After the Start of the Wind, I Will Cultivate My Immortality in the Pavilion.

This is one of the few snow fanfics I have seen on Tomato that is well written. I personally prefer this kind of system setting (which does not force the protagonist to do tasks). For system articles, the simpler the function, the more the author's writing style will be tested. This author's writing is still good, and the characters are not empty. Personally, I feel that both novices and old bookworms can eat it with confidence.

The writing is good, and it is very interesting to read so far. I hope that the rhythm will not break when the world view becomes richer later.

Come on, it's well written and I'll give you the motivation to keep reading.

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Although it's small, it's full of flavor and looks good.

How should I put it, if you don't consider the author's second creation, this book can be read. However, the plot is relatively bland or relatively slow, and there are currently very few battle plots. To be more honest, based on the plot of the novel involved in the second creation, I guess many people will not be able to stand it. Apart from the changes to the characters and the direction of the plot in the snow, basically everything else has been changed. In terms of rating, it is estimated to be 8.0 At most. After all, judging from the first dozen chapters, many people will not be able to stand it. Come on, author, the plot can be a little tighter.

The writing is quite good, although it is almost the same as the previous one, but don't be a eunuch [laughs awkwardly]

Good writing, keep it up

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

Good luck to the author!

The writing is sophisticated and the plot is passionate. I hope it will continue to maintain a high standard.

The writing is quite good, I just hope that I can do better this time.

This novel is the most high-quality book I have read recently. I hope the author can work harder and update it more.

High-quality works, recommended for twenty years + reading age

Five-star praise and support

I personally think the idea is clever and the plot is compact. Personally, I feel like the pace is a bit fast. The character setting is okay, and the character setting is relatively clear. I hope the author will continue to work hard! Personally, I think it's okay if the writing is not fast, as long as the quality is good. (For reference only)

The writing is very immersive and the writing style is good.

This book can be regarded as a relatively good fanfic. The main plot is still in the snow, but it depends on the later expansion. The protagonist improves so fast that it is dizzying. Within one year, he has reached the journey that the protagonist once took in five or six years.

At present, it can be rated above 9.5 Points

You should use the Eight Magic Skills. You can keep the offspring.

? ? ? Just one yang finger, can it be recorded by the Tianshan plum-folding hand? How can he be so powerful and still just the King of Northern Liang?

Normally, I should give him four stars. Why give it five stars? It's probably because of his worldview that I was shocked. Is this still a powerful sword in the snow? Why does it feel like another book? I really hope that the writing style in the next few volumes can be a little more indulgent and grand. Why did I change it to another 30 minutes? Because I felt very uninterested when I heard it later. If you can take it off even if you sweat in the snow, I don't recommend this behavior. It sounds awkward.

It looks great and fulfills my fantasy of being in the snow. The plot in Snow is different, so it is suitable to be read as a new book. You can read it even if you haven't read the original work.

Although the author is too lazy to even name the protagonist, it does not prevent it from being interesting. Unlike other fans who regard Wang Xianzhi as a master of martial arts, the protagonist has become invincible since he first entered the world in Tingchao Pavilion and avenges his master. In the traditional story in the snow, the Qin, Tang, Han, Ming, Beimang, and Liyang kingdoms compete for hegemony are added. People are looking forward to the following stories.

How to put it, first of all, this is a mixed martial arts novel, and then his realm is a very typical peak and perfect, and there is Tingchao Pavilion or something in it. Although I want to give the protagonist the possibility of cheating, but it is a bit too big. The king of the opposite sex in a country, the book collection at home has most of the martial arts secrets in the mixed martial arts world, it is a bit abstract, and I haven't read it yet.

The writing is okay, the rating shouldn't be so low.

Good-looking, really good-looking

It's a good, no-brainer novel, but there are a lot of typos.

It gives people the feeling of being uneducated but likes to ramble on crazily.

The relationship in the world is too grand, how will you deal with it later?