Trapped in a Novel, Surrounded by Women Who Make the First Move, Even the Dragon King Is Furious

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I feel that this book is quite good. Trying to correct the plot does not mean that the plot must be corrected. The protagonist has his own emotions. Whether the plot is successful or not depends on the description. The protagonist is prepared. It is best to go back. If you can't go back, forget it. As for some people saying that they are too licky, etc. The protagonist is a young man. When he sees a good-looking person and invites him, there is no reason. If he refuses forcibly, will he not be able to get off the stage? Licking... Nowadays, if you show a little emotional care to a female character, it will be called licking... Is it called not licking if you let the heroine chase her and then ignore her? Isn't it normal to have good feelings and want to take care of you? Licking a dog... Is giving up oneself to adapt to others without a bottom line. In reality, if you have a good impression of others, don't you work hard to pursue it? Everyone is a rich second generation and extremely handsome? A woman takes the initiative to come up to you? How can we not call it a licking dog... [Eat melon] [eat melon] [eat melon]

The description is very attentive. I have read a lot of diaries in Lu. This one is very good. Come on, the author, and update it!

The writing is okay, it feels like a normal person writing a diary (personal feeling). Come on, keep updating [Like][Like]

The protagonist almost realizes that the heroines can see the diary. In fact, the heroines did not fall in love with the protagonist directly because of the diary. It is based on [surprise-curiosity-exploration-magic-favorability-thrilling-like]. The reason why everyone has seen that the female protagonists fall in love with the male protagonist is because the author writes very quickly in the [surprise-curiosity-exploration-favorability] stage, especially those who appear later are directly introduced in the [favorite] stage. It is normal for the emotional scenes in harem novels to progress very quickly. After all, it is not the case that there is only one female protagonist, and a lot of writing can be spent on polishing the emotional scenes. If the harem novel polishes the emotional scenes, it can at least cover a thousand chapters or more than a million words.

It is easy to dissuade readers at the beginning, especially when the male protagonist sees that Song can't walk. I was almost dissuaded at first, but now I think that many tomato novels are not written well at the beginning. On the one hand, the middle and later stages are better, and I will be patient and read again later to avoid being beaten to death. Later, I set the male protagonist I saved it a little bit. I didn't describe the male protagonist so much that he saw the beauty really couldn't move. The emotional description later was quite delicate. Nowadays, many harem novels have a lot of female protagonists, but the emotional aspects are not well written and not delicate. I hope that the emotions of each female protagonist can be well described, and I can also reject Lily! Say no to Lily! ! Say no to Lily! ! ! I personally have a psychological shadow and cannot accept it. I will deduct one star for now and look forward to whether the relationship will be properly portrayed and Lily rejected in the future!

I fucking put myself in it [shocked]

"Come, author, read aloud with me: "I hereby promise all readers that from today on, I will not travel, get sick, or become addicted to literature. I will strictly exercise self-discipline, work hard, and enjoy writing novels. I will become steel after being tempered a hundred times. I will be worthy of my readers, my youth, and my future." I will turn into a pencil in the night, a guard on the giant city of novels, and I will voluntarily dedicate my life to this, every night...[Laughing][laughing]"

In similar villain stories, I think it can reach 80 points or above. If I get a little anxious in the later stage, it can reach 90 points. On the whole, the diary routine in the early stage is similar to the voice routine in the later stage, and the plot is relatively smooth, but the parts involving the system can be optimized in the later stage. The protagonist is a normal person, not a psychopath like Chuunibyou who likes to take people's lives seriously and thinks he is superior to others. The heroine's portrayal is very rich, and she can be considered three-dimensional in a villain novel. She doesn't just label her character like the protagonist and become mindless and angry. She has her own pursuits and ideas. It's astringent, and it's well written.

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