Is the Sequence Contaminated? What Can I Say If My Heart Is Bright Again?

Woohoo <(ToT)>, a masterpiece! ! ! ! A masterpiece! ! ! ! As long as you can keep it under control and don't end up unfinished, it will be a real masterpiece! ! ! ! ! (That is to say... Can a pumpkin be resurrected?... Don't say it can't!) The protagonist's sense of belief in saving the common people is so passionate! ! ! ! I love seeing this kind of supernatural means! ! ! Already looking forward to the follow-up development The emotional lines of the characters are well described (Sir...) (Master!) (Mingyang!) The background of the main character is very attractive! ! ! I don't know what to say ╮（╯＿╰）╭ Anyway, it looks great! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! I want to see the first, second, third and fourth personalities! What? The fifth personality? Then it can only be... Start! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Got it

I rarely see such an obvious bad ending when reading a book. This book was written very well in the early stage, maybe because the data is really bad, and the author has no energy to finish it, so the protagonist can only create a dream for everyone at the end, and get a good ending in the dream. This is the protagonist trying his best to bring an end to everyone. , I don't know why the data of this book is really bleak. Obviously the author's writing style and ideas are so solid and novel, and the subject matter is also very good. If it can be truly completed, it will definitely not be as simple as it is now. I think this book can compete with many good books in the early stage. It is really a pity, but there is no way. This book has been completed, and I hope that in the new story, those people can have a better ending. [Love]

This is really a good book. It's so beautiful, but it's just lacking a little bit.

Judging from the first volume, the first volume is very exciting, and the plot is also good. If it doesn't collapse in the later stage, it will be another masterpiece in time [Chigua]

The writing is very good, the characters are very vivid, and it is really likable. It is a pity that Nan Guan was originally a policeman but ended up playing the role of a prisoner. His belief in himself collapsed, which may have doomed him from the beginning. However, a prisoner is only a prisoner, not a death row prisoner. Maybe there are changes that can be reformed, not a criminal.

The writing is very good, the protagonist has an online IQ and prefers good people, but he is not a virgin either. Very much like the image of a Taoist priest in my mind. The plot logic is perfect. Already a new genre can be discerned, not the traditional sequence flow. There is a lot of innovation. There will be no complete masterpiece later.

It's well written, with a nice gloomy and depressing atmosphere, close-ups of human nature and the cruelty of the environment. Come on, author!

It's pretty good, the characters are well drawn, but there's very little about their appearance. In other words, I can't imagine it in my mind without me. Write it in more detail, and the subject matter is relatively new. I feel that the last stage of this nine-story Babel Tower is divided into the Good God and the Fallen Angel. And now the Fallen Angels are in power and have polluted the sequence progression.

I have been following this book for a really long time. . . In fact, I started chasing it not long after it was released. The characterization is really good... Even after a long time after chasing it, the impression is still very deep. I even have the urge to keep chasing it. The world view is huge. I kept thinking that it doesn't matter. As long as you keep writing, I will watch it. I didn't expect it to end at that time. It was so sudden... I even thought you were joking at the time, because I didn't expect that such a good book would end suddenly. After waiting a few days, I saw this book and officially marked it as finished. I suddenly realized that this was not a joke. How can I put my feelings at that time... A huge sense of gap. I accidentally browsed the video and saw the alternative setting, and this novel suddenly appeared in my mind... I suddenly went to browse the bookshelf. Even before clicking in, I was imagining whether the author would suddenly write an extra story... This book is really good, I really like it, and I hope the author will bring us good works again. Why am I commenting now? The author really writes well. When I read it, I didn't think of commenting at all. When it was finished, I didn't dare to click in anymore. Now I suddenly feel relieved and can take care of my mood.

I picked it up during class and caught up with the latest chapter in one go. Here's a brief review: 1. The title of the book, the names of some chapters/the name of the protagonist and certain abilities are all related to Yangming's theory of mind. Isn't this kind of adventure not "refining things", and in the "world of mortals" is it not a kind of study of things to gain knowledge? 2. The character image can stand up. Compared with other protagonists who are cold, hesitant, playing big chess with the overall situation, and ruthless and mercenary, Yang Ming has enough character to stand proudly in the weirdness, and he also has enough flesh and blood to bear the innocent heart. 3. The plot of the story is full of ups and downs (you can probably see this after watching it for a while, so I won't go into details here) 4. The writing style is outstanding, delicate and smooth. To give a few small examples, nanguan refers to a beloved man being captured, while tattooing is actually a kind of punishment for people in the past. In the Chu and Han Dynasties, Yingbu, a prisoner in Lishan Mountain, was also called tattooed cloth. Combined with the characters and situations of the two, it is clear at a glance. Fluency is reflected in the reading process, and there will be no obscurity, ambiguity and other disadvantages. … Finally, I really like this kind of "sassy as a shooting star" protagonist. He is full of swordsmanship and heroic spirit. He can break through the constraints and disciplines, darkness and evil in his heart with one sword. With his pure spirit, he has created a grand knight-errant story.

It's very beautiful. I hope the author won't give up. I always feel it has great potential! Come on, great author! ! ! ε٩(๑> ₃ <)۶зThe character of the protagonist is also very interesting, so why do you want to kill me? There are still a little few chapters, but I don't want to keep reading. I hope to read one chapter at a time｡:.ﾟヽ(*´∀`)ﾉﾟ.:｡Love you more than my heart ꒰^ↀωↀ^꒱❤❤[ Send heart][ Send heart][ Send heart][ Send heart][ Send heart][ Send heart]

Not bad, not bad, very good-looking. Can we still meet the partners on the first floor in the subsequent plot? I feel that this book has the potential to be above 9.5

How wonderful! How wonderful! How wonderful! 33 Sequences, 33 performances, there is not only one way to the future, but also the sequence! Light and darkness depend on each other, life and death, 33 roles, 33 lives. There are two sides to a coin, and so is human nature. It is easy to do evil but difficult to do good. There is sadness and joy, look at it and cherish it.

The author's writing style is very good. I originally thought that Qin Yangming would brave the dangers and walk out of the Tower of Babel to find a way to reappear his companions, but I really didn't expect that it would end with everyone falling asleep. I think the ending of this book can be completely based on the ending of the first part of Lord of Mysteries, where Klein falls into a deep sleep and then a new protagonist is written in the second part to help the protagonist of the first part.

The structure is novel and the plot is excellent. The setting is interesting and the connection is smooth. I have been walking around the world for many days. Looking around this world, although there are two or three strange things in this world, my luck is not good, and everything I see does not end well. I am lucky now, but I get something here and there. Those who read this book will soar in one day. To the end There's no punchline here No way to heaven All thoughts are lost

The characters are described in detail and the plot is compact.

It was well written, and I really liked the portrayal of several teammates and the characteristics of certain characters, but the subsequent plot suddenly accelerated and then ended with a false happy ending, and the protagonist was still alone and did not know where to go.

Although the writing is not perfect in some places, people who are familiar with the rules in the book can pick out such big flaws as the previous announcer. It is a bit inappropriate to use this as the final clue. But the overall storyline is very smooth, and the sequence of the protagonist is deeply portrayed. But other supporting characters describe not the sequence but their own image, possibly to pave the way for the protagonist's rapid promotion. This is a novel with great potential, but it is currently too short. I hope it will be updated soon.

I just finished reading and I still feel a sense of "awe" in my heart. This book is unique among Tomatoes, with good writing and good content. It really raised my expectations. The world view in this book is huge, and the plots are closely connected. Each link is connected, wonderful! It is undoubtedly a good book written by the author! [Blowing kiss]

It's still pretty good and has potential. Structurally speaking, the whole thing is relatively compact. The overall framework is still very good. I hope the author can further improve his literary talent and strive for a more exciting plot.

Personally I think it is a very good article. There is no problem with the writing style, the characters in the article are clear, and the writing is mixed with the contrast between good and evil in human nature. Judging from the few chapters currently available, it is a work worth reading. Fortune tellers and Taoist priests are also my favorite character styles!

There's not much to say, and it's well worth reading (although some say the ending is a little rushed, and some say it's a bit final), but it's still a good article. There are occasional parts that readers may question in the middle, but most of them are foreshadowing. There are some knives in the article that are a bit touching. Ah, damn ending, damn knife. It is obviously a happy ending, but it feels even more knife-like. There is a faint feeling of powerlessness, a kind of gentle sadness, false happiness, and an overly realistic feeling of powerlessness (no matter how hard you try, you cannot change the established ending and cannot see the feeling of hope. Obviously the person who gave up in the end was once the most tenacious and persistent person who pursues the light)

If the quality and standard of the first volume can be maintained, I believe it will be Tomato's masterpiece, and it will also be one of the best urban novels I have read recently. The localized Cthulhu novel is very well written! ! !

Very very beautiful! ! The subject matter is very novel, the characters almost all have their own designs, and the best thing is the writing style. I like it very much! ! !

The author's emotional description is very good, and his grasp of details is also good. Generally speaking, the author's level is always online. As long as it doesn't collapse, there is a high probability that it will be a masterpiece [heartfelt]

The plot is quite good, and the author has a rich imagination. It's not like Tomato's various routine template novels, but some details are a bit inappropriate in my opinion, but it doesn't matter. This book is quite interesting, and it should be no problem if it gets a score of nine or above.

It's quite good. It's one of the more distinctive and attractive novels in the same genre written with an oriental background. I've read a few books with an oriental background, but they were all eunuchs. I hope this one has a lot of pitfalls in the early stages, but it should be well written.

A very interesting world view and plot design. The disadvantage is that the pace is a bit fast, which makes some characters' personalities and emotions a bit inexplicable. You can consider giving some memories of the characters before they were captured before their death to make certain characteristics of the characters more concrete and vivid, like in Ten Days End. (The plot is good, but the emotional line, emmm, maybe it's because I read it too quickly... Why Xu Xiaobao suddenly fell in love with the police officer, Bai Lu, why Yu Ji fell in love with the protagonist, etc., I feel a lot of emotions are inexplicable.)

From this book, we can see the shadows of "Secret", "Ten Days", "Dao Wei", etc. The author cleverly absorbed some settings and plots from these books, and then used his refined writing style and powerful imagination to write exquisite stories. From some foreshadowings and hints, it can be seen that the author is very good at digging holes, and the story is also fascinating. The diary chapter is both filling in holes and foreshadowing, but it took a few chapters to connect the content with the previous ones, which was too slow. I hope it can be faster.

This book is really good and worth reading. At least the twists and turns of the plot, the brilliance of human nature, some explorations of Taoist doctrines, and the battle of wits are all very good. Before the 100th picture, I thought this was a masterpiece, but then the subsequent plot was indeed a bit far-fetched, and some did not meet my inner expectations. So this is my heart. I hope that the author's subsequent plots can reproduce or even surpass the plot of Cradle. Then I will give you five stars.