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It's quite interesting. I personally think that Beng Tie is one of the few fanfics with better writing skills. Come on, author, don't stop updating [Sending my heart]

Excellent, so excellent. The writing is really good, and the Star Iron book is of high quality. Author, please keep it up and keep updating Please write more scenes featuring Ruan Mei! ! ! Don't forget Ruan Mei when writing later! Thank you, daily life is fine too!

The writing style is okay, and the description of each character's emotions is not embarrassing. The author has put great effort into researching the background of Star Iron and the background of the characters at first glance, so the character design is very suitable for the character. I hope the author can write the plot of Liu Ying better, otherwise it will be easy to be criticized [Like][Like][Like]

The writing is good, please update more, Assi. But can the author just insist on having two female protagonists? It's Jingliu and Ruan Mei

It's a pity that it is no longer updated. It is a fanfic with a good grasp of the rhythm. It is considered to be the best among fanfic simulation novels. The writing style of writing emotions is quite delicate. Compared with the so-called sweet and disgusting plots in other simulation novels, it can even be regarded as a dimensionality reduction attack. It is a rare good novel among tomato fans.

To be honest, I have been reading Tomato for three years, and I haven't seen a novel that interests me so much in a long time. The author's writing style is very good, and almost every story he simulates has a series of clues. It can be seen that the author should have conceived the framework of the story in advance, and then completed the details. There are no brainless characters in the plot, and each character has his or her own storyline. I highly recommend this book! ! ! ! [Top post][Top post][Top post][Top post]

The writing is very nice. I like the plot setting very much. Kudos to the author! ✧(◍˃̶ᗜ˂̶◍)✩

This book is quite good-looking, the plot is coherent, the protagonist's character design is also good, and even the original character's character design is not broken (except that I am not mute). But, but, how did the author manage to be shorter than Sanjiu? ! [Cover face]

It is well written and can be compared with the book next door, The Black Tower.

The writing is good, and the structure of the whole book is okay so far. However, the character expressions in the back are a bit stiff, and there are some problems with transitions and logic. It reads a bit strange, but I can clearly see the reference. In short, keep working hard and take every book seriously.

Okay, it's pretty good-looking. Although this type of simulator is not suitable for dual heroines, it's still pretty good (multiple heroines are fine, too) [rolls eyes][rolls eyes][rolls eyes]

I read the latest chapter. From my perspective, this book is very, very well written. First of all, I am a loyal Star Iron player. Although the author's main plot deviates from the main line of the game, its rich description and imagination shocked me, especially the author's second creation, which is really good, and this book The portrayal of each character in the book is very consistent with the "original work". This is one of the better fan novels I have read. Of course, the shortcomings of this book are also very obvious. There are too few characters [smile] and there are too many knives. It feels like they are all direct disciples of Roast Chicken. Why did you break the chapter when punching the tree? , I highly recommend this book, I hope there are more chapters (author, why are you so out of context)?

The latest paragraph has a strong sense of immersion, although it still feels a bit rushed. It took only three hundred years for a person to be resurrected in the world view of the Mi family, but it is enough to see. Although this paragraph borrows a lot of examples about our bishop, the author's writing skills are also evident. Keep up the good work, and you are the only book on Tomato that I am still recommending. As long as the arrangements are made later, this will definitely be a masterpiece with a score of 9 or more... [Eating Melon] [Sending Hearts]

To be honest, the writing is in line with my expectations for Star Iron. It is different from most Star Iron novels that are simply sugar-coated and the heroine gives them brainlessly. The emotional line of this book is very well written. The character of the male protagonist is not a bad person. He is also not the kind of person who behaves without thinking. He also does not have the kind of careless moaning and forced differentiation that some male protagonists in novels have. It meets all my expectations for male protagonists in novels. He is usually kind-hearted, but he can do anything for the people he loves. At the same time, this novel does not have the kind of uncomfortable plot where the protagonist sacrifices everything for the heroine and the result is unknown, which is very suitable for me. In addition, the author's writing style is also quite good, and it looks very comfortable. The only shortcoming is that the update is so slow that even the production team members don't dare to rest like this＼（_ｏ）／

Full marks 😡 It's very interesting, I hope it doesn't end badly. It's just that I don't understand some of the words that describe appearance [smile]

Just watch it, the plot is sweet, sharp and funny, Shura Field is also quite fun. The self-feeling of the character's description is not too destructive, and Ruan Mei's melancholy can be felt, but the melons in the plot are also quite good. The descriptions of the other characters Kagura, Ginlang, and Ryuu Kakuba are also great. The only one who felt a little bit abrupt was Huang Quan, but Huang Quan hadn't completely stepped into nothingness at that time, so he couldn't accept it. This is a great summary. I hope the author will continue reading more. (ง •̀_•́)งCome on

Among the "Beng Tie" books, it is one of my favorites, and it is one of the few that I have finished reading, because many of them will collapse later, but he does not. He connects all the plots, especially for a simulator like this. Each plot he writes is also very sensational. In summary, it is worth watching. It is recommended not to read too much every day, otherwise you will still feel bored even though it is very good-looking later on. I feel this way myself. I think it is enough to read it in three days. Anyway, don't read it in one day. It is really dizzy. I didn't think some of them were very good at the time. After a while, I watched it again and thought it was okay. Personal advice Don't ask why it's a day, just see how long it lasts

Tonic, please continue. I started reading it at the beginning of last year. I read it while reading, but then I stopped reading. I have been waiting for a year from last year to now, and I am confused. Is it possible to survive? This is Bengtie's highest-quality simulation novel. Whether it is the plot control and portrayal, or the reasonable handling of the emotional disputes between multiple heroines, it has truly reached the pinnacle of Bengtie fanfics. I have reached the peak of my book. Can I survive? I have visited the grave nearly ten times. Can I survive? - This is such a good fanfic. I really don't want it to end like this. The 9.5 Rating is just because of the discontinuation of updates. But in my opinion, this book is more than 9.5 In fanfics. I rarely ask for help like this, but this time I beg you. Can you survive? A super awesome fanfic, probably unparalleled among Bengtie simulations. It is also one of the earliest simulations of Bengtie. I feel that many of the fanfics published later have a bit of the shadow of this book (personal opinion). The writing style is delicate and smooth. The story is also very good. The scene rendering and characterization are in place. The characters are described appropriately, and the emotional entanglement between the protagonist and other characters The writing is very natural, and the protagonist's handling of emotions is also very good. The emotional disputes do not have the disadvantages of artificiality and unreality that are easily tolerated in other fanfics, and there are no uncomfortable scenes of wisdom. It has been a long time since I have seen such a high-quality fanfic. I think the real score should not be only 9.5 Points (probably due to frequent interruptions and less volume)

It is indeed top-notch. I think it is the best among the Bengtie fanfics. The writing and emotional scenes are very good. I like it very much. But the author, can you not use eunuchs? Stand up. The data is very good. You make it hard for me to be a mirror-flow Ruan Mei fan. It is difficult to find a good book that Ruan Mei, a mirror-flow writer, can write at the same time.

The writing is good, but it cannot break my resistance to fan fiction with familiar stories, or stories similar to harems. My rejection of fanfic is because I know the original story well and I don't want the story to be changed in any way. I just want it to remain the same.

The writing style is quite good, but the character expression is a bit stiff. However, this is the author's first time writing, and it's already very good to be able to write like this. I give it five stars.

The look and feel is very good, the writing is very good, the character's personality is well grasped, and it is not OOC. Gives people a refreshing feeling. For example, I didn't like Jingliu very much, but when I read the story written by the author, tears filled my eyes several times when I cut the knife, and when it was time to be sweet, my mouth was harder to press than AK. I am Liu Ying's chef, and I have just finished watching the part about Jing Liu, and I am looking forward to seeing the rest of Liu Ying's story. Let me use my adoptive father's words to evaluate. Not bad, plus five points.

The clues of the article are clear, the theme is prominent, and the poetic language at the beginning and end of the article is full of imagination and rhythmic beauty. It makes people want to read it, love reading it, and can't bear to put it down. But the plot at the end is a bit cumbersome. The last few female protagonists are not with the male protagonist, but are with me. [Almost crying]

The book is very good and the group of friends are also bt, I like it

I saw Ruan Mei's plot. It feels very good (´∀｀*) It's a pity that it has the tag of multiple female protagonists, otherwise it would have been a single female protagonist. How many are there so far? Hopefully the less the better. The plot and writing style have been maintained all the way, which is a pity, as there are more and more female protagonists with high posture. Can anyone recommend a Honkai or Honkai manga with a story about a single or girl main character that is at least not too different from this one?

The novel is short and concise, with concise remarks. Generally speaking, it explains the profound things in a simple way. It has solid knowledge and excellent expression skills, which makes people can't help but read it again and again. The most important thing is that the author himself is very active, a gentleman like Heng, and has a graceful appearance, which made my carnival chair go into the cellar [face covering] [OK]

Among the best-written in the Tomato simulation circle, the emotions are quite on point and the writing is not bad. It is worth a read. The most worrying thing now is whether this book will be too short and whether Shura Field will be able to unfold smoothly in the future. [Laughing][laughing]

It's good-looking and fast-changing. The character creation is quite in line with the game, and it pays more attention to logic than ordinary simulation novels. The protagonist is not indecisive [like][like][like]. Bai Heng from Yunshang Wuxiao is not dead, and this is the first time I have seen the protagonist who is a company executive. It is quite interesting. The protagonist also has several Grammer Iron Cavalry (Molten Knight) under his command. He is super handsome! Come on, come on, go to Pinoconi, I want to see the flying fireflies! ! ! [Laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh]

The writing is very good, the story is compact and leaves people wanting more. The Grammer Cavalry Chapter connects the Ruan Mei Chapter, the Mirror Stream Chapter and the Silver Wolf Chapter. According to the timeline, if the initial ether is not obtained in the Silver Wolf Chapter, there will be no subsequent reappearance key. Fusion of the power of the remaining Orders, resurrection of Liuying, endless reincarnation of life and death, everything does not matter, everything does matter,

It is composed of different stories, a bit like the "Planto" I watched when I was a kid, from beginning to end. It has great stamina, but the update is a bit slow, with only three chapters a day. If you tell me about it, the book group next door will think that we are looking down on it.