Star Iron: the Road to God Beginning with Doctor Luofu

The writing style of this book is fresh and easy-going, which makes me feel like the wind blowing through the forest after the rain. It is soothing but also has a bit of imperceptible sadness. One glance at the thimble will tell you that there is a giant knife. The character portrayal is quite good, vivid and vivid, but not deep enough. It may be because there are few relevant plots. It is recommended to deepen the character portrayal, so that the emotional resonance will be stronger when you are a swordsman, and you will be able to cut out pearls with one sword and make them rain. The plot is simply unprecedented... Unprecedentedly exciting, with hidden foreshadowing throughout the text, and great plot transitions. The real book is like a firefly wrapped in bubbles, colorful and a bit dreamy. [Laughing evilly][attention][blowing kiss] Warygood.

At first, I only read it occasionally and planned to make a simple attempt, but after reading it carefully, I found that this author is a treasure! I will continue to follow this book

I hope that the author will write about the story of the opening of the Star Dome Railway in the future so that the character "Qinghui" of Brother Blade becomes a self-made character (although it is somewhat impossible, of course, I just hope that it doesn't matter even if you write it normally~ Of course I still like no cp)

Nice! At first I had the attitude of giving it a try, but after seeing a few pictures I was hooked! Come on, author!

It's a very good book. After all, most of the Star Rail fanfics are either Star Core Hunters or Star Dome Train. They are all the same and I don't want to read them. This book is different from others in terms of time line. It chooses a longer time to supplement readers' reverie about Wuxiao on the Cloud.

I think this article is very good, the writing is delicate, the character of the protagonist is very full, and the description of Wuxiao on the Cloud is clear and clear. It is heartwarming and not draggy at the same time. I am also thinking about what the author plans to do in the future. I can write about daily warmth, but I don't think it should be too much. In my opinion, Yun Shang and Wu Xiao are already getting along very well, and the protagonist's character design is almost saturated. What is the direction of the next mid-term? How will the author make the protagonist respected by Xianzhou after the Drinking Moon Rebellion? I think this is very important. Come on, author, don't let me down! Remember, you don't want a heroine! ! ! ! 5-Star review provided The author can speed it up a little bit. If this continues, no one will read it. Otherwise, let's write the Moon Drinking Rebellion in advance. Of course, if the author just wants to realize his dream, then write it in detail. I really love reading it! ! ! ! !

Not bad, except that the author is very short

It's so interesting, I love the atmosphere! !

Author, listen to what I'm telling you. Please update more quickly. This book is very beautiful, but there are too few chapters.

There won't be knives all over the back [I'm about to cry][Cry]

The so-called normal ending of Yun Shang Wu Xiao is not in the game, right? [Face covering] @ Eat and drink enough and go for a ride

It's a super nice book that suits my taste. It doesn't seem to be OOC (just a personal opinion). I hope the author can continue to update it. Don't interrupt it and don't get blocked.

It looks good, but my OC's father is named Qinghui, which is very similar to the protagonist's name... (Sweat) Inexplicable sense of substitution? (Laugh)

Update soon! ! ! Hum hum hum ah ah ah ah! ! ! ! If you don't update it again! ! ! The demonic body is about to attack! ! ! !

A treasured author, the writing is beautiful! ! ! It's just a little bit less (இωஇ )

Marvelous! Marvelous!

Awesome! Very well written [blowing kiss]( ´͈ ⌵ `͈ )σண♡

Brother, don't stop updating. You are the only fan of Xingtie who has this book and appetite. What do I think if you stop updating? Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh, you are not allowed to stop updating.

This is one of the best among Yunwu fans. The author is so powerful.

Very good book, this made my konjac relapse🌹

Beautiful, but I can't get enough of it

Why are there so few people?

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Good, good, good, look, look at that

It's hard to comment, after all, I don't play Star Rail either.

I have to wait online to see if there is a blade at the back. It's pretty urgent.

It turns out that the author of the novel that the protagonist is reading - after eating and drinking enough and taking a ride is the author of this book [laughing]

The protagonist is an Envoy of Abundance, but he is not as good as an ordinary Pathwalker of Abundance [Petrified]

Author, when will you come back?

Good looking After all, we tied it, crying.