[Hokage + Not the Holy Mother + Rebellious Ninja + Time Travel + System]
The plot setting in the early stage will be a bit more daily, but it will start to feel fun soon.
Ye Chen accidentally traveled to Naruto's world and found himself transformed into Uzumaki Naruto.
I feel deeply about what is about to happen to me in my childhood.
And Uzumaki Naruto in this life,
At the beginning, you get Mudun Bloodline...
Repay kindness with kindness and revenge with hatred. Gratitude and hatred are clear.
Let's see how the new Uzumaki Naruto in this life becomes the strongest...
The introduction is weak, please read the text...
Reader comments
The writing ability is acceptable for a novice, and you can tell from the content that the author wanted to write well. My personal suggestion is to cut down on the nonsense. For example, if everyone knows that it doesn't have much to do with the plot, you don't need to mention it or mention it. Don't write too much and be more concise. If you want to write a long novel, you can write the plot of the supporting characters in detail. For example, you can write whatever you want to do.
The writing ability is acceptable for a novice, and you can tell from the content that the author wanted to write well. My personal suggestion is to cut down on the nonsense. For example, if everyone knows that it doesn't have much to do with the plot, you don't need to mention it or mention it. Don't write too much and be more concise. If you want to write a long novel, you can write the plot of the supporting characters in detail. For example, you can write whatever you want to do.
Can the heroine be a phosphorus?