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It was good at first, but why are you writing this business article inexplicably? If you write like before, even if the writing is not very good, I will give you five stars. After all, there are not many dark articles now, but what is the matter with you writing this business article? How many more times do you hit the earth with the moon like before!

Your business can be briefly discussed in two or three chapters, right? So carefully...

Is it reasonable to have a 50/50 fight with Superman but not be able to kill the protagonist? Is it reasonable to not be able to kill the protagonist backstage? You have completely fallen into the eyes of women.

The protagonist is really a loser among losers. He has super telekinesis and gets people killed? ? ? Don't take revenge after surviving for the first time! Are you still using your telekinesis to go out? ? ? ? Let someone die a second time? ? ? Still scared? ? ? ? Hidden to another world? ? ? ? ? What kind of garbage protagonist is this? ? ? ?

It looks good from the front. Suddenly give me a business with dozens of chapters. I look at you as a hammer. You don't delete it. Your book will be useless

Anti-personality also wants to create a business empire. I will smash the moon on the face of the earth and ask you to take money. If you dare not give it, I will play in every world. Who the hell dares not to give it. If you don't give it, it's just a waste of 200 points.

It was quite interesting when I first watched it, especially the fight with Superman, although it was very short. There are many parts of this book that I skipped through, such as the business empire and the villain's live broadcast. I didn't even know how the protagonist became a god, so I didn't bother to read it. The introduction of this book attracted me at first. You gave the protagonist such fighting power. Instead of wrestling with the DC God, Life Tribunal, Azathoth and other supreme beings until transcendence, and not going to the prehistoric era to truly transcend and become a god, you gave the protagonist unlimited growth, immortality, and power comparable to the supreme blue and white realm. Instead of going to the real infinite heavens to play stacking infinite boxes, are you playing here limited to the earth? Blue Star? A fan of low magic and low martial arts? Or a parallel world? To be honest, I look down on you, author. Do you think you have low vision or too little imagination? I really despise the so-called protagonist who is unrestrained and free after becoming a god. The people of the motherland are so tall and advanced, but they are not humanoid self-propelled seeders? Judging from your introduction, you mentioned that high combat power requires a fighting plot. Well, besides that Superman plot, which one is worthy of being called a fighting plot? Looking at your introduction, I thought it sounded like Wang Ba, but with your combat power settings, any one of Wang Ba's can break through the upper limit of your combat power. To put it bluntly, your book is too small-minded and has no structure for your love and obscenity. It would take two or three chapters for a woman. It's a noob article. In terms of combat power setting, it's somewhere in the middle between not 💩 and yes 💩. About a quarter of the whole article is written by a person who wrote it.

The writing is pretty good, but the main character sucks inside and out.

Putting aside the business empire, I haven't seen it yet. A small ordinary person can kill the protagonist. A mother box only costs 2 million. Those who don't know it think it's rotten cabbage.

Not bad, just don't always write about things in shopping malls, these are not good-looking [awkward laugh][awkward laugh][awkward laugh]

If you want cool writing, then cool writing. If you want business, go business. The hybrid you created doesn't look good at all.

Infinite telekinesis, that is, telekinesis, cannot control a movie version of Superman? As they say, the poisonous point, Chapter 29 to Chapter 59, I didn't even hold on there, how did you hold on?

This was supposed to be a cool article, but the way it was written was really unsettling [face covering]

Even if you write a good article, why don't you feel happy?

Generally speaking, he has invincible strength. Why bother? Let an ordinary person kill twice and there will be psychological shadow. I just put it down for daring to protect the Yi tribe.

Very good dark series, urban and worldly motherland humanities The protagonists in this author's books are generally very rational, decisive, have clear goals, and have online IQs. Every book is very short, and this one is just as short.

The front is okay, but why do you go to business? This is water injection, right?

Immature thoughts can easily be distorted

Obvious author's compliment

It's pretty cool, but what about your A%&V? I just saw you running away to the United States.

Good book, I like reading it, cheers for the author

A lot of fun to watch

It looks good, but that's why I couldn't find the new book you were going to write on your last post.

First of all, you can actually skip reading novels with this kind of world type. For example, you can skip the type of world you don't like. It may slightly affect the reading experience, but it won't have a big impact.

It's pretty, cool, and fast-paced