One Piece: The Lazy Shipwright in the Marines

The pinnacle of pirate fan fiction The characterization is penetrating The plot design comes to life on paper Because there are very few people writing about the same period as the three major generals, they appear to be unique. There is not much poison at the moment [please taste it carefully] [laugh evilly] [like]

It's not bad. I'll give it four stars. There's too little content. If it has enough content, I'd give it five stars. The plot and character descriptions are very good. It's just that the number of pictures is a bit small, it's okay, Poland is over.

It's really super pretty! The author greatly updates on time! There are no forced kisses or other routines in other books that make me uncomfortable, and I'm not disgusted at all! Awesome! (I hope there is no female protagonist, if there is one, please write it in a lighter tone, please!) The chapters are not enough, please keep updating!

It's beautiful. I haven't seen anything like this before.

Personally, I think it is well written. The shortcomings are that Shirley's writing of the training ground segment is a bit not very good (personal feeling), but the advantages are innovative, such as the protagonist having his own exclusive fruit, and it feels very relaxed and enjoyable when watching it and not so brain-burning. Finally, cheers to the author!

A very good book, but the author is too short. I feel sorry for my sister-in-law. I hope the author is longer and not so short every time. The update speed is only two a day and it is not enough to read. The updated version is not enough. It is really too short.

The content of the brothers is very novel and has its own ideas. The hammer fruit feels like the protagonist. If you know Akainu and the others, you must have met Whitebeard after being on top. Will you look at the subsequent fruit development towards the shaking fruit? After all, the hammer can also cause vibrations. The fruit's ability is strange, but its own strength is also very important. I hope the author will work hard [blowing kiss] I would like to see how Dorag goes to rectify the revolutionary army in the middle and later stages. And although the author has written relatively little about pirates, the timeline is actually a bit confusing. It feels like it is after the Valley of the Gods, but before Roger is dead. And isn't it because of that incident that Mr. Zefa stopped killing generals and started leading training camps instead? [Thinking] Roger shouldn't be cold by now, and Smoker behind him should be on the scene soon, [Thinking]

To be honest, I've finished watching it. I finally finished reading the latest chapter in two days and one night. Very fascinating, his subject is salted fish. Lazy, but very good to faith, family, relatives and friends. I really like this kind of fanfic. Whenever I see the protagonist (Iron Hammer) fighting with other people, I always feel anxious in my heart, worried that the protagonist will die in the next chapter. I saw more than 500 pictures, it should be almost over, right? Finally the big boss came out, although I feel like the protagonist is still a little behind. But I hope to continue. After all, it's rare to find someone who likes fan fiction so much.

Taihao is so embarrassed! I haven't seen such a beautiful pirate novel in a long time! The only bad point at the moment is Rebekah's mother. Only this one affects the perception. The rest are very good. At present, there is no heroine (I feel that Shirley and Lance are a couple). Therefore, in the current timeline, Roger has only arrived at Sky Island and the pirate era has not yet begun. I personally think that this book has only ended not long ago. I am really looking forward to the subsequent plot! Okay, now we know whose hammer is stronger and harder.

Those who are tired of reading normal One Piece fan novels, why don't you read this one again? There are many novel softwares out there. I have read at least more than 200 One Piece fan novels. This novel really stood out to me. It is passionate, heartwarming, and funny. It feels pretty good.