The Outcast: Changing Everything from the Wind-Chasing Bird

The author himself comes to the stars

Everything else is okay, but it's a bit hard to accept that the protagonist lets the Nether Demon attack ordinary people in order to gain emotional points. If the attacks are all people from Little Japan and Beautiful Country, I can accept it, but it's still hard to accept that it attacks ordinary people in China.

Mainly, the most important first few chapters are basically based on the original work, and there is no abbreviation. Most people have read Under One Person. The author wrote the first few chapters according to the original work, and everyone wanted it to be more enjoyable. Until about ten chapters, I skipped several chapters without any problem... Also, the author used Pinball Legend as a golden finger behind the scenes at the beginning. It is an interesting point for those like me who have read it, but it is very unfriendly to those who are behind the scenes + fans of Under One Person. The first golden finger prop is relatively unfamiliar and there is basically no introduction. I have written several chapters based on the original work of Under One Person. It is normal to feel bored. If it starts with the golden finger prop that everyone is familiar with, maybe everyone will look forward to it more. I haven't read the back part yet, I hope the author will write better and better, come on!

Novel and pretty

When I first saw the name and introduction, I thought the world view was a bit strange and difficult to integrate, but after reading it, I felt it was very good. The author has integrated the two very well. It is very good and beautiful. I am looking forward to the follow-up and whether there will be others in the future? . 🍉 🍉 🍉

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

It's quite interesting, so I'll give it a five-star rating.

This theme is 6! I thought it was just Pinball Legend at first, but I didn't expect that it also stitched together Armor Warrior, Inuyasha, and Armor 2.

It's very novel. It's like childhood and innovative. The protagonist is really behind the scenes. It's the first time that I can't see the mastermind behind the scenes who disrupts the situation. The author has great ideas and there are no pitfalls for the time being. Don't worry and watch it. Good luck to the author 👍👍👍

It's okay, it's pretty good, but everything is crammed into one world, which doesn't look good. If you can, you can write an upper bound, and the world can be made larger, and it will be easier to write when combined.