She Becomes a God

For the grandma inside, Tiandao Mama gave her five-star praise [laugh][laugh][laugh]

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The writing is smooth and engaging. The story is complete. Two protagonists and two heroines, but it is a very deep and profound friendship that can depend on each other for life and death. At the same time, neither of them likes love, which is fine. No sexual relationship. Let's talk about the protagonist again, one is smart and has many eyes, and one protagonist firmly believes that the two are not simple, but have principles, outstanding personalities, and full characters.

I give myself a five-star rating, and hope that this year I will be safe and happy for the third time, and that I will have a good offer that will support me in finishing this book. I really love Zhouzhou and Xichun in my novel, but the bleak data has already taught me how to be a human being [crying]. Maybe my narrative is too bland and not exciting enough. Or maybe it's not innovative enough or eye-catching enough, so my daughters won't be known for it. This book is initially estimated to have one million words. If I still have the chance to write another book in the future, I will write a mindless and exciting article, to attract traffic, regardless of logic, and it will be fun how it comes. In this way, I can read a lot of readers' comments and interactions every day, and see the data that Tomato Writer Assistant is becoming popular day by day [laughs] The next book will have a romantic and dandy "bitch" type heroine, which will create a new world for everyone [laughing] Zhouzhou, you are the hope of Miaotisi's world, and also my hope. Before you, I never thought I could write such a long story. I am a person who is knowledgeable but not expert. I only have three minutes to do anything. Only for you, I am always full of enthusiasm. Sometimes, I think, it's not Wen Xichun who falls in love with you, but me. If you really exist, I hope my writing can add glory to you. I didn't create you, it was you who redeemed me. Thank you for being willing to enter my dreams during those nights when I was tossing and turning and unable to fall asleep, and gave me a chance to write your story. Besides showering you with love, what else can I do for you? Zhouzhou, you are the embodiment of hope and a soul that is more brilliant than mine. I want to see you happy!

1. Female-centered wording, Feng Aotian praised it 👍 I didn't like the description of another heroine's appearance in the first chapter, but I didn't like lines 2 and 3 (although the writing was good, it didn't feel feminine and powerful enough, as if she was deliberately written as 0 or p, which meant staring). The other heroine was fine. 2. Good writing! Good language 3. The character creation is okay, not particularly rounded and mature, but still multi-faceted and three-dimensional. There are no outstanding points overall.

The last sentence is so cool. The sister holding the script of "Sacrifice to Heaven" actually has great ambitions. Please urge the author

My favorite friendship novel between two heroines! The writing is very good, the plot is good, and the female focus is well received. A big woman just has to work hard to achieve greatness! I'm at a loss for words. I have just finished reading Chapter 100, and the Wen Xichun line seems a bit heavy.

Good reviews from Tiandao Mama

This is a high-quality novel that I have read during my time on Tomato. The author's portrayal of the female characters in the novel is very to my taste. And I really love some of the details in the article, especially the moment when the wife wrote the title "parents" as "mother and father", I was really happy. You know, there are always male-first stories in the heroine novels. Of course, it's not bad, but I didn't feel comfortable reading it (you are right if you criticize). But this book is really different. I saw my wife's love for the protagonist and tolerance of women in this book. Finally, I hope my wife will continue to work hard and work hard to update.

Zhouzhou is cute⚈₃⚈ Xichun is "cruel-hearted" The article is good, not competitive, and the cp is good. [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]