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Traveling to a different world, the human race has not yet developed its wisdom, and the demon race has only just started.
I, an ordinary person who traveled to another world without dying, experienced the big boss's plan and the emergence of the way of heaven.
I just got a little luckier, I have a little bit of ability, and I slightly changed the different world.
The story of becoming a Taoist ancestor of a world from a mortal.
Reader comments
This book left a deep impression on me from the beginning to the middle, with ups and downs of the plot and vivid characters. However, when I turned the last page and saw the eye-popping finale, I couldn't help but feel disappointed and dissatisfied. I feel very regretful that what originally sounded like such a fascinating story ended in such an inexplicable and clueless ending. This finale greatly reduced my satisfaction with the entire work and was really hard to accept.
During the reading process, I have been looking forward to a satisfying ending, one that can perfectly wrap up the previous story threads. However, when I saw the ending, I felt very disappointed. It seems to be a hastily thrown together ending that lacks logic and rationality. The previous foreshadowing and foreshadowing were not well resolved, leaving people feeling confused and dissatisfied.
What's even more difficult for me to accept is that the ending seems to have no meaning. It leaves the reader with no revelations or room for thought, and simply ends the story. This ending, which lacked depth and content, made me very sad. I hope the author can conceive and create more carefully and give readers a more complete and meaningful ending to the story.
Overall, although the first half of the book brought me a lot of fun and surprises, the disappointing ending dampened my overall evaluation of it. I hope that the author can pay more attention to the structure of the story and the rationality of the ending in future works, so as to give readers a more satisfactory reading experience.
I think it's okay. A lot of details should be added. Cultivation of immortality is not like cultivating immortality. Science is not like science. Hey.
If you can still see it, let's take care of it first. What do you think of what's written on the back?
This book left a deep impression on me from the beginning to the middle, with ups and downs of the plot and vivid characters. However, when I turned the last page and saw the eye-popping finale, I couldn't help but feel disappointed and dissatisfied. I feel very regretful that what originally sounded like such a fascinating story ended in such an inexplicable and clueless ending. This finale greatly reduced my satisfaction with the entire work and was really hard to accept. During the reading process, I have been looking forward to a satisfying ending, one that can perfectly wrap up the previous story threads. However, when I saw the ending, I felt very disappointed. It seems to be a hastily thrown together ending that lacks logic and rationality. The previous foreshadowing and foreshadowing were not well resolved, leaving people feeling confused and dissatisfied. What's even more difficult for me to accept is that the ending seems to have no meaning. It leaves the reader with no revelations or room for thought, and simply ends the story. This ending, which lacked depth and content, made me very sad. I hope the author can conceive and create more carefully and give readers a more complete and meaningful ending to the story. Overall, although the first half of the book brought me a lot of fun and surprises, the disappointing ending dampened my overall evaluation of it. I hope that the author can pay more attention to the structure of the story and the rationality of the ending in future works, so as to give readers a more satisfactory reading experience.
I think it's okay. A lot of details should be added. Cultivation of immortality is not like cultivating immortality. Science is not like science. Hey.
If you can still see it, let's take care of it first. What do you think of what's written on the back?