself also mentioned this problem when he finished. Disadvantage 2: In the middle of the plot, there is a plot where the protagonist Bai Ran is slandered and spread rumors. In this plot, as a person with a system, Bai Ran only knows how to escape blindly. Although the author wants to portray a strong character, most readers can only see cowardice and incompetence in this plot. This is Bai Ran's character problem, and then Fei Sha's character problem. Fei Sha's character problems are mainly concentrated in the early and middle stages of the plot. In the early and middle stages of the plot, the author seems to want to pave the way for a clear attack and defeat in the subsequent plot, but he did it too hastily, causing Fei Sha to become a self-righteous and very strong person in the eyes of some readers, which caused dissatisfaction among some readers. Disadvantage 3: Although the author agreed at the beginning to publish 16 consecutive chapters in one day to tell the ending, it is obvious that this ending is too hasty. The plot development speed of the first two hundred chapters is not as fast as that of these short 16 chapters. The author actually only gave 16 chapters to develop important characters such as Bai Ran's parents, and the time spent by the protagonist in these short 16 chapters is longer than the combined time of the previous two hundred chapters. More than twice that, at first glance, this seems to be no problem. Indeed, if you just read the paragraph I described, you will indeed think that this is nothing. However, his time span is not the kind of "several years have passed in a flash" in many works, but a very rough "a few days later, so and so will be like" and "a few years from now, so and so will be like", as if making an outline, this problem is very serious. If you want to finish it early, it is not the way to finish it. Oh, I also hope that the author can write better and better. By the way, I think the author can decide what type of book he will write next. The voting mechanism will greatly affect the reader's experience.

[Understood] Should I say it or not? The author must have been practicing for two and a half years since he has a lot of jokes. The book is also very good. Hey, the one star is missing because I am afraid that you will be proud [laughing evilly] Huh huh, if you catch an author, you'll get that star up [I understand] I'm probably a good person who is willing to help others [laughing evilly]

After reading chapter 70 of Run Lor Run [Eating Melon], I can't say it's not good, but it's just not suitable for me. Isn't the biggest problem with this somewhat self-motivated novel that there isn't even a character with a long mouth in it? [Chigua] I really don't know how to ask or tell, I just rely on my imagination.

It's very interesting. The plot of this book is not brainless. Xiao Bairan has a lively temperament, a strong vigilance, an active heart, and a weak sense of system presence. Sister Feisha is stable and gives the impression that she is not afraid of anything, but the more people are not afraid of anything, the more afraid they are of their wives [Chigua]

Let's solve that company as soon as possible, and the one with the surname Qin Hahaha, so perverted, we like it

It looks good, I love watching it, I like watching it. Come on, author (when will Xiaobai's life experience be revealed?) [Chigua] [Chigua]

Report: We found a handful of novels amidst the plethora of memes, crazy ideas, and nonsensical expansions. By the way#query the author's mental state#

Very good, I like the name Bai Ran

The first time I read it, I read more than 80 chapters and Fei Sha's scenes were not that many. I was a little confused the first time I read it. Then I saved 100 chapters and read it again. Many parts can be understood after careful reading. It is still very interesting. The emotional scenes are quite to my liking. I hope the author will continue to work hard. The characters of Bai Ran and Fei Sha are well described. The contrast and small details between the two are also handled very well. It is a very good book. Come on, author @jingfeng

Please support me, the rating is low

Very interesting article, made my head spin I just like this kind of plot where a big crisis suddenly occurs when everything is going well [eating melon]

The book is very appetizing, delicious and I love to eat it, five-star praise [send heartfelt]

Recommended reading, this book is really good!

It's so beautiful, you won't feel bored later [laughing]

Every time I read a chapter, the corners of my mouth look like the sun [making faces]

Pass on, the school beauty is an armed helicopter

Report, I found a small amount of fiction among a large number of memes

It's pretty good. I don't know why the rating is so low.

Quickly open a new book, it will be of the same type

The book is very good, but I only came here after seeing the system. The result is not a good article. I endured it for more than 40 chapters and did not change my combat power even if I had points. I have no expectations for the following chapters. The work is very good, five stars. Personal experience, one star, four stars overall.

Wow, I'm really looking forward to the next story. I really like watching this plot.

This is my favorite transformation story, I love the whole book including the protagonist and plot development. Like

It's pretty good-looking. At least the heroine is not a silly person. She has her own ideas and practices instead of blindly adapting to others. It would be nice if the post could be more detailed. It's a Lily novel worth reading. Not bad, worth watching

Bai Ran is pretty cute

The story is clear