Your Beast Tamer Is Already Number One in the Otherworld, and You're Still Grinding?

The author's plot is quite coherent. I suggest that the author write more about the daily skill training of the heroine and her pet beasts. Also, I think it is a bit poisonous for the heroine's pet beasts to give away their inheritance crystals before their bloodline evolution. At that time, it was not necessary to give them away. Unfortunately, the heroine's pet beast can obviously evolve by herself first, and then use her own domain to evolve the Yin-Yang beast, and the heroine will be asked to find something to replace the inheritance crystal later. The man named Gu has not yet compensated the heroine's pet beast. After all, the heroine is already very poor, and the only chance he has is to give it away. Not to mention anything else, the relationship between the heroine and the guy named Gu is not that good. If their team is dissolved, then they will have a competitive relationship, which is really frustrating! I saw the heroine later being scolded even though she pretended to be so. Don't write about the heroine being too abusive. I can't stand it.

At the beginning, the heroine awakens her past life memories and has been in the world of cultivation for so many years, but she doesn't feel calm at all. She is really just like an ordinary teenager. Later, she awakens her spiritual power to compete for the Awakening Stone spot, making the first awakening of the first year of high school and the second awakening of the third year of high school compete. She actually favors the content of the third year of high school and makes them all pass the senior year. I don't understand; the heroine It's a bit open. Just by defeating a junior pet beast, you can get more than 7 billion and space stones and other precious resources. It's hard to judge; and whether she trusts her teammates too much. They haven't known each other for a long time, and it's an exchange of interests. She just said that she needs the tokens passed down by her previous master/the leader of humanity in this world. The writing is not particularly fluent, but the plot design lacks logic.

The heroine is very unintelligent and acts like a fool. She refuses the money given by her younger brother's biological parents even though she has no money. She goes to the pet center to find dragon pets even though she has no money. She also goes to a wild pet sanctuary without checking the information clearly. She is not afraid of being in danger.

It's good-looking, the heroine has a strong character, and the pet beasts are also very strong. There are two of them at the moment. I wonder if this book has a CP?

Not bad, the plot content is actually okay. What is more controversial is the part where the heroine Turtle gave the crystal core to the Yin-Yang Beast. Turtle had foreseen the future, and in order to get better resources and connect with the Gu family, he privately made a deal with the Yin-Yang Beast. He gave the crystal core with the intention of exchanging it for resources that would make it stronger. Afterwards, when the heroine was upset because the crystal core was gone, Turtle told the heroine his idea. However, it was just a turtle that had just hatched out of its shell. I probably didn't expect that if it was traded like this, it would be cheated. There is actually no big problem in this episode. It's just that the author's arrangement of the plot made people feel a bit frustrated. If the author's plot was about Turtle and the heroine discussing the deal with Gu, I would not feel aggrieved. In fact, it is just like that. In the end, Gu cannot be bad. In the end, Turtle got the resources he wanted, and the heroine also connected with the Gu family. It actually doesn't matter what I explain to my friends later. We are all comrades and friends, and everyone has even figured it out. Can't we have this little trust? Then the heroine should stop making friends and just be a lone wolf🤷‍♀️ If you mind the plot arrangement above, don't read it. I'm afraid you won't be satisfied after watching it. The heroine is not a saint, she has her own principles. In fact, the plot is not bad, and the supporting characters are not written to be particularly powerful and overwhelm the heroine. The story is written later. The heroine has just awakened and is still a junior. Doesn't it highlight her strength to be able to challenge thirty-eight?

This is probably the first time for the author to write a novel. In fact, it is good to write slowly and write the protagonist's things in an orderly manner. From the beginning, the heroine's things were written very well, but later in the competition, I felt that she was weakened. Is it because there are too many people and the author is not easy to write? The supporting role has the personality of the supporting role, and the heroine should also be more outstanding. I understand that the heroine does not have a golden finger in the early stage and is a bit weak, but I still want to see the heroine have more roles. The competition here feels a bit bumpy. Can the heroine be more high-profile? , Her light was snatched away by the supporting characters, so angry, how can the heroine be like this? And the owner of the Colosseum, is he malicious or good to the heroine? Why did he know that someone was chasing the heroine but didn't help? Is there a foreshadowing in the heroine's life experience?

It's pretty good-looking, but I don't understand why it's useless if it comes from the world of immortality. It's not as useful as something that comes from modern times.

Well, how should I put it? The content is very good, but one shortcoming I personally think is that the plot jumps too suddenly. It suddenly jumps from one very interesting plot to another. This gap is a bit hard to accept (it should mean this, it is very caught off guard). Then, I personally feel that the plot jumps too suddenly. I feel like the plot I was originally interested in jumps to another plot, and I will watch it very impatiently. Although I may jump back to the original plot in the middle, I can't change the gap in my heart, and it doesn't feel particularly good. You may think that this look will make people curious about the previous plot, and they will continue to read it, but for other people (such as me), this look will feel very bad (I say this implicitly, but to say it is not good is a bit disgusting). My suggestion is to hope that there will be less sudden jumps, and if necessary, you can give some hints like dividing lines.

How to say it? When I saw that the inheritance gold was given to others, I thought this book was, well, stupid. , Well, although the comment section says that it will come back later, I think this kind of writing just doesn't look good. It would be fine if he followed more, but I jumped right there. The problem is that he follows less now. Now I originally said that Fang panicked to see you, um.

Support the new book first, it seems to be okay so far, I hope the little turtle will evolve as soon as possible!