Xihuan: Your Majesty the Queen, I Am a Loyal Minister of the Empire.

My rating is five stars, which should be about 9.3 Points. Great work, belongs to our two-dimensional novel Reiner! Although there are some minor flaws in the narrative and story line, as the first book to reach this level, I think it is a genius! People who are not 2D readers who have read many textual works cannot write in this style. And the style is really distinct, and it really doesn't look like a newbie writing. The author's writing is very interesting, the background design is very detailed, the scenes are very substantial, and the characters are very vivid. Even if he writes other types of articles, the results will be good. Other shortcomings are mainly limited by the type and atmosphere of the novel. It depends on the author's subsequent conception to make the novel's emotions and patterns more diverse and broader. But in fact, it's not bad to just maintain this tone. Happy daily life occasionally shows the feeling of the tip of the iceberg, which is very comfortable to watch😋

One of Tomato's best novels. In my opinion, the rating is at least 9.8. Unfortunately, the background of the story is pornographic, bizarre, violent and cruel. Otherwise, the animation would not be any worse than the ones on the market, or even much better.

I have to say that this novel describes the characters with rich emotions, the content of the novel is detailed, and the language is fluent. The plot can be said to be original, with ups and downs, and the main line is clear. It is indeed a rare good book. It may have some minor flaws, but it does not hinder my love for this book. I hope the author will continue to work hard and write as much as possible while ensuring the quality of the article.

I haven't read such a good book in a long time. I really want to read it. As expected, I am still suitable for fighting (sigh) In fact, this book is not completely mindless. Some of the foreshadowings are very deep. Sometimes when I see a piece of text, I feel that I am not impressed. After following the paragraphs and commentaries, I go back and take a closer look and find out: It turns out to be you/This is what happened. The writing style is also very interesting. It fully implements the meaning of the title "Butter". There is no basis for suspicion. The protagonist is not incompetent, he is really good at it. The content of memes is not so dense that it makes people disgusted. It is just interspersed in the article to make people smile. I like this feeling very much. The amount of information in the text is also very sufficient. Not only do I have a good impression of the author's writing style, but when I read the next chapter in a hurry, I will find that I have skipped many details and have to go back and read it again. This also took me more than a week to catch up with the current progress. The world view setting is very grand, and it has not collapsed so far. The Western fantasy style is completely new to people like me who have always read Cultivation of Immortals. There are also shortcomings: maybe because Western names are more common, I can't remember many names of people and places. In addition, this book has enough characters and rich maps. I am only most impressed by the protagonist and the chosen ones around him ( The progress of the story is a little slow, and there seems to be no clear main line emerging, wandering among multiple branch lines (perhaps the main line is to become the most comfortable farming lord in the north) Two chapters a day and I can't get enough above. The rhythm is very stable. It's very satisfying to counterattack the Griffin Empire since the founding of the country. The author is very good at writing large-scale wars. There is a feeling that there is still more to say, which is not bad. Second editor: The problem of narrative procrastination began to show up. The number of words was a bit low, and the writing was always mixed with war, farming, and war. This lack of excitement is always a bit suffocating, and the combat power is a bit broken. Level 6 is everywhere. No matter how hard Field tries to level up, he will encounter enemies that overwhelm him. Now this book is not so attractive to me.

To be honest, when I read novels, it is easy for me to give up and resign myself to ashes between 500,000 and 700,000 words. This novel is the only one that I keep up with and urge for updates. Especially the storyline is excellent! The male protagonist Field has many scenes of battles of wits. He uses his personal advantages and strengths to catch others off guard and maximize his own interests. Especially Simon, the lord of Fu Feng City, clearly knows that the person the male protagonist killed did it but he just doesn't dare to show his face. The male protagonist also grasps the mentality of a person who only has personal interests to target, and this kind of plot design enriches the plot and strengthens the description of the characters. Besides, the two permanent guests, Ashina and Rosalía, the author spent a lot of writing to complete their plot settings. The relationship between the characters, etc., And these plot settings do not affect the main line, and can even promote the main line, making the author's characters give us a more three-dimensional impression. It is not just a nickname that is the same for other novels, most authors tell the truth. It's good, but the description of the characters is lackluster. In novels of the same type, if you drag the heroine next door, it will give people the same feeling, and there is no sense of inconsistency with the mass-produced heroine and heroine. The author handles this very well. The plot enriches the characters, and the characters also enrich the plot. In addition, the author has put great effort into describing the world view and various settings. Many plots can withstand scrutiny. The one that has the most profound impact on me is the empire's military system. I will tell you the pros and cons of the empire's military system so that you can understand the process. The second one is the earliest batch of night leaders. The details of the residents are because the Night Territory has become extremely powerful through their construction, and it has also changed from being numb at the beginning to having a sense of belonging. The system has also changed little by little with the development of the plot, from the slave economy at the beginning to the territorial economy of renting, renting and paying taxes. This is in this kind of The plot may not be very eye-catching, but this can be seen as a change in the thinking of the people of the night, which is equivalent to separating the "outside world" from the night. The backward and decadent ideas are eradicated. In the minds of the people, "we" are the residents of the night, and we will only follow the rules of the night. Do things according to the rules, and the empire's rules don't matter. (For details, please see the reaction of the citizens after the empire increased taxes on the Nightfall Territory.) This kind of ideological change is no less than building a country under the nose of the Griffin Empire, but it still belongs to the empire in name, and the protagonist is just missing an opportunity to found the country. In the subsequent development, the protagonist even bought a group of slaves back. These early settlers still looked down upon these "countrymen". This detail is crucial to the development of the subsequent plot! The holes dug in the early days have been filled in, and it's been a long time since I've read a novel like this that can be read with enough brain power. To sum up: Highly recommended, it looks good, the plot has no flaws, the plot setting and character details are top-notch on Tomato, and the plot can stand up to scrutiny! I can't believe this is the author's first book, it feels like it's the work of a big boss. Also: I will always love Rosalia!!! Rosalia is my wife! ! [Adoration][Adoration] I spent half a year reading it in one sitting. Hajiga, you guy is really good at writing.

This book is very good. In my opinion, it can be rated as 9.4. The author writes it very well. The main reason is that the protagonist is very decisive in killing. He finds a balance between the Virgin and indiscriminate killing. He is neither too kind nor too indiscriminate and decisive. So far, the protagonist has received the title of God's Chosen One. The characters are all okay. Even if the characters were not good before, they will become better after being contracted. The setting is quite good. The relationship between the two is equal. It's disgusting that the protagonist is a dog licker. And the girl is also involved. It's about 80 or so. The personality is quite distinct, which is not bad for a tomato. There is no doubt that this book is quite good. I saw that there are many negative comments in the reviews. This book was indeed average in the early stage, but even this so-called average book has already killed 70% of the authors on Tomato. Some people are curious, how did the 9.5 Rating come about? It's good to read in the middle and later stages. In fact, it's very good to read once you get to the territory. This is an article with farming elements in itself. You can't insist on a farming and development article. The pace is so fast, and there is no divorce part in the early stage of the book. There is no ex-girlfriend ridicule part. My evaluation is that the protagonist ate a small turtle in the first ten chapters. I can't bear this? This younger brother only appeared later, and he was tortured and killed, so if you can read my comment, my comment is to read it with confidence.

It's really good. It's the most enjoyable harem novel I've ever read in Tomato. I also really like the world view setting and the Chosen One setting. Until now, the protagonist in Chapter 500 is quite intelligent (at least I don't see any big problems) and the plot is as it should be (get it) Everyone understands), the slow development of the territory is really interesting😋😋😋However, although I don't really care, there are indeed a lot of female protagonists. I probably counted eleven, but this setting is also certain. I hope that the plot opportunities will be arranged in the future. Finally, I hope the author can keep writing (although I don't want to finish it). It would be best if the second book can be similar. It is very enjoyable and comfortable to read. Also, two updates a day is too little. I save up to read 50 chapters in a month [face covering] [face covering]

This book is really good to read, especially when it describes Lu Bu's fight with Sun Wukong for Diao Chan. The battle lasted for hundreds of rounds, but Xue Baochai was indeed too strong. If it weren't for Nuoshou's outer ring hanger + Noxian guillotine, this wave of M4 six times strafing would have killed him. In addition, I rather appreciate what Zhuge Liang said to the 108 monkeys in Huaguo Mountain: " "Young man, don't show off your arrogance in front of your brother Liang", which shows Zhuge Liang's indignation at the monkey beating him to death with three sticks. All in all, this book has an interesting plot, a clear system, many foreshadowings, the fighting scenes are immersive, and the character description is very good! Originally reviewed in "The Abnormal Story of a Yandere Girl"

The most interesting farming story I have seen on Tomato so far. The two lines of battle and development are well integrated. It is not boring to read. It is also interesting to read with all kinds of hot and bad memes. Keep updating. 😩😩😩😩

The pace is slow but it doesn't feel dragging. It's enjoyable but has foreshadowing and basis. If you watch it carefully, you need to take note of the data. Please stop overpowering the battle force. Please, the main force in more than 700 chapters is only level 3 or 4. Upgrading is troublesome as hell. According to your method of upgrading, others who are level 6 or above will not be able to do it anymore. How many cities have been drained of energy to reach level 1 or two, and how many people have been killed to reach level 4. Calculated as twice the resources for level up, won't you need more than 4 times the territory when you level up to level 6? When you develop to that point, you will have to go 2000 chapters later. The battle process is difficult to write and boring, and the combat power must be linked to the territory. That is not just a king's contract and a divine choice, and the level will rise on the spot. I don't want to mess with you later, even if you talk about the progress of the strategy, it will be fine. The more you write about the male protagonist, the weaker he becomes. They have already said that Butter World is trying to clear the male protagonist. 😓 After the third revision, there are more and more plots in Tang Syndrome, which are ridiculously weak. It just so happens that your male protagonist, Xiao Daisy, is pure and pure. The more I look at it, the more I look at it, and the more I look at it, the more it looks like the hallucination that Baron Five had when he was enlightened in the soil after losing everything.

Great book. This is the smoothest book I have ever read.

How should I put it? This book seems to be covered in butter, but it actually describes the protagonist's strategy and a specific world. The difficulty of this kind of book lies in the character of the protagonist, who is smart enough, ambitious enough, has a high enough level of thinking, and has considerable charisma. In addition, the pace of this book is quite good, with daily life and battles interspersed just right. Battles are for development, and the process is quite reasonable. Every time I come back from a battle, I see new changes in the Night Territory, which makes it feel like playing a game. Moreover, at this pace, it can reveal a lot of various races in the world, ancient history, knowledge of divine selection, other forces and other very interesting things about the worldview. It's so rhythmic, interesting, interesting, and vivid that people look forward to the update every time.

This western fantasy lord novel is like a magnificent magical treasure house, leading readers into a magnificent world where swords and magic are intertwined. The magic setting in the book is exquisite, the gorgeous magic light shines between the pages, and the sharp sword shines with dazzling edge in the battle. The protagonist starts off ordinary, but with extraordinary wisdom, tenacious will and fearless courage, he overcomes obstacles in a dangerous world and rises step by step to become a respectable lord. Each adventure battle is exciting, the plot has ups and downs, and unexpected twists and turns keep people high in tension and anticipation. The characters in the novel are vivid and full of life, with different personalities. The deep emotional entanglements between them are described in a delicate and real way, which makes people moved. The author uses plain and vivid writing to vividly display every detail of this fantasy world in front of readers, making readers feel as if they are actually there and immersed in it. This is a wonderful work not to be missed

It is relatively rare to be unsystematic, with a relatively complete world framework and world view, but there are too many characters. In the later stage, on average, many characters have insufficient roles, and only the main combat powers are there. Personally, I suggest that it would be better to reduce the number of characters and instead deepen the characterization. All in all, it is a very good work in my opinion.

The pace of this book is very comfortable, without too much redundancy, and overall it is relatively concise. At present, I see that it took two months to publish a book with 500 chapters and only then published dozens of chapters. The author needs to work harder. Compared with others, the male protagonist has an extra small map, which can display the uncontracted divine choosers, teammates and enemies, as well as career and skill choices. In the early stage, you mainly develop the territory, fight monsters and explode equipment, explore and trade everywhere, in the mid-term, you respond to the country's call to fight everywhere, and then continue to develop the territory and bond with your wives. (The little white wolf is cute) The first book I read that looked like a Western medieval book with a magical theme was Game of Thrones, which is A Song of Ice and Fire. . . Therefore, I am very interested in this kind of slow-burning. As the plot develops step by step, I can see that the author is quite lively, whether it is the writing style or the control of the overall direction of the plot, as well as magic, various magical props, the balance of combat power, and the style of the aristocratic lords in the European Middle Ages. Very immersive. (Urgent update, I have been keeping the book for almost two months)

It's good to read. I've been following it for two years. The writing is just right for my taste. I have some advantages. Firstly, the characters are vivid. The most important thing in reading the novel is the character creation (for me). Secondly, the plot is not cliché. Even though the plot of the Queen is classic, it is interesting to tease the historical stories and other small dungeons. Then, there are many new memes in language that keep pace with the times. This is the most enjoyable way to catch up, as you can understand all the newly released memes. (It's not written in the same way as the Chinese language question)

OK, how can I put it this way? It's still very good. The writing style is a little lacking, but it's understandable for a novice. Come on, author.

There were a lot of shortcomings in the early stage, which once made people question it, which was very inconsistent with the number of readers and ratings, so I continued to read back, and continued to read, and looked back, and now it seems that there are more than 400 chapters. There is no problem with the ratings and number of readers. Once the infrastructure is built, it starts to look good. Then there is the war while building the infrastructure. I think the most interesting thing is the war. After reading more than 700 chapters, I gradually became more and more frustrated. At the critical moment, there was always one last blow to kill the enemy. At the last blow, a few people would stand on the moral high ground and save the enemy. Every time there was a war, I was really afraid of which scene would be more talkative, because in the next chapter, several people would pop up to finish blaming the protagonist and save the enemy after scolding him. Very infuriating.

This book is really great, it's like a gold rush [laughs] First of all, congratulations to Lao Fei for finally defeating the Griffin Empire [heartfelt]. I seem to have been following the updates since the first time Lao Fei went to suppress the rebellion, but I just stayed and watched it all at once [face covering] The plot of this book is reasonably designed, and the worldview is complete, grand, and reasonable. I didn't expect the worldview to be so big at first. Even why it is the h world, h has a reason, and there are also the first, second, and third eras, etc., And the design is relatively reasonable. The plots are very good, whether it is daily life or going on a battle. As for why Lao Fei knows so many technological things, I can only say you don't care [laughing and crying], and Lao Ga combines technology with the magic inscriptions of the current era, and the design is also quite good. The portrayal of the characters is also very good, whether it is their own divine choice or the enemy, and the description of the characters' stupidity and defiant speech is also very good. I don't know how Lao Ga came up with it [face covering]. Also, because it is a harem story, there are many female protagonists, but some of the chosen gods will be sent to guard other places. Then, for example, when going to download a dungeon, only a part of the chosen gods will be taken with them, so that this part of the chosen gods can be described and changed next time, instead of like the story I read before, where they are obviously around. But there is no interaction at all [face covering] However, there are some divine choices that rarely appear, such as the little scythe. There is nothing we can do about it. There are too many divine choices, but recently Lao Fei got a prop. After downloading the dungeon, the killing divine choice should not be controlled, and there should be a plot [face covering] Although Lao Fei has captured the Griffin Empire, there are still many plots that can be described. I hope Lao Ga will not panic and write slowly. The results of this book are also acceptable. I also like the daily interactions with the chosen ones. I hope Lao Ga will not stop updating. @GA[Send Heart]

It's quite good, and the quality in Tomato is top-notch. I've read more than a thousand chapters. The author is very good at describing war scenes, which is very exciting. [Thinking] Unfortunately, the pace of farming is very slow and the map is constantly changing. It's a half-farming novel that is not suitable for me. I will die if I keep it. Overall it's excellent, you can give it a try if you're interested. (Real person review) [Laughs] Pretend I didn't say it

It's a good-looking, very good lord story. The character's personality and jokes are very in line with my taste. The farming part is also very good, but I hope it can expand the combat power of the Southern Lord [Like][Like][Like]

I've been following it for so long, so I'd like to praise the author. His writing is very clever. The war and confrontation plot is no problem. I give it five stars. But the emotional connection with God's Chosen is a little lacking now [crying]. I suggest you intersperse a little bit of daily life and give the prison wolf a little plot (selfish hehe)

I have read more than 700 pages of this book from the first chapter. What I want to say is that the world view is grand, the plot is rich, and the battles are fierce [laughing]. In my opinion, it is at least 9.5 And above. It is the best Western fantasy novel I have ever read. I saw more than 1,300 chapters written about Yi Meng. I really felt uncomfortable reading it. Why didn't I kill this kind of holy mother? The Night Owl organization is so bad. Chapter 1372: Why didn't Yi Meng kill the sixth-level artifact? If I said I don't want it, don't [vomit] [vomit] [vomit] [vomit] I'll give you a bad review. It made me unhappy.

A very good novel, one of the few that makes people keep reading. I would like to express some personal opinions: There is a very core problem in the constant pursuit of updates. As a Western Fantasy Lord novel, the growth of the protagonist has always been very strange. 1. As a lord, the strategic layout is very confusing, and he keeps using branch lines and daily routines to cover up the lack of strategic depth. I always start thinking about solutions when I encounter a problem. If he can't solve it, he always uses a small amount of deus ex machina to give Field a narrow victory. As a result, the plot has been very draggy. And the results and benefits can never be maximized. 2. It is normal not to let it snowball and not allow the combat power to expand. The development of science and technology will always have to wait for the enemy's combat power to increase before it will appear. There are obviously key technology points but they have not emerged explosively. Magic and divine power are like the help of plug-ins. Why should we follow the actual development process? The resource utilization rate is too low. (Maybe it's linked to the author's imagination) 3. Character growth is too slow. Although he has experienced so many life-and-death situations, the protagonist's mentality change has not become extreme. He is still addicted to the gentle land, and his thoughts come out one after another. 4. The new chapters are always slow and 4,000 words are updated every day. A large number of the points that should be fun are becoming more and more unhappy and even a bit aggrieved due to the pressure of combat power and the forced opening of 46/37. The numerical value and mechanical power are obviously great, but the gameplay is poor. It's like you cheated and still passed the exam. [What]

It's awesome. The pace of the whole book is very comfortable. There is nothing obscure and meaningless and it's very enjoyable. It's the best Western fantasy novel I've read on Tomato so far. The only shortcoming is that it's too little and not enough to read.

Very good, it can be regarded as a first-class Western fantasy work. World view background: Fantasy Western Middle Ages Setting: Lord type, contracted chosen one (female) Plot preference: Butter plot, Plot speed: slow Heroine: Multiple heroines, diverse types Routine plot: development in the early stage, arrogance in the later stage, no brainless plot, many villains, such as the Griffin Queen, (Civil War Fantasy God), members of the protagonist's Yuan family, etc. Overall review: A good butter setting, this one is worth a look. The plot in general is also fascinating, but I heard others comment that the early stage may be a bit discouraging (but I personally don't feel much about it, I don't know if it is true). The middle and later stages of the plot are very good.

A very nice slow-burn farming novel in the Western Fantasy Butter World. Although the early plot of this book is occasionally sluggish, the overall narrative style and plot development are smooth and reasonable. The characters of each heroine are distinctive and often eye-catching. What makes this book worth reading the most is the characters, customs and ideas based on the world view. For example, the most powerful crushing force in the world - the Chosen Ones - is often in the hands of the major nobles. This means that civilians and nobles are not only two different classes, but even two different creatures. The collision and conflict between the aristocratic values ​​derived from this and the protagonist's modern values ​​​​is the core contradiction of this book. It can give me a very stimulating and strong perception (for example, strong anger?). It also brings me a phenomenon that I have never seen in reading books before, even if I know that this is a tomato novel, the protagonist will win in the end, get all the benefits, and will not suffer any losses. But I will still feel strongly unwilling and aggrieved for the protagonist, for the common people oppressed by the nobles, and for the world's rejection of the protagonist's normal values. Therefore, this feeling turned into the fuel in the internal combustion engine, driving me to keep reading, hoping to see the protagonist win. Get one great victory after another! After reading the latest chapter and calming down, I finally understood what I wanted to read. It is a kind of world that is different from the real world after being transformed based on real physical rules and adding fantasy power. All of our moral concepts are based on physical rules of reality. So if some kind of force is added to the physical rules of reality or the new rules are changed, will we still have today's values ​​and moral thoughts? This book showed me a possibility, that is, how will the world develop when the power (chosen ones) can only be excessively concentrated in a certain class (lords among the nobility)? What kind of thoughts and moral values ​​will be formed? This book satisfies part of my curiosity in this aspect, coupled with the author's delicate writing style that has flashes of inspiration from time to time. It is very useful for readers like me who are very picky about novels. Okay, having said so much, this book can be summed up in one point: the car is very fast, come and read it [Love]

This book is really good to read, especially when it describes Lu Bu's fight with Sun Wukong for Diao Chan. The battle lasted for hundreds of rounds, but Xue Baochai was indeed too strong. If it weren't for Nuoshou's outer ring hanger + Noxian guillotine, this wave of M4 six times strafing would have killed him. In addition, I rather appreciate what Zhuge Liang said to the 108 monkeys in Huaguo Mountain: " "Young man, don't show off your arrogance in front of your brother Liang", which shows Zhuge Liang's indignation at the monkey beating him to death with three sticks. All in all, this book has an interesting plot, a clear system, many foreshadowings, the fighting scenes are immersive, and the character description is very good!

It's a very good book. It feels like a different world in the second dimension. The beast-eared girl is so good! Why is the rating so low [exploration]

No wonder the rating couldn't reach 9.5. The battle power was suppressed three times or more and it made me feel uncomfortable watching it. Later, the outrageous T0 operating language of the female channel was written. Despite these shortcomings, it is still a good novel with an epic feel. Poisonous points and advantages coexist Every villain who comes up against the enemy has to first taunt me and wait for the taunted me to finish my speech. After being defeated by the protagonist, he has to give a speech of defeat. Repeated plots, repeated routines. Let's talk specifically about the content of the novel. Although there is a detailed explanation of the disaster's destruction of the world and its persistence in destroying the world, it is only explained in one sentence. Overall, it still feels very abrupt and difficult to understand. Besides, Night Owl has clear idealism, but Ku Gao is too idealistic and has no sense of reality at all. There is no actual support at all. If the character of the people inside is really like the novel and shown. Then I won't live that long at all. The only changes in the characters' personalities are also very dissatisfying! Every time a villain appears, the bell must be called first. Then he was slapped in the face by the protagonist. After the villain is defeated, he still needs to use the buzzer. It's the same words every moment. Every villain uses the same rhetoric, who am I and you can't kill me. All the villains are the same throughout the story. Or could you please stop having so many scenes where the villain is bumbling? It's really annoying to watch. I can still read the early stages of the novel.