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Author, are you really not afraid that you won't be able to attract young girls when you wash your feet? [Laughing and crying] It's always so short

Author, did you really go to high school? No, this is all an illusion. A very real novel, you will know after reading it, the author must have personal experience

The plot is clear and natural, and the logic is rigorous. The author writes it well. It's very beautiful.

Although this book is really well written, the single heroine of Tomato falls into a routine situation. The author is pursuing anti-realistic pleasure. The core is pleasure, so it will be out of touch with reality and seem unnatural. Especially urban (especially rebirth) multi-female protagonist stories are implemented to the extreme. The motivation for people to read becomes novel settings and a sense of curiosity that goes against conventional routines. If such a novel is of high quality, it can last for a while. Otherwise, you will quickly lose interest after the initial novelty period (move it off the bookshelf (fog)). This article is more realistic (maybe because I am a boy and feel it more deeply). The descriptions of the male and female protagonists are relatively detailed, especially the various actions of the male protagonist, which are too real (empathizing with the rat people), and have lost the sweetness of other single female protagonists with detailed descriptions, so that it will not read like eating. It's like a big mouthful of candy, and you'll get tired of it after just a few mouthfuls. I haven't read many of this kind of writing on Tomato (there seem to be only three books on the bookshelf). Things are rare and valuable. It's good to see this kind of treasure among the uneven quality of new books on Tomato (I have read a total of 276 new books, and they are almost invulnerable). Finally, I would like to give you a small suggestion. The heroine can have more psychological descriptions. Let us know the attitude of the heroine accurately instead of expressing it in this indirect way. Generally speaking, if you want to read this book with a single heroine, it is definitely recommended to buy it (the author will read more and love to read it. It is another 100,000-word debut. I believe you [send my heart])

This book is really good-looking, written very close to reality, plain but not mediocre. It really feels like going to college again. Author, don't stop updating, I really like this book [cry][cry][cry]

The writing style is very delicate, and it is very comfortable to read. The protagonist has the shadow of the previous books but has unique characteristics. I like this kind of protagonist very much. Every character is worthy of consideration. The best thing is that it is really comfortable, smooth, elegant, peaceful and far-reaching. I hope more people will like this book, I sincerely hope.

Worthy of being the master of the bathing city

A super nice sweet campus romance novel! The most rare thing is that under the current trend, the author can not rely on time travel or the system, and even the male protagonist is tall, handsome and rich, and he can't even play basketball, which is a traditional necessity for campus online novels. But he is still able to write all kinds of fascinating pure love plots, which is amazing!

Yes, this book is very interesting. Compared with other "ordinary" protagonists, this one is very novel, because there is nothing transcendent from reality, only the protagonist's efforts and the feelings of a normal person, not someone like a teddy in other books of the same type. I think about it, I feel like the author of the Tomato part can't live without writing about Teddy. Xu Fan, I think, is also very detailed about the characters. The tall, thin and introverted handsome guy is great, but he has a fatal flaw, he is too sexy. I hope the author will work hard to change his shortcomings.

It's a daily refreshment, but the update is too slow [laughs awkwardly]. Twelve o'clock every night. Little Freshness starts on time [laughing]

It's still a familiar style, but it's missing some soul [laughing evilly]

Well written, but too short

It's very good, but the author stopped updating it [angry]. I finally found a novel that suits me, but the author stopped updating it before I finished it [angry]

No one reads such a good book?

The male protagonist's senior year life without the female protagonist is the most realistic senior year, while adding the companionship of the female protagonist is the senior year of high school for a few people, but it is also real and colorful, the writing is smooth, and it is natural without carvings. It seems that the author has become a master. You will definitely not regret it if you fall into the trap. If you like watching Long Aotian, just pretend I didn't say anything.

Wok's writing is so true. This article is really rare in Persimmon.

It's been two days since I updated [crying][crying][crying] Update soon ahhhhhhhhhh [crying] I really like it [crying]

Update the author quickly, otherwise I will curse you and never be able to go in and wash your feet [sneaky laugh][sneaky laugh][punch out][punch out]

No, Liu Yun is as big as me [punches hard]

I have only read a few chapters, but the writing style is very comfortable and I like it very much. There are very few such articles nowadays.

Good looking, good quality and quantity. But what about the author's other little theater?

This book is the most realistic book I have ever read about daily life, but I personally don't like this realistic style, but that doesn't stop me from thinking the author writes well. I stopped reading after 35 chapters, just a taste. If you like this type, you can give it a read. It's pretty good. It doesn't seem to have any bad points at the moment.

You have begged me and I must be giving you face [shy][shy][shy]

Really good, very delicate

Why is the book rated so low?

Alas, it's still pretty good, but I feel a bit depressing for some reason when reading it (personal feeling, maybe it's my own problem, please don't complain)

It's quite beautiful, a beauty that doesn't belong to tomatoes

Very real, a different kind of love novel

Not bad. The youth generation.

Nice, new style, very interesting