Blue Sea: After Graduating from Practical Teaching, I Just Want to Be Bad

It's not that your writing is not good, it's just that as I read it, the more I wanted to write about my shabby book, but I really didn't want to! ! ! (Wrapped up on the bed like maggots, screamed and twisted, rolled out of bed, crawled darkly to his parents' room, and then was whipped)

The writing is very good and very enjoyable, but the frequency of the protagonist and heroine's appearance is a bit low, and Sakayanagi's IQ is written too... After all, it is just a comedy. My biggest hope is that the frequency of the hero and heroine's appearance is higher, and more dog food can be spread.

The writing is good, but in The Blue Sea, it's the first time I see such a serious protagonist.

The Blue Sea fanfic is rarely seen, and the writing is pretty good.

Not many people have written "Blue Sea" to begin with, and the author's writing is almost as funny as the original and has its own pace. I feel that this book is very well written. Hope to continue working hard.

All I can say is that it's very uncomfortable to watch. It's not the first person, and it's wrong to say it's not. All in all, it's very confusing.

It's better to just read the comics, and the plot of the male and female protagonists has not changed at all.

The writing is very good, the heroine is Sakayanagi Arisu, and the male protagonist has a good personality, but the only flaw is that it is too slow! ! !

The fanfics of Blue Sea are basically the same as the original work, except for the addition of an irrelevant person [rolls eyes]

No, use "" better, it's a little twisted.

Encourage [note]

Very nice book

Come on, a combination I never thought of. If it is well written, it will definitely be a good work [Like] The above evaluation, alas, remains unchanged, but the main thing that needs to change is that there are a little less scenes between the male and female protagonists.

If the family relationship is not handled well, it can be completely ignored. The protagonist's participation is too low. If you remove the protagonist's role, you are completely watching the original work. The protagonist is like an outsider.

The sentences are too messy and I feel like they haven't been sorted out at all. Also, don't just write about the contents of the Blue Sea comic. To be honest, the content of Blue Sea is a bit lacking.

To be honest, the protagonist is an outsider who has no actual role except for being named as a brother, including the younger sister. After all, he is also a big brother.

It's pretty good, good luck to the author

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking