It consists of several chapters.
If a novice author doesn't write well, he may be a little bit toxic. Please forgive me and please spray lightly. Thanks! ! !
By the way, if you have any suggestions when writing, you can tell me directly. I'm open to suggestions and welcome different opinions.
You can tell where the author needs improvement and where there are problems when writing.
Thanks!
Reader comments
(I only finished reading My Sister Has Problems) I think the author's writing is quite good, because it tells a complete story, and the number of words used is quite large, which can maintain the tension of the narrative (this makes me want to learn, because it is too difficult to make up the number of words).
My suggestion is that the author can improve the yandere image of her sister, expand her description, and try her best to write her problematic image. At the same time, I feel that the description of other content is too long, and attention should be paid to appropriate and specific descriptions. Another problem is that the novel has some problems that are common in online novels, and that is the standard of punctuation marks. I think long sentences should be filled with appropriate commas to make them read more smoothly for readers.
The above problems may be the author's early writing problems and should be corrected now. I hope the author can continue his efforts and provide readers with a better reading experience!
Give your book four stars to encourage you.
Very well written, I like it very much
The story is very well written, except that it's a little too messy and doesn't feel smooth.
I feel like the writing is okay, but when I read it, I didn't feel as smooth as other novels. But not bad
Just give it five stars based on the title.
Very well written. Giving my cucumber a spin.
This little story becomes more and more addictive the more I read it [adoration][adoration][adoration]
(I only finished reading My Sister Has Problems) I think the author's writing is quite good, because it tells a complete story, and the number of words used is quite large, which can maintain the tension of the narrative (this makes me want to learn, because it is too difficult to make up the number of words). My suggestion is that the author can improve the yandere image of her sister, expand her description, and try her best to write her problematic image. At the same time, I feel that the description of other content is too long, and attention should be paid to appropriate and specific descriptions. Another problem is that the novel has some problems that are common in online novels, and that is the standard of punctuation marks. I think long sentences should be filled with appropriate commas to make them read more smoothly for readers. The above problems may be the author's early writing problems and should be corrected now. I hope the author can continue his efforts and provide readers with a better reading experience!
Give your book four stars to encourage you.
Very well written, I like it very much
The story is very well written, except that it's a little too messy and doesn't feel smooth.
I feel like the writing is okay, but when I read it, I didn't feel as smooth as other novels. But not bad
Just give it five stars based on the title.
Very well written. Giving my cucumber a spin.
This little story becomes more and more addictive the more I read it [adoration][adoration][adoration]