Opening a Martial Arts Gym with a Baby, Suddenly I Became Invincible

The story is very exciting, the writing is very unique, and it is very beautiful [Like] [Please update]

A very novel novel, not a traditional martial arts novel. I highly recommend it. It's still pretty good to read now. There's nothing wrong with it. I'll forget the author. Keep up the good work. Don't write too fast. Stay true to your heart and don't end it.

A rare good book! One of the few that makes me willing to give five stars! Come on, author!

How can such a good novel not be updated soon? The little carp is so cute! It must be cured, don't wait until you grow up!

It's pretty good. There's no brainless villain, and there's nothing poisonous about it.

The protagonist is short of money to treat his daughter's illness and has registered several martial arts copyrights. Why does he only teach one swordsmanship publicly? Anyway, you don't need to teach the full version. You can make more money faster by teaching more, and you won't have no energy to make friends, because the male protagonist is quite idle most of the time [Thinking] I heard the latest chapter. The background of the story is similar to that of the Republic of China, with ancient buildings and cars, martial arts practiced across the country, and sea tribes (monsters) on the sea. I hope my daughter's illness will be cured soon.

Not to mention anything else, Little Carp is written vividly. The image of a lively, cute, innocent and kind-hearted little girl is realistic and resonant. Parents can relate to it. For this reason alone, it deserves a five-star rating!

I thought this novel was just like that, meaningless, but it was unexpectedly good-looking, not boring, interesting, and there was no awkward chat between you and me in the fights. It was just a slap to death with a dragon's roar. The little carp was also interesting. The father's love and guilt for his daughter could not make her daughter feel a little wronged. It was really short, grandma's, shortdddddddddddddddd

This is too short, not enough to watch at all

What a wonderful experience! The author combines the magical skills in Jin Yong's martial arts world with the protagonist of this book to show them in the world of the text, and it is so exciting that it is refreshing. The protagonist and his lovely daughter have distinct personalities, and the characters in the article have their own characteristics! Those who love martial arts novels must not miss it.

Different martial arts novels, different experiences, and if I continue to write them with girls as the theme, it will be very interesting.

Twenty years later, relying on the help of the system and your own hard training, your force value has reached the pinnacle of this world. However, you will never forget that rainy night ten years ago. The little carp is ill, but you still can't wait for the plot related to Yiyangzhi. You have no choice but to take the risk and use the Nine Yang Manual obtained not long ago to remove the cold air from the little carp's body. But how can a sickly little girl who has never practiced cultivation withstand the invasion of two kinds of energy: cathode and yang? Little Carp, your daughter, such a cute little angel, her meridians all over her body were broken, her fair skin was chapped everywhere, and she was vomiting blood. Thunder sounded in the sky, and the little carp died.

If you can still see the little carp at the end of the novel, I won't be deprived of giving you 5 stars for this novel! Liuyin Juemai is a terminal disease for ordinary people, but there are exclusive exercises for practitioners. Don't forget to write about the little carp!

If possible, resurrect the male protagonist's wife [take a closer look]

I didn't really want to watch the children's part, so I skipped it. Besides, there are no interesting parts like "Little Fierce" and "Cerebellar Ax" of the elbow. If you want to write about those things, you might as well write about farming. As for martial arts, it's better to be more enjoyable and more exciting. It's just my personal opinion, I'm not here to spoil your thinking, I just hope you can find some interesting parts.

Four stars for little carp Summary: Dalian Shuangwen in the modern entertainment industry dressed as martial arts, with a mindless plot within a classic, only for those under 18 years old to watch

The writing is okay, but I feel that the protagonist's martial arts are actually very vague when compared with today's martial arts. Your concept is not clear enough. It would be great if you could write down the division of martial arts more clearly. Come on, author

As an old bookworm, there are very few books that I can catch up on. The characters in this book have distinct and real personalities, with their own logical personalities and behavioral habits. Not sloppy, really acceptable! Especially the protagonist and the protagonist's daughter are very lovable! ! Five-star recommendation! ! !

Such a good novel, but the rating is so low? The little carp is so cute. [Laughing]

The idea is clear. Although martial arts is the main theme, the author has his own unique ideas in conception.

If you want to eat, go ahead and eat. You pretend to be a pig and eat a tiger. You really think of yourself as a pig. Others come to kill you. If you seriously injure your opponent, you let him go. The positive comments you see in book reviews are all paid or open a small account.

How should I put it? The book I read can forgive anyone who kills his father and his mother. He is very good, and he licks women no matter what he does. It is also very ugly and has no villains. There are only a few little karaokes, but they are nothing. My personal opinion is for reference only. It is not easy to write a book. I give it a five-star rating.

This is a good book. It is essentially a sweet article about raising a daughter. In fact, it is, but there is something that cannot be ignored, and even some unforgettable sadness, especially for us old guys who are half dead. The whole text revolves around the protagonist accompanying her daughter, but whether she is the daughter's mother Or perhaps the daughter's physical condition is filled with deep sadness, and she is loved only by her mother. This involuntary sense of commonality makes it really easy to bring it into the article. It can be said that this book already has some artistic value, surpassing the Internet article, but lower than the literature article. I can write this It can be said that the author of this kind of novel either has the same emotional resonance, or has seen all kinds of life, all kinds of colors, and has his own understanding of life. Regardless of whether he or she has one thing in common, they have one thing in common, that is, they have written their feelings into the novel. Novel without emotion, That's called fast food, and a novel with emotions is called an article. Therefore, five stars can only be said to be tomatoes. Only five-star reviews cannot be higher. I suggest all book friends to read it patiently and experience another kind of beauty called art that is different from fast food. Different experiences will bring you different reading pleasures.

The four-star rating given to the little carp is very cute and lovable. What can I say about this book? It can be like millet porridge occasionally to nourish the spleen and stomach, but if you don't read it for a while, you may not have the desire to read it again. The novel basically revolves around being a daughter's slave, with some decorations, and then there is not much else to watch. It revolves around the storyline of relatives and friends. There is no main line and it is a bit bland. It is considered a family novel. If you want to read a refreshing article, you can refer to it. This book highlights that the daughter is very cute, and the protagonist is pitiful because he has no pursuit, and because he is worried that his daughter is basically an earthbound spirit.

After reading all the updated chapters, I went back and looked at the category of the book "Urban Imagination". When I looked at the title, I thought it was a martial arts novel, but after reading it I realized it was a daily novel about a dad raising a baby. So if you want to read it, don't be misled by the title. Otherwise, if you read this book as a martial arts novel, you will feel that it is written in an incomprehensible way! But it can still be read as a life novel. Jianghu means fighting and killing, martial arts means fighting and killing! The author should not mislead everyone with some book titles, otherwise it will be very detrimental to the ratings! I gave it four points because of the protagonist's daughter. I also have two daughters. Come on, give up.

The writing is good, at least I can read it. I don't know the reason for the low rating, but there are really few updates. I like this kind of ordinary invincibility. It's fun to bring a baby, but it usually collapses later on. But I just started the book and I don't know why the rating is low. How can I put it? The monthly updates are over the top. Or maybe it's too little and I haven't finished reading it yet, and the content and information are pitiful. So it can also be said that it is the kind that is filled with water but not allowed to drink.

It's a very novel theme of Jianghu. It's an anime that I really want to watch - Changing World Disciple. It basically takes the perspective of Changing Disciple. It's the first time I've seen a novel with this kind of Jianghu as the theme and it's very appetizing. It's really rare.

What to do? What to do? I met a 30-year-old young woman on the Internet. We have been chatting very well for more than half a year. Today she asked to meet. I hesitated. I said you have a family and it didn't feel good. But she said it was okay and we were just ordinary friends. So I agreed and asked her for a photo. She looked pretty. She lives in my city. Not far away, we made an appointment to meet at a milk tea shop. We didn't choose to meet somewhere else for fear of meeting an acquaintance. I arrived first that day because she had to drive for several hours. While waiting, I looked at the photos and thought it was another "car rollover scene." Most mobile phones have beauty functions, but when she got out of the Mercedes-Benz, I recognized her at a glance. She looks much prettier in person than in the photos, and she is my favorite type, and she also recognized me! I didn't know what to say. In order to break the embarrassment, she suggested hugging me. I said yes. She smelled very good. I jumped and sat in the milk tea shop for a while. We went to eat, and she basically didn't eat much. During the whole process, she was peeling shrimps and picking fish bones for me. When we walked out of the restaurant after dinner, she held my hand and I didn't break away. She said she would take me home, and I said I would take a taxi back. She insisted on taking me back. When I got home, I found that she had put a note in her bag, which said: Update ten chapters to unlock subsequent content.

The subject matter is okay, there are too many daily ones, but that's not the main point. The main point is that the update is too slow. I thought this was a new book, but when I saw that the book review also mentioned the time of last year's New Year, I wrote so much in more than a year. What a talent. .

The writing is beautiful, the narrative is smooth and natural, and can be sent and received freely. The climax is like rolling water and majestic, and the low point is like spring breeze and rain, moistening things silently. The external expressions and inner descriptions of the characters are as vivid and vivid as if there is divine help. It makes people marvel and cannot bear to put down the book!