At First, the Aloof Protagonist Just Told Me to Get Out

It's really, really good-looking, as of the latest chapter 63 onwards. Everyone's characters in the article are great. Especially Shou is really liked, and many people have changed their outlook on life for the better because of him. The plot is also very compact and develops very quickly. Moreover, the interaction between the main CP of the article was very sweet. At present, the two of them have not yet achieved enlightenment, but they like this: the feeling of being seduced by a serious person without knowing it. Both of them are very innocent and I don't know what will happen to them. The plot is not sloppy, the author's writing is also very good, and there is no dazzling description of fighting (every time an author describes fighting, there are a lot of gorgeous words that I really can't understand) An aside: Does the author dare to suddenly update a hundred chapters in one day? It scares me to death.

It looks good, but it was gathering dust on my bookshelf. After I clicked on it, it forced me to control it for 2 hours. I feel that the character creation is really three-dimensional. Even the minor supporting characters who have only a one-sided relationship, such as Su Yue (the male ghost) and the cousin, are all written by the author to have full characters. The content and plot are also very good. After all, it is original content. The plot is really good, the main plot is very good, the sub-plot is also good, and the daily writing is very interesting, which arouses my interest~ But I still want to say, teacher, you are too short~ Pay attention to your body( •̀∀•́ ) Pay attention to your health╭(╯ε╰)╮ Pay attention to your health↖(^ω^)↗

1. From the plot point of view, it is quite novel. After all, most people thought that Mianmian would cultivate immortality with Jiang Huaining (hahaha, in the end, Mianmian felt that the world of cultivation was too dangerous and gave up), which was different from usual, but maybe it was because this article was not about cultivating immortality in the first place. For example, a year later, the CP of the temple fair successfully formed a relationship, and the rebates were quite good (it can be seen that Shen Ze's dedication to Su Yue, and Jiang Huaining's unspeakable love), and the formation method of reshaping time, the three people (Xie, Hong, Xuan) estimated that maybe only careful friends would find out that the third person was the ghost Wang Xuan. 2. Character creation: considered a success Yan Mian, who was fishing without knowing it, sent straightforward and frequent letters, which made Jiang Huaining, who was far away and practicing hard, feel cared for. As time went by, it became an unspeakable love😊. About one hundred and thirty chapters later, when the two confessed their love, the reader said: Hey hey hey~ my aunt laughs (it's exciting to watch) Yan Mian is very smart and can guess the purpose of many evil people, such as the leader who wants to seize the body, Hong Xiangzi and the devil, etc. Anyway, there are quite a lot of moments for Mian Mian to decipher the secrets. However, there are also shortcomings (this is just a personal suggestion, don't spray, don't spray, ballballyou)) In fact, it is not difficult to see that Mianmian and Xiao Jiang are a bit naive. Xiao Jiang is not defensive against Xie Tianya and Zhang Lin. And most of the time, Mianmian is shown to be thinking, while Xiaojiang has more psychological descriptions of Mianmian's things, and is easily instigated by others, which makes the relationship between the two of them not very stable. Another example is Mianmian, who is not defensive about "Jiang Mian" (but it is necessary for the plot), but in such a crisis, Mianmian and Xiao Jiang have done well enough, and it seems that Xiao Jiang is slightly inferior to Mianmian (well, Xiao Jiang has no objection) There is also talk about Our Lady of Sleep, okay, it doesn't exist at all, okay? However, the characters are a bit unbalanced. For example, the character Xie Tianya (Li Ya) is a bit over the top. He is already a bit pretentious, and sometimes he appears inexplicably and says some nonsense. In fact, it is a bit hard to tell that he likes his brother Yan Guang. He doesn't show much, but his goal is Yan Guang, so his long explanation in the last chapter feels a bit abrupt. But overall it looks good. Theme: First of all, there is the rough part of Su Yue and Shen Ze in the book. It is quite real. It is similar to the attitude of contemporary people towards txl. It is quite inspiring to readers: when you fall in love, you should talk about it yourself, and you don't have to care about other people's opinions. Secondly, in the second half of the time, Hong Xiangzi wanted to stop the devil, Xie Tianya wanted to prevent Yan Guang from being taken away, Wang Xuan, uh... I kind of forgot, different people secretly cooperated for the same goal, hoping to let Xiao Jiang unleash his potential and kill the devil. Different people build a dense network for the same purpose, and everyone does whatever it takes to achieve the goal (you guys can see it if you watch carefully) Finally, Mianmian talks about people and ghosts, her patience and worry about Zhang Lin's children, Xiao Jiang, the hardships of becoming a ghost for a year, her unhesitating ridicule when seeing the devil, etc. It is enough to show Mianmian's courage to love and hate, and her incomparable trust in her lover Xiao Jiang. Last but not least, the relationship between the two teenagers went from ignorance to expressing their feelings💝💝. How brave and passionate. It's Mianmian's trust in Xiao Jiang from the beginning to the end, and Xiao Jiang's love for Mianmian from the beginning to the end (but hate is heartbreaking. Xiao Jiang waited for Mianmian for a long time, and her lover disappeared for a year after her soul was gone. Later, her lover died in front of her and waited for a full hundred years. It's not a reunion after a long separation, but Xiao Jiang's silent waiting) Okay? The moment when Xiao Jiang from the sect came back and planned to confess his love, the moment when Mian Mian's soul flew away, and the moment when the two of them understood each other. Wow, it's really heartbreaking to watch. Ps: The expression may not be accurate, it only represents my personal suggestion, but it does look good^ω^

Don't be fooled by the author's thunderous cover [laughs] The plot is novel and not procrastinating. Not a single sentence is nonsense and it all serves the plot. There is also a death escape, twice. The only thing that seemed a bit hesitant was that Shou looked useless in the early stage because he didn't want to practice. It was still okay in the later stage. After all, he turned into a ghost. This was also unexpected. Worth reading.

I like this article very much. Whether it is the main CP or the deputy CP, the emotions are well written, and the story is also full of ups and downs. I am looking forward to the extra chapter. I want to see the story of how several people in the real world and the book world get back together again. I am a little curious (

[Adoration] is super beautiful and one of the few novels I can tie up in one go. The characters are vivid and three-dimensional. The interaction between the protagonist and his family makes my heart warm. Jiang's "secret love" made me excited and sad. I hope the author will continue to work hard! ! ! [Blowing kiss]

It's really good. It's really good. I watched it for three hours in one go. It was so good, so good, so good, so good, so good, so good, so good.

It's pretty good. I was attracted by the introduction at first, but the early writing was a bit clumsy, which didn't suit me (one thing is that when I looked at the cover, I almost thought it was a new writer [face covering]), but I was too curious about the later character development, so I put it on my bookshelf. I recently took it out and read it. The later characters are quite emotional (Xie Tianya, you guy is really smart), but it's too short. Two chapters in one day is not enough. I hope this book gets an 8 points [currently in progress]

It's good-looking, but the ending is still a bit rushed, but everything that needs to be said and explained is explained clearly. In addition, the sweet daily life of the young couple is a bit lacking [laughing], I hope there will be more extras, and the eldest brother will also have a sweet extra [Adoration]

You must be miserable and don't be miserable for us. Please update a lot and stay hungry ˶╹ꇴ╹˶!

Wow, I thought it was just a mindless sweet article at first, but it's very interesting. Why is the rating so low? Is it because the world view is too big? Actually, I don't really understand it, but it's very interesting. The rating is too low. It's really good.

It's so beautiful [I'm almost crying] Aning and Mianmian are both good people, and they will always be happy [I'm almost crying]. The author's writing style is also very good, the plot is very novel, and the characters are also very good and three-dimensional. Senior Brother Yan Guang is so gentle.

The emotional line is like a long flowing stream, and each character is written with great effort, which makes people feel the same. They stayed up all night and wanted to know the ending but dared not fast forward. It is very contagious. When it comes to the end, it is reluctant to let go. There are no blunt turns or embarrassing descriptions, but natural descriptions. The writing of each plot is delicate enough, and each flower has its own original story. Chapter 180 of the plot is long enough as someone who often can't stand long plot stories. I often fall asleep while reading dozens of chapters of quick-travel stories. Good book, good book, good book.

It's very good. I can read it in one go. It's very refreshing. There is a clue in the whole story that guides the character and the reader. The character setting is also very full and very beautiful. The part about identity and soul is a bit redundant, but it is reasonable for the development of the later chapters. Anyway, it is very interesting.

Nice! But it's not finished yet. Looking at the title, I'm a little worried about the ending, right? I beg him on my knees, the author is big@clipmiaomiao

You won't know who is good and who is bad until you see it until the end, hahaha. Although there were some bumps in the middle, it's really nice to reflect on the final truth and ending. My conclusion after reading it is that I survived the dangerous obstacles along the way, but found out that all the obstacles were actually my teammates [shy]

It's been a long time since I've been recommended an article with this theme. The plot is quite fresh. Can the author add more plot twists and twists? ໒꒰ྀིྀི ꜆ ⁰́꒳⁰̀ ꒱ྀིა

Nice! [Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry] It just feels a bit cruel [Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry] Why do they have to die [Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry]

Very good, the logic of the plot is smooth, and the characters are also very clear and three-dimensional. It is a pity that the eldest brother and Xie Wuya ended up, but at least the two of them do not owe each other and are well on their own. The main CP's relationship has been going quite smoothly, except that the two of them were slow to understand at the beginning, but neither of them are entangled people, so they quickly understood each other, and any misunderstandings after that were quickly resolved. Overall, it is suitable to read in one sitting, after all, it involves a lot of foreshadowing and settings.

It's a very interesting article. In fact, it didn't attract me very much in the early stage. I originally planned to give up after Yan Mian entered the Immortal Sect. Unexpectedly, I was already a quarter of the way through and I still haven't finished it. It just felt very different from other time-traveling novels. It was very novel. The progression of the plot was very comfortable, and each character was very interesting. The characters all have their own characteristics. In the past, I didn't really like the kind of gentle male supporting characters, but the senior brother Yan Guang is really good, I like him very much [Adoration] [Adoration] The emotional progression is a bit slow, but the plot is still very interesting, with each link connected one after another, and the author's writing style is also very good! [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] Looking forward to the next article, I hope it will also write about two male protagonists in ancient times, preferably in the book style [I'm about to cry]

Finished reading! ! The plot is very well written, with a lot of foreshadowing, and the sequels are perfected one by one. The continuation is very smooth, and there are many twists and turns. However, I also admire Mianmian's logical thinking very much. I can only say that the author has made the characters very three-dimensional. I basically read it in one go. The only flaw I felt was the analysis and analysis of the protagonist Mianmian later. There are a few too many plot-explanatory clips that might make it a bit boring (nothing annoying, after all, it's a plot requirement), but overall it's pretty good and worth watching. There's nothing particularly sad about it. What's a bit regretful is the ending of Yanguang and Mian. It would be great if Yanguang was really Mianmian's brother [almost crying] Finally, I wish everyone all the best.

It fits my xp very well! ! ! Our Yan Mian is really in line with the correct thinking of the Three Views of New China! ! ! And our little Jiang 🥺 are both very, very cute babies. I absolutely love this one! !

The plot is so interesting, much more interesting than most of the story-telling plots in Tomato now. It's not the same [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] good-looking, good-looking, good-looking😋😋😋

Wow, I can't help it anymore. "The Soul Dissipates" really made me cry to death. The writing is really good, very good, and very beautiful. The author's writing style is very good. This is my favorite article in recent times. And the plot really hit me hard, oh my god, it's so good at shaping it.

The story line is clear, and the pits are filled in relatively completely in the end. The main CP is he, and he will speak up when something happens. Of course, there are also many side CPs that are difficult to deal with. But love is like this, not everyone will be smooth sailing. Only after experiencing life and death can we learn to cherish.

Don't be hungry even if you are tired [laughs], it's very good and I clicked on it to update it. The plot and characters are pretty good. I like how the emotions are portrayed so delicately. I feel like it could be better. I want to read if there is a finished book.

Very nice! ! ! I really hope Mianmian can realize it sooner. The author greatly supports ꒰⑅°͈꒳ °͈꒱･*♡♡♡! ! ! Lifelong novel!

Reader~ Hi—— what do you like best Compared to strawberry-flavored ice cream, I still prefer big novels~

It's okay. It was quite uncomfortable when I read more than 100 chapters. I forgot that Mianmian is not from this world and has no relatives... But Jiang is not alone, so it's okay. . I like Mianmian's character, smart, kind, straightforward and honest. In fact, it was because of the short-lived family relationship that I was a little touched. I forgot that it belonged to the original person, but they did not owe each other. Although they occupied the original person's body, it also changed the ending of the Yan family in the book (I couldn't help skipping many chapters, and also ignored some words. I tend to get emotional, hahaha, the character creation is very good)

It's a beautiful book, and I knew it was the right book at first glance [full]