My Sequence Is Corrupted? With a Heart of Light, What More Is There to Say?

Woohoo <(ToT)>, a masterpiece! ! ! ! A masterpiece! ! ! ! As long as you can keep it under control and don't end up unfinished, it will be a real masterpiece! ! ! ! ! (That is to say... Can a pumpkin be resurrected?... Don't say it can't!) The protagonist's sense of belief in saving the common people is so passionate! ! ! ! I love seeing this kind of supernatural means! ! ! Already looking forward to the follow-up development The emotional lines of the characters are well described (Sir...) (Master!) (Mingyang!) The background of the main character is very attractive! ! ! I don't know what to say ╮（╯＿╰）╭ Anyway, it looks great! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! I want to see the first, second, third and fourth personalities! What? The fifth personality? Then it can only be... Start! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Got it

I rarely see such an obvious bad ending when reading a book. This book was written very well in the early stage, maybe because the data is really bad, and the author has no energy to finish it, so the protagonist can only create a dream for everyone at the end, and get a good ending in the dream. This is the protagonist trying his best to bring an end to everyone. , I don't know why the data of this book is really bleak. Obviously the author's writing style and ideas are so solid and novel, and the subject matter is also very good. If it can be truly completed, it will definitely not be as simple as it is now. I think this book can compete with many good books in the early stage. It is really a pity, but there is no way. This book has been completed, and I hope that in the new story, those people can have a better ending. [Love]

This is really a good book. It's so beautiful, but it's just lacking a little bit.

Judging from the first volume, the first volume is very exciting, and the plot is also good. If it doesn't collapse in the later stage, it will be another masterpiece in time [Chigua]

The writing is very good, the protagonist has an online IQ and prefers good people, but he is not a virgin either. Very much like the image of a Taoist priest in my mind. The plot logic is perfect. Already a new genre can be discerned, not the traditional sequence flow. There is a lot of innovation. There will be no complete masterpiece later.

The writing is very good, the characters are very vivid, and it is really likable. It is a pity that Nan Guan was originally a policeman but ended up playing the role of a prisoner. His belief in himself collapsed, which may have doomed him from the beginning. However, a prisoner is only a prisoner, not a death row prisoner. Maybe there are changes that can be reformed, not a criminal.

It's well written, with a nice gloomy and depressing atmosphere, close-ups of human nature and the cruelty of the environment. Come on, author!

It's pretty good, the characters are well drawn, but there's very little about their appearance. In other words, I can't imagine it in my mind without me. Write it in more detail, and the subject matter is relatively new. I feel that the last stage of this nine-story Babel Tower is divided into the Good God and the Fallen Angel. And now the Fallen Angels are in power and have polluted the sequence progression.

I have been following this book for a really long time. . . In fact, I started chasing it not long after it was released. The characterization is really good... Even after a long time after chasing it, the impression is still very deep. I even have the urge to keep chasing it. The world view is huge. I kept thinking that it doesn't matter. As long as you keep writing, I will watch it. I didn't expect it to end at that time. It was so sudden... I even thought you were joking at the time, because I didn't expect that such a good book would end suddenly. After waiting a few days, I saw this book and officially marked it as finished. I suddenly realized that this was not a joke. How can I put my feelings at that time... A huge sense of gap. I accidentally browsed the video and saw the alternative setting, and this novel suddenly appeared in my mind... I suddenly went to browse the bookshelf. Even before clicking in, I was imagining whether the author would suddenly write an extra story... This book is really good, I really like it, and I hope the author will bring us good works again. Why am I commenting now? The author really writes well. When I read it, I didn't think of commenting at all. When it was finished, I didn't dare to click in anymore. Now I suddenly feel relieved and can take care of my mood.

I picked it up during class and caught up with the latest chapter in one go. Here's a brief review: 1. The title of the book, the names of some chapters/the name of the protagonist and certain abilities are all related to Yangming's theory of mind. Isn't this kind of adventure not "refining things", and in the "world of mortals" is it not a kind of study of things to gain knowledge? 2. The character image can stand up. Compared with other protagonists who are cold, hesitant, playing big chess with the overall situation, and ruthless and mercenary, Yang Ming has enough character to stand proudly in the weirdness, and he also has enough flesh and blood to bear the innocent heart. 3. The plot of the story is full of ups and downs (you can probably see this after watching it for a while, so I won't go into details here) 4. The writing style is outstanding, delicate and smooth. To give a few small examples, nanguan refers to a beloved man being captured, while tattooing is actually a kind of punishment for people in the past. In the Chu and Han Dynasties, Yingbu, a prisoner in Lishan Mountain, was also called tattooed cloth. Combined with the characters and situations of the two, it is clear at a glance. Fluency is reflected in the reading process, and there will be no obscurity, ambiguity and other disadvantages. … Finally, I really like this kind of "sassy as a shooting star" protagonist. He is full of swordsmanship and heroic spirit. He can break through the constraints and disciplines, darkness and evil in his heart with one sword. With his pure spirit, he has created a grand knight-errant story.