Ye Luoli: Momo Ran

Nice! This is the best Ye Luoliwen I have ever seen! Wang Mo came to the HP world and returned, although he lost his memory. But her experience has always affected her, and there is no annoying plot like other amnesia jokes. Wang Mo's memory was very descriptive of his character of not killing people as soon as he started, nor of doing evil things. But very real. The other characters are also very good. I think they are better than those in Ye Luoli's original plot and are not OOC. There is also the love at first sight scene between Wang Mo and Prince Water, which I will always love. Prince Water likes Wang Mo's bloody skin just because that's Wang Mo! ! Although I can't fall in love when I'm young, I can do it when I grow up! All in all, super pretty! ! ! ! !

Warm, reasonable, and indeed better than the original work. A little kid talks about love, but family love is the main theme. Author 👍🏻

To be honest, it is really well written. I see that most of Ye Luoli's fans are either in the black protagonist group or in the black protagonist group. They have never thought about reshaping the protagonist group whose characters are messed up. Sometimes they even criticize for the sake of criticism. I can only say that calmness is good, but gentleness and kindness are the hope for most people. Elegance and nobility are good, but the gentleness and tenacity like weeds are the royal novels that can really move people. To be precise, and I think the protagonist group described by most fans is really better than Ye Drama. It's still broken, and of course the fairy group is too. After all, people are not idiots. The reason why we like him is because there was something that impressed us in the early stage. If it is really like what they wrote, then we will not call the current Ye Luoli mentally retarded. I just say it directly Everyone is evil, Ye Luoli is a fairy tale after all. Although the screenwriter has written it as a piece of shit, but with great skill, it has been restored into a fairy tale. Fairy tales can be elegant and noble, but after all, he is the idealism of ordinary people, and he really can't break away from reality. Really, this book is worth reading over and over again. I have read many books in one go, but a few books are really worth reading. This book has a really positive outlook. It rationally describes the advantages and disadvantages of the characters, and the characters are rich and full. It is really not the kind of blind criticism or criticism, and I think this is a very classic story about a girl's growth and self-redemption.

It's very beautiful. It was the first time I saw the combination of Harry Potter and Ye Luoli. It captured the Wang Mo in my mind, her struggle, and her kindness. Yes, the character fit perfectly! ! ! And it's not enough, big 😘😘😘😘

I don't have to say much more, just give it a five-star rating. The only shortcoming is that there is too little written and it is not enough to read. I hope the author will work harder to update it.

The writing is very good. It is rare in Tomato that the writing is not feudal. It does not engage in the "I have blood and I am noble" old Qing Dynasty zombie story. The protagonist and supporting characters are also normal people. I can see that you love the characters you write.

It's really very good-looking, especially like Wang Mo's character design in the early days. It's very good-looking, and the character design is not too ridiculous (*´I`*)

The plot is written in a very natural way, with shortcomings and advantages. These are real people. Many fan stories are dark and dark, infinitely magnifying Wang Mo's shortcomings. At present, the battle perception is a little worse. It may be because I have read too many articles about decisive killing. However, you really shouldn't hesitate in battle. The protagonist team currently has a serious lack of combat experience. I look forward to the future growth of the protagonist.

It looks great, but madam, do we really need CP? Being silent and still young, there are endless possibilities. So can we postpone CP, at least wait until adulthood before falling in love?

It's very innovative. I hope Wang Mo won't lend out the holy water dewdrops. The author must stick to it. Believe in yourself and keep going😲