In the Book, the Women Made Counter-Inferences, and the Dragon King Went Crazy

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I feel that this book is quite good. Trying to correct the plot does not mean that the plot must be corrected. The protagonist has his own emotions. Whether the plot is successful or not depends on the description. The protagonist is prepared. It is best to go back. If you can't go back, forget it. As for some people saying that they are too licky, etc. The protagonist is a young man. When he sees a good-looking person and invites him, there is no reason. If he refuses forcibly, will he not be able to get off the stage? Licking... Nowadays, if you show a little emotional care to a female character, it will be called licking... Is it called not licking if you let the heroine chase her and then ignore her? Isn't it normal to have good feelings and want to take care of you? Licking a dog... Is giving up oneself to adapt to others without a bottom line. In reality, if you have a good impression of others, don't you work hard to pursue it? Everyone is a rich second generation and extremely handsome? A woman takes the initiative to come up to you? How can we not call it a licking dog... [Eat melon] [eat melon] [eat melon]

The description is very attentive. I have read a lot of diaries in Lu. This one is very good. Come on, the author, and update it!

The writing is okay, it feels like a normal person writing a diary (personal feeling). Come on, keep updating [Like][Like]

The protagonist almost realizes that the heroines can see the diary. In fact, the heroines did not fall in love with the protagonist directly because of the diary. It is based on [surprise-curiosity-exploration-magic-favorability-thrilling-like]. The reason why everyone has seen that the female protagonists fall in love with the male protagonist is because the author writes very quickly in the [surprise-curiosity-exploration-favorability] stage, especially those who appear later are directly introduced in the [favorite] stage. It is normal for the emotional scenes in harem novels to progress very quickly. After all, it is not the case that there is only one female protagonist, and a lot of writing can be spent on polishing the emotional scenes. If the harem novel polishes the emotional scenes, it can at least cover a thousand chapters or more than a million words.

It is easy to dissuade readers at the beginning, especially when the male protagonist sees that Song can't walk. I was almost dissuaded at first, but now I think that many tomato novels are not written well at the beginning. On the one hand, the middle and later stages are better, and I will be patient and read again later to avoid being beaten to death. Later, I set the male protagonist I saved it a little bit. I didn't describe the male protagonist so much that he saw the beauty really couldn't move. The emotional description later was quite delicate. Nowadays, many harem novels have a lot of female protagonists, but the emotional aspects are not well written and not delicate. I hope that the emotions of each female protagonist can be well described, and I can also reject Lily! Say no to Lily! ! Say no to Lily! ! ! I personally have a psychological shadow and cannot accept it. I will deduct one star for now and look forward to whether the relationship will be properly portrayed and Lily rejected in the future!

I fucking put myself in it [shocked]

"Come, author, read aloud with me: "I hereby promise all readers that from today on, I will not travel, get sick, or become addicted to literature. I will strictly exercise self-discipline, work hard, and enjoy writing novels. I will become steel after being tempered a hundred times. I will be worthy of my readers, my youth, and my future." I will turn into a pencil in the night, a guard on the giant city of novels, and I will voluntarily dedicate my life to this, every night...[Laughing][laughing]"

In similar villain stories, I think it can reach 80 points or above. If I get a little anxious in the later stage, it can reach 90 points. On the whole, the diary routine in the early stage is similar to the voice routine in the later stage, and the plot is relatively smooth, but the parts involving the system can be optimized in the later stage. The protagonist is a normal person, not a psychopath like Chuunibyou who likes to take people's lives seriously and thinks he is superior to others. The heroine's portrayal is very rich, and she can be considered three-dimensional in a villain novel. She doesn't just label her character like the protagonist and become mindless and angry. She has her own pursuits and ideas. It's astringent, and it's well written.

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Seeing that each character of the heroine is very clear now, I feel that the author wants to portray the protagonist's psychology more realistically, but the black and white boundaries of this subject matter are too blurred, and they are not as liberal as the traditional Long Aotian, and he does not want to be a villain. I can only say that the author can control this himself.

The female characters in this novel are brought to life by the author, which is really good. Ling Na makes people feel pitiful, Ye Linglong makes people feel sorry, and Song Hongyan, who I like, every character is great, and the male protagonist is also a gentle and strong person. Everyone in the author's works is wonderful, and I am not rushing to update it! I just wanted to ask if you could write more!

It's very beautiful, why is the rating so low? And that diary is originally a feature of this novel! I personally think it's very good-looking, and I hope the author will continue to work hard, but it's just too little. 👍👍👍🌹🌹🌹

This type is finally normal.

This is a text that breaks the fourth wall The underlying logic is based on the broken Dragon King article and then create plot conflicts It's "normal" to feel that it's often unreasonable because the underlying logic is "abnormal" The writing style is a bit immature, but the writing is still smooth, pretty good and creative. In order to advance the story, it is a bit uncomfortable to forcibly reduce the intelligence of the heroine who jumped out of the Dragon King plot. The male protagonist's motivation is too bad

Lingna, Qingxue is the best, the eternal palace [please update] Xin Song just wants to take advantage of the male protagonist and is very annoyed at the beginning. It doesn't matter if the other female protagonists accept it or not, as long as there are no big poisonous points, Lingna, Qingxue just keeps being nice to them both [Sending Hearts]

In fact, I think these are the reactions of normal people [face covering] It's not like some people who write diaries and deliberately write curse words to highlight their differences to make the female protagonist pay attention. This male protagonist is very special. He only records some ordinary things about himself and does not deliberately insult or say anything about others.

Alas, there are so few good-looking diaries like this. There are a few that I kept reading and then suddenly finished. This one, I think, is pretty good and I can write a lot about it. It was finished all at once [crying] [crying] [crying]

It's quite interesting. The diary is probably an inner monologue type. It's not like other stories where you write down the plot content in the diary and then repeat the content again. In the end, you just complain about what's wrong here in the diary.

In fact, it is a really good diary. The male protagonist is not as cowardly as the male protagonists in the same type of diary. Instead, he is relatively strong. The heroine's character is also one that I like very much. The final ending is very hasty, probably because of poor grades. In fact, the poor grades are simply the author's own fault. The male protagonist doesn't respond to the female protagonist's feelings and just drags her away. It's strange that readers like it. In the end, he has a relationship with the female protagonists at the end, which can be regarded as an ending.

I hope the author can write more stories about Lina. She really feels a bit pitiful. I hope there can be more plot about her. I really like this character.

I suspect that the author has read "Super Home Son-in-Law" in which the heroine's name is somewhat the same, and the plot is also [laughing]

Men should become strong for others, compete with each other and give their best to fight, because behind them are the lights of thousands of families.

In fact, many protagonists who travel through the world of novels don't understand Yidian. From the time he traveled in, the protagonist changed. That is the time traveler itself. After all, there are cheats and we readers are watching. Hey-hey

Can there be more plots between Lin Qingxue and Lingna? It's so comfortable. From my current experience, Song Hongyan can't adapt to it.

So far, I have found that the writing style of this book is pretty good, the logic is acceptable, the plot and characterization of the characters are detailed and compact, and it is a small novel. I hope it won't collapse in the future. Encouragement [like][like][like]

It was very good before 3.3, But the plot changed after the update, and I like the previous one better. I started watching it when it was episode 40

Reasonable doubt,,, in the end, God's will stopped because the male protagonist became the son of destiny,,,, the only flaw is,,, why not accept the remaining female protagonists! ! ! It's too short! !

What's the matter? Brother, it's so slow. [Stare] [Stare] Update quickly [Blow a kiss] [Blow a kiss] [Blow a kiss]

Personally, I think this book is quite good. Why can't it be ranked higher?