People Are Falling Apart, Nanook Thinks I'm a Bit Extreme

Starry book friends, come quickly! The current plot is about transforming Beloberg, and is in the process of clearing up wasteland and using basic technology to improve the current situation. So far, there are no mines visually, but the rhythm of this kind of book is difficult to grasp. Generally, the routine will be fixed in the later stage, and unexpected enemies will appear. The speed of technological development is unbalanced, and it develops too fast. Small ones come to big ones, or 1/3 of them are battles. Personally, I feel that the battles are simplified and more descriptions of preparations before the battle and the effects and changes after the battle are added. Some daily routines, not too much and not too little, will make it more comfortable to watch. There are routines, but please downplay them. The routines of building fleets and developing territories have been disgusting →_→. Now I just want to watch the daily lives of Star Iron characters and stars climbing the technology tree to soothe the soul and relieve boredom. Or watch the tension and various preparations before the war, as well as the relaxation and the feeling of getting resources after the war, which makes me feel that I am not playing a fake Stellaris. Come on, author! Looking forward to more updates ( ･ω･ )ﾉ(❁´ω`❁)

I'm not disappointed with the 50,000 people who read this book. Why are there only 37,000 people in Warhammer 40k Red Torrent? Oops, if I really accept it, isn't that the end? As for just a few people watching it? I'm really convinced (; 1_1) Oh, I recommend everyone to read it. The book "Red Torrent" is so good. Don't ask why. I recommended the book among other books, but the emotion I feel now is not mine. 40K, why is it not as boring as this book with only 100,000 words? No, I recommend the book in other people's book reviews and give it a five-star rating╰(*´`*)╯Blood Sacrifice to the God Emperor's Skull and the Golden Throne [sneaky laugh]

Does the author really understand the stars?

The subject matter of this book is quite novel. It is actually based on the world view of Star Railroad, supplemented by the technology in the game Stars. But in fact, there are many problems. The first is the collision between the collapse worldview of the Star Railroad and the science and technology of the stars. The second is the lack of storytelling. The plot is a bit confusing in the early stage, and some key points are not described enough (the key points of describing the character establishment are instead brushed aside, and some innocuous things are indeed described with emphasis). Some plots are insufficiently laid out and very abrupt. In addition, the portrayal of the protagonist is also a bit weak. Final evaluation: Worth watching, the subject matter is good and the potential is high.

The writing is very good, but I would like to ask the author if he can kill the Star Core Hunter later. Of course, it's okay not to kill him. It's just a suggestion. After all, I am a narrow-minded person. Even if he is very "nice" to me in the game, after all, I read the book and become the protagonist, so I understand everything. I am not a crazy person, so I don't have to kill him (the above is just a personal opinion, don't like it)

I was a little confused when I read it, but since this subject is rare, I decided to keep reading.

The writing is very good. Come on, the author. I support you (ง•̀_•́)ง

Halfway through, I suddenly realized, where did the Star Dome Train go?

Your mother... Is in good health

No, that's it Pretty good, but too short

Still too gentle

Except for too many typos, everything else is okay [Chigua]