I Started at an Elite Academy and Immediately Began Outwitting the Young Lady

The plot is okay, not outstanding but not bad either. The portrayal of the male protagonist is not satisfactory. The title of this book is a battle of wits and courage with the eldest lady. Everyone else is a eldest lady after all. After all, they are in an aristocratic school. But! The so-called battle of wits and courage of the male protagonist is not reflected, or it may not be reflected because of insufficient space. What we have seen so far is basically that everyone has a good idea of ​​the male protagonist. Is the male protagonist's character Asasi still? Why does he not fear or resist someone who stabs him when they meet, and approaches them naturally? The Loli senior pricks his knife-blocking hand without paying attention or caring. He wants to be the president of the student council, but it seems that other people are basically pushing him to act. The male protagonist has no sense of independent action. (I always thought that the male protagonist would be the kind of President Shirogane who is involuntarily involved, has low self-esteem and is a conceited academic tyrant) Among the young ladies, except for the official partner Loli (who also takes advantage of the male protagonist), the others are probably not female protagonists. It feels like they are all trying to manipulate the male protagonist and use him to achieve their own goals. Four stars for the time being. The space is too big and the length is too short. I don't understand why. Please keep writing. It should be a masterpiece. The emotions should be as delicate as possible and the changes should not be too sudden.

It feels pretty good. Are you really a new writer? 🤔 The transitions are sometimes quite fast, and there are some parts that make you feel confused after watching it again, and there is a feeling of lightness, but overall it looks very relaxed and tidy, beautiful and has room for improvement (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡

First of all, the most important point is that this is not the Three Nothings! It's not that it's bad, it's just that my expectations were too high. Then Chapter 1 was inexplicable. The meaning of the dream was unclear. It neither reflected the character nor gave information. Could it be that there is a god in this world? Three golden ones! It's really a draw. Finally, the light novel should not use too many jokes, and it is not nonsense. All the text and ink are used for jokes, and the protagonist cannot be reflected at all. The initial impression is not very good, but after all, I am a new author, so I might as well give it another look. In addition, if there are signs, I will make a suggestion. The emotional line should be carefully polished, and don't do it overnight. This is true for a single heroine, but it is doubly true for multiple heroines. Don't reveal all the characters at the beginning, leave a foreshadowing to slowly lead out. If you are not very skilled, don't do multiple lines at the same time. If you are greedy, you will swallow the elephant. Finally, when it comes to stock trading, it would be best to have multiple endings or an if line. This is my personal hope.

Yay! It's a super nice book. It has the feel of a light novel... Maybe it is? (((O(*ﾟ▽ﾟ*)o))), ahem... Anyway, come on, author! I will keep pursuing it, and I may even raise it ♪( ´▽`)

I also want to have a senior sister like Yueyue (crazy)

I really like watching this type of movies lately.

Okay, I quite like the name Cronia.

What does the first chapter of your opening have to do with the rest?

Well written and in line with my taste

Personally I think it's okay