Elden Ring: This Tarnished Swears to Forge the Ultimate Perfect Ending

Nice! At first, the first person was more uncomfortable, but later I found that this way of writing is suitable for the first person! Come on, author!

After reading more than 20 chapters, the first-person perspective is a bit strange at first, but you will gradually get used to it later on. The protagonist is a growth stream, relatively slow to get up to speed, but overall the book is pretty good. Tomato method circulation novels are generally in the random killing style or the pseudo-invincible style. This growth style is quite good. Good luck to the author.

@ I have pushed through all the branch plots, and the game plot has been sorted out. After defeating Monger, Ah Tui can go directly to the Land of Shadows. It is best to let Latarn disappear. This way the DLC plot can still be told. Then finally burn the tree to let the big plum come. Da Mei's fire is obviously stronger than his sister's. In addition, Da Mei needs to be recognized by the golden tree. The protagonist promises that the Shadow Land will return, and Marika and Godfrey will return again. This is just right for Da Mei. It is very reasonable for one's own family to burn trees, both legally and politically. As for Mr. Bad Omen, he would be anxious if he told him about the Blood Dynasty and that his younger brother had second thoughts and planned to create another god-king system. In this case, when Ladagan is finally defeated, the general situation should be like this. "The original King of Elden, Godfrey, Lord Messermer the Impaler has been summoned"

Watch the DLC unpacking and see that everything is the conspiracy of the Mother of Fingers. After the Supreme Will took charge of the creation of the world, it had nothing to do. I don't know where Run is now if I leave Old Manmon and Mother Finger behind.

The writing is very good. It is a book that I can read. Although the author wrote Mi Bao's sins very badly, it is indeed a good book. The characters are not occ. The summary is a masterpiece worth reading.

It's well written. The change in mentality of the male protagonist in the early stage is in line with the standards of normal people. Ordinary people who were born in the modern peace period and traveled to the end of the world like the Ring of Law were treated as a game at the beginning. It was not until they faced death that their mentality began to change. They almost died with blood on their hands and said they were not afraid. It must be fake, and the protagonist has not died yet. It is not easy for an ordinary person to survive in the world of the Ring of Law without cheats. I look forward to the growth of the protagonist in the future. It's beautiful and the characters are described in detail. I hope it can maintain this level until the end.

It's a very interesting novel. The protagonist is a man who looks a bit like a prostitute, with a bit of a youthful vibe. But some of the explanations within the plot are very reasonable. The behavior of the characters is not as rigid as in the game, and many faded people live in this land with the male protagonist. Of course, the main idea is to create a perfect ending.

When I play Ring of Magic myself, I always feel sad because I have so many regrets and sorrows. After playing, I thought that I was confused about Xiaomu for a long time. I have also read many other books of Ring of Law. The writing style is good and bad. They all have their own characteristics and their own characteristics. Regarding the interpretation of the Dharma Ring, I like the story written by the author very much. I feel that the Ah Tui he wrote is not only the king of the border area, but also the king of everyone. I am very grateful to you. I do not have the ability to write the Dharma Ring in my heart. Thank you for helping me make up for the regrets in my heart.

Doesn't the perfect ending include Irena? 🤦 The tailor and the wandering merchant had clearly arranged things well before, but suddenly this happened. Don't talk about turning into a fire witch then, that's just two people

Full marks, I like you, I respect your teeth!!!