Love System, Rich Woman and School Beauty Fall into Her Arms Obediently

To die under the peonies is to be a ghost. The scorching sun shines on the sea water, half of the river is rustling and half of the river is red. The red clothes turn into waves at will, and the clouds and smoke turn into bridges intentionally. I don't know where the jade face is going, and a touch of smoky red is intoxicating. It really looks like a ridge from the side and a peak from the side, with different heights from near and far! Make the bed, light up the bed, light it up, and a dragon and two phoenixes sing in joy.

Ah! It's so beautiful, I just showed my true colors [Adoration][Admiration] I've read hundreds of chapters, and I feel really uncomfortable when I see the plot of Ran Ran. Let's leave it at that. I won't feel comfortable reading any more. Goodbye.

This delicate hand... The words [laughing evilly] I have to say, I haven't seen a masterpiece of this quality in a long time. The author is quite capable [face covering] [OK] It's so invincible. It reveals the common problem of Shenhao. He can still be calm even if he has rich assets. The author explains his millionaire fortune by writing his own novel. And when you write about the landlady, other people will only use money to throw money at it, but you are close to reality and know that the weakness of divorced women is their children, so start with the children and then the strategy.

First of all, I'm not here to comment. Excluding some grammatical errors, this book is really good at the beginning. But when dealing with Li Silu, the inner complaints should not be too abstract, the emotional intelligence should be appropriately high, and do not rely purely on the system. This thing is an auxiliary. If it relies purely on the system, it is like treating Li Silu's inner complaints. It feels like the sky and the earth. The male protagonist has not grown up at all. I hope the author can improve this aspect. However, the character description of other girls is still very good. This is only a few dozen chapters. I hope the author will not finish it. Come on and strive for comic adaptation!

Okay, okay, I suspect that Lao Liu opened a small account and let himself go on Tomato. The protagonist has changed from a social fear at the beginning to a manly and arrogant one. There are four harems with different personalities and vivid portrayals. They look very comfortable.

It's very good. It's as good as the "Worker" book in the early stage. I hope it won't collapse in the middle and late stages of the "Worker" book. The poison is here again. Maybe the author thinks there are too many readers.

In this novel, the author is really careful in shaping the characters. When we open the book, what is shown in front of us is not pale words, but living people. I can actually feel the ups and downs of the characters' moods and changes in emotions. In this work, what I admire the most is Xia Shuyi. Her considerate personality makes it hard not to be moved by her. She is also a mature big sister. This character design can better understand the warmth and happiness of the family. The author's writing is good, I hope the author can give more descriptive scenes of Xia!!!

The ultimate goblin fantasy. The heroines in it all have their own merits, but don't write about the knotted wings, which is also a poisonous point. My favorite heroine among them is Li Liusi, who is worthy of the role model of Shen Youchu. Su Lexuan: This is probably the most uncharacteristic heroine, tsundere. The hero's first love. Sister Xia: Landlady sister, satisfy all your fantasies about a married woman. It is also the main palace in my personal opinion. (Although you have a baby, who doesn't want to be taken care of by a rich woman?) Li Liusi: The victim after Su, a super good girlfriend who obeys every word. Has a slight yandere tendency. Ye Yinan: The male protagonist is a master of the alphabet field after being polluted, the ultimate suffering master panel, and is also super rich and beautiful. He is also a character that many people like in the middle and later stages of the novel, he is so sao. (Don't even think about this kind of women. They only exist in novels. If the above-mentioned ones may exist in reality, this one will not exist in reality. Even if she does exist, she will be neither rich nor beautiful.) Best Friend Ye: Su Lexuan's best friend, she was just an e-sports Neptune at first, but after being trashed by the male protagonist, she only wanted to be her own best friend. (These two people named Ye can really make a pair of one Kuzhu panel and one Huangmao panel). Shen sisters: elder sister. He is relatively lively and active, and is a sports student. (The figure is much better than that of my sister). Younger sister. An isolated yandere who wants to mold the male protagonist into her own shape. (This is also a character that many people hate because he is too scheming). Chen, the head teacher of high school: There is very little space mentioned so far. I only know that he is in his 30s and not yet married. . I have seen so much of it so far, and this novel is a particularly good one. He is really a scumbag. I just don't know if these things work in reality. But overall, this novel is considered outstanding in Tomato. [Personal opinion]. All in all, this is a very enjoyable article. Show me Hongwen, grandma, you update quickly. This time it will be updated every two days, next time it will be updated once a week, and the next time it will be updated once a month. When can we see Li Liusi give birth to a child? 😡 Also, the current heroines are actually full, so there is no need to add one or two more. You want to improve the word count, but you should update it faster. Why are you so slow to update? 🙄Don't say anything else. Don't abuse Li Liusi.

Summary: It's a good book to read, and it's really well written. It's not a common stallion's brainless novel. The plot is okay, but the character description is still not detailed enough [laughing] However, it can be regarded as a good book of the same type, but some things touch the red line of the work. The author hopes you will be careful. I don't want to read this book to be sanctioned or appendixed. It's really not good and it's really uncomfortable @ Fei He. This book is definitely a good book, at least I personally think so. Off-topic: If I'm not the author, can you do it? Write it to me quickly, tnnd, who are you showing this to? If you're slow in writing, I'll put it on your bookshelf to collect dust. Be careful.

The author, Lao Tie, wrote this one much better than the one in Factory Flower. It must be given five stars. He really put a lot of effort into the portrayal of special characters. The plot arrangement is also very interesting, but the favorability of the little girlfriend is a bit slow. Personally, I prefer the silly girl in the article, which is almost the same as Sinan in Factory Flower. Unfortunately, she is not the main heroine. The role of the eldest lady is also very good. Overall, there is no flaw. Comrade author, continue to work hard [Like][Like][Like][Like]

This novel has a similar plot to Xiao Rongyu and Shen Youchu in "I Really Don't Want to Be Reborn." The two characters are also similar. The extra thing is to add a landlord and drive more cars. That article about rebirth has no golden fingers and is more real. This article is more enjoyable.

Not bad, not bad. I've read Chapter 200. I stayed up late to read it. In the episode of Ye Zinan, I heard from book friends that the previous male lead Mr. Qin appeared in the comment section, but it was changed. I think the change was very good. Don't make a cameo. There were previous novels where the male lead appeared as a supporting role. [Face covering] Then there is one thing that I think is good, which is his favorability system, which is different from the mainstream favorability system. It is a little more realistic. Sometimes you can get along with just a few favorability points, but sometimes you can't get along with dozens of favorability points (I got through later). Why does it show that I saw the comments on Chapter 268? I just saw Chapter 192😟

It's been a long time since I've seen such a good urban harem story. Every heroine is very charming, especially the non-biological twin sisters. The options of the system are also ridiculous. I hope I can grasp the rhythm in the future.

As a newbie, I think it's quite good. Some of the character designs really have the flavor of Chen Hansheng in "I Really Don't Want to Be Reborn." Of course, the plot is richer. There is nothing toxic about this book so far. To be honest, I'm quite surprised to see such a novel on Tomato. I just don't know if the author tied the reviewer to his home for review, so he updates it in the middle of the night. It's short and feeble [laughing] [laughing] [laughing]

The environment and detailed descriptions are full of details. It allows people to see the picture. It has a strong sense of substitution. The characters are also very distinct. The emotional descriptions are also very fascinating. I am very happy to read this book. I can only say that the author is awesome [Blow kiss]

Be more patient with every girl. After all, the heroines are all rare and good girls. Since you can't guarantee concentration, you can guarantee concentration and patience when you are with one of them. Overall it's pretty good (*๓´╰╯`๓)♡, I hope the author will continue to work hard😊

The author is a great writer, his writing skills are very good, he can really write, and he has a great sense of picture. Chapter 114, Chapter 115, Valentine's Day plot, giving the scarf knitted by the heroine Li Liusi to another heroine [Like] I disagree with this plot. I went on a date with Li on the morning of Valentine's Day and forgot to buy a Valentine's Day gift. Li gave the male protagonist a scarf knitted by himself (the female protagonist in the plot is a very simple and hard-working girl, as simple as a blank sheet of paper). Time management, I finally went on a date with the heroine Su, but then I forgot to buy a gift. As a result, you rushed to give Su a scarf knitted by Li as a gift [Like] The author is too powerful, which I personally think is a big poisonous point. He was tricked for the sake of being tricked. The male protagonist was initially set up as an innocent college student, but within a few months of acquiring the system, he turned into a scumbag. I have never seen such a shameless harem male protagonist. After reading so many harem novels, I have never seen him honor another woman with something given by another woman. And it's not just any ordinary thing, it's a very meaningful item. However, there is also a metaphor in the beginning. The gift Pikachu given by the sister to the protagonist is given by the male protagonist to the female protagonist Su. The protagonist is not an ordinary scumbag.

Come on, author, I have a rather heavy taste. I have to say that after reading so many harem stories, this one will definitely rank among my top two in history. However, it would be nice to describe some characters in more detail. The important thing is that the plot can exaggerate the personal charm of the male protagonist and use some sad storylines to deepen the feelings of each female protagonist. That kind of touching feeling, how can I say that passionate, exciting and touching feeling that makes the heroine frightened, the feeling will be more perfect [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying] I don't describe it very well, but I still hope that the author will work hard. I hope that this book will get better and better, and longer and longer. It doesn't matter if it is slower [sending my heart] [sending my heart] I support you.

It's okay, not as stunning as "Worker", the female escort uses the "Worker" female character. Still very lovable. As soon as the brother came out, he was really furious, and then introduced the partner to the brother. . . . . I'm relatively withdrawn, I just don't like watching. I took the first step. One thing to mention, I prefer playing League and reading fan fiction. This is the author's first book. It's really good. It's a pity.

The book is very good, but I see a problem at the back, that is, what to do if exposed later, and will it be bad to hang up like this? Li Liusi has portrayed a very socially fearful girl. What should I do later? I can't just give up, but I should wait until I have enough points to coax her.

The book is pretty good, but the protagonist can take all the heroine's roommates, or not, but he can't give them away to the heroine! ! ! This is something I feel bad about after reading so much. If you change it, remember to remind me to change the rating.

How can I put it this way? This book is very good in terms of plot and content. It is a rare good book. However, I support: Either you love someone or you don't love anyone. I can't accept being merciful everywhere.

Each character is very distinctive and easy to distinguish. The characters are well created, including the gentle and considerate landlady, the lively and cute Su Xuanle, the obedient and well-behaved Li Liusi, the contrasting and cute sister Yinan, and the excitement-seeking Xinxin. This book is very beautiful and very enjoyable. There was no doubt that it would be five stars, but because the only failure in the whole process was his sister Ran, it was so unpleasant that it affected the reading experience. I hope the author can guide my sister well. Anyway, it's very beautiful overall. Come on.

This novel is still okay, each character has a distinct personality, and the writing is okay (I hope it can be improved), but later on, the action descriptions of the protagonist and heroine became less and less. I was mainly attracted by the introduction at first, but later I found that there are many words of high emotional intelligence, worldly feelings, etc. There are still some golden sentences, so I plan to keep reading. I hope the novel will get better and better, and also add more action descriptions. Finally, I hope it won't be unfinished. As the author's third novel, he can write this result, which shows that the author still has great potential. Come on!

I have finished watching it all, and the ending is good, but there are some pitfalls that have not been filled in. One is the willow silk scarf. Didn't I ask my neighbor's rich wife to knit it again? At the time, I thought this might be a foreshadowing of the Shura Field, but this part of the plot was not used in the follow-up. Then there are the two female characters introduced later (mentioned by the author). At that time, it was thought that two of them, the neighbor's wife, the high school teacher, and Ye Yinan's sister, would play a role in the subsequent plot, so they were omitted later. The above is a nitpicking complaint. The plot after the outbreak of Shura Field was a little rushed, but overall it is still very good, so I give it five stars.

Hahahaha, a rare piece of writing... Although it's a bit spliced, I accept your narrative style! Not dead, quick update, I haven't finished reading your factory flowers yet [laughing and crying][laughing and crying][laughing and crying]

It was so enjoyable to read, it was not enough. I also learned some experience, it was so cool. I learned that handsome people can find girlfriends, ugly people can find girlfriends, but cowards can't find girlfriends, and they also care about the third perspective. In my eyes, this novel is very enjoyable to read, it's great.

I watched it in one sitting. It's from a short play. It has some minor flaws, but it can be said that it's very good. In this tomato, it's awesome! Five stars. I like the landlord and Miss Ye the most. They are invincible. It was the first time I saw such an abstract option and I laughed to death.

It's a very nice book. From the afternoon I read it until now, each character has a very distinct personality. I think the writing is very three-dimensional in terms of character creation. The yandere sister, the landlady, the little rich woman, the elf, the silly girl, and probably the head teacher and Lin Xinxin in the back. They are very good-looking and can learn some flirting skills. It's a novel that I really like, but I don't know when the author plans to finish it. I'm almost done with the updated novel, and I feel like it's not enough! ! In addition, I stud Ye Yinan shares [top post][top post][top post] It's really good to read. I've finished reading the updated chapters. I hope the author will update 20,000 words a day. At this update speed, even the production team's donkeys don't have such a rest. Author, please don't be ungrateful [laughing] In addition, now I am a double-leaf stock (Ye Yinan + Ye Xinxin) [Adoration]

It's really well written and interesting. Don't know why the rating is low. At least 9 points or more.