One Piece: the Blacksmith in the Navy

The pinnacle of pirate fan fiction The characterization is penetrating The plot design comes to life on paper Because there are very few people writing about the same period as the three major generals, they appear to be unique. There is not much poison at the moment [please taste it carefully] [laugh evilly] [like]

It's not bad. I'll give it four stars. There's too little content. If it has enough content, I'd give it five stars. The plot and character descriptions are very good. It's just that the number of pictures is a bit small, it's okay, Poland is over.

It's really super pretty! The author greatly updates on time! There are no forced kisses or other routines in other books that make me uncomfortable, and I'm not disgusted at all! Awesome! (I hope there is no female protagonist, if there is one, please write it in a lighter tone, please!) The chapters are not enough, please keep updating!

It's beautiful. I haven't seen anything like this before.

Personally, I think it is well written. The shortcomings are that Shirley's writing of the training ground segment is a bit not very good (personal feeling), but the advantages are innovative, such as the protagonist having his own exclusive fruit, and it feels very relaxed and enjoyable when watching it and not so brain-burning. Finally, cheers to the author!

A very good book, but the author is too short. I feel sorry for my sister-in-law. I hope the author is longer and not so short every time. The update speed is only two a day and it is not enough to read. The updated version is not enough. It is really too short.

The content of the brothers is very novel and has its own ideas. The hammer fruit feels like the protagonist. If you know Akainu and the others, you must have met Whitebeard after being on top. Will you look at the subsequent fruit development towards the shaking fruit? After all, the hammer can also cause vibrations. The fruit's ability is strange, but its own strength is also very important. I hope the author will work hard [blowing kiss] I would like to see how Dorag goes to rectify the revolutionary army in the middle and later stages. And although the author has written relatively little about pirates, the timeline is actually a bit confusing. It feels like it is after the Valley of the Gods, but before Roger is dead. And isn't it because of that incident that Mr. Zefa stopped killing generals and started leading training camps instead? [Thinking] Roger shouldn't be cold by now, and Smoker behind him should be on the scene soon, [Thinking]

To be honest, I've finished watching it. I finally finished reading the latest chapter in two days and one night. Very fascinating, his subject is salted fish. Lazy, but very good to faith, family, relatives and friends. I really like this kind of fanfic. Whenever I see the protagonist (Iron Hammer) fighting with other people, I always feel anxious in my heart, worried that the protagonist will die in the next chapter. I saw more than 500 pictures, it should be almost over, right? Finally the big boss came out, although I feel like the protagonist is still a little behind. But I hope to continue. After all, it's rare to find someone who likes fan fiction so much.

Taihao is so embarrassed! I haven't seen such a beautiful pirate novel in a long time! The only bad point at the moment is Rebekah's mother. Only this one affects the perception. The rest are very good. At present, there is no heroine (I feel that Shirley and Lance are a couple). Therefore, in the current timeline, Roger has only arrived at Sky Island and the pirate era has not yet begun. I personally think that this book has only ended not long ago. I am really looking forward to the subsequent plot! Okay, now we know whose hammer is stronger and harder.

I finally found a normal forging pirate fanfic. Finally, the combat power of all kinds of awesome two-dimensional weapons doesn't collapse at every turn. That's great. Come on, author.

Those who are tired of reading normal One Piece fan novels, why don't you read this one again? There are many novel softwares out there. I have read at least more than 200 One Piece fan novels. This novel really stood out to me. It is passionate, heartwarming, and funny. It feels pretty good.

It's really quite plain and lacks any writing style, but the characters of the navy bosses are quite good. They are relaxed and everyday, which is fine to pass the time.

It's quite interesting, the various characters have their own personalities, and the characters don't deviate from the original work.

Good. There is routine, there is passion, and mainly there is strength and status, which is very satisfying. It would be better if there is another female protagonist, haha

I like Brother Zhui's character very much, he is almost a replica of myself. Sometimes I say something in my mind, and as soon as I turn the page, Iron Hammer says it too! ! ! Hahahahaha, this is the best One Piece fanfic I have read recently. It would be great if the author could take off Iron Hammer's mask. It feels uncomfortable to wear the mask all the time and I can't rest well.

I haven't written about Luffy's level yet, so I'll write it slowly. When the setting is more complete, this book can definitely be on the same echelon as Absolute Justice and Dark General.

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This book is very well written and interesting. Can you add a BUFF similar to elemental enchantment to the protagonist? For example, a weakened version of the exclusive equipment of the three generals. It would be better if the protagonist could forge some special armor, such as the armor of the armored warrior Xing Tian.

It's not bad. It's a light and funny flow. I hope I don't get stabbed later.

It's a funny book, I like it very much

The subject matter is very novel Every character has flesh and blood The protagonist is very kind and grateful, all the characters have online IQs, and there is no intrigue. Especially the huge deception [smile][smile][smile][smile]

It's really great, better than most of the ones I've seen👍🏻, it's very creative, come on, update more

Really, I have read almost everyone, and no matter what book I read now, I feel that it is boring, but I think this novel is very interesting, so I strongly recommend everyone to come and read this novel (five-star praise!)

Except for the numerical growth that is a bit fast, everything else is fine. If the author has time, he can make a side story to make up for the original Pirate World Iron Hammer's character before he was 18 years old. When I read the first part, I was a bit dissuaded, but the second part is okay. I give you five stars. I hope this book will get better and better as it gets written.

I think it's quite interesting! The idea is very novel.

It's very relaxing to watch, and the writing is good. Come on.

It's quite interesting. The protagonist is very interesting. The author has a great imagination and can make the fruit of the hammer come true.

Very good, very funny, the protagonist's strength is also online

It's not invincible, but it's detailed enough. This is the best Pirates fanfic I've ever read [crying] [crying]

It is a slow-burning book, and the protagonist is getting stronger and better little by little.