[No emotional lines, no heroine + slow heat + fantasy world + not invincible + not cool writing + micrograms]
When the bones became power, Ulti stood at the watershed of his destiny, and was bizarrely involved in the murder of unnatural forces. The world swallowed him up with pollution and madness...
An ordinary jewelry craftsman, a door to a mysterious world, a world where divinity and humanity are intertwined. What is the origin of the souvenir? Who is pushing and who is watching? On the day when the jewelry store named Walkeren's Book opens, the curtain of destiny has been opened...
[This article is a bit slow and not very exciting. It is a fantasy world in the author's mind.
Reader comments
New book for newcomers. Wang Po sells melons and boasts about herself.
The protagonist created in this book is not intended to be very powerful, and I even slightly reduced the sense of existence in many places about "superpowers". What I want to describe more is the mentality of an ordinary "person" when facing changes and the confusion of the unknown. And they all have flaws and no one is perfect. There will be many contrasting things in the plot. For example, things that seem evil belong to justice. No matter which emotion reaches the extreme, it will become "pollution".
For me personally, this story is what I want to tell everyone. It will be very interesting. Hope you guys like it.
I haven't read much of it so far, and I really like the story and world view presented by the author. However, some of the author's writing habits make me uncomfortable, which greatly affects the reading experience.
In the article, there are some places where the sentence should be broken. The author stops the sentence. It is very tiring to read the two sentences together, and the word "de" is often abused in irrelevant places, which affects the reading. I hope the author can pay attention to these places. The story itself is quite attractive.
It's very beautiful. It's as exciting as Lord of Mysteries.
OMG! I actually saw the mysterious genre in 🍅! ! This is incredible!
I had a feeling that this book would be 🔥, and the writing would have that flavor.
Come on come on! ! !
Very good, so far there is no problem, the bookshelf has been added
My feeling (smooth, attractive content, clear characters) summary: If you like the slow reading, I recommend reading it, and if you don't like it, you can keep it.
Comments: The pace of the new book is slow, and it is difficult for people to keep following it. The slow pace does not mean that there are no ups and downs. It is a bit dull. The following content is easy to see. The author Qianmen likes to add characters. After writing two chapters, I feel like I already know what this character will do.
It looks good and feels very stable. It's pretty good for newcomers, but it's just a little lacking. Come on.
It's beautiful, come on
The writing is very good. After reading this, I think the character creation is still very good, and the story framework is also OK. It is not a cool novel in the popular sense, but this kind of step-by-step development feels very good. I have followed it.
The writing was so humbling, it was beyond words [laughing evilly]
Looks good, come on!
The characters are ok, the plot is ok, but why is there a knife? ~Author, why don't you ko (just kidding)
This book is obviously very good, why are there so few people reading it?
It's good-looking, the writing style is top-notch among Tomatoes, and the characters are very distinct. It doesn't have the same stereotyped protagonists as in other novels. Most of the supporting characters will also have memorable points. The style of painting is a bit mysterious and the plot is smooth. I don't know why it is not popular...
The plot structure is ingenious and the writing is delicate. This article should not be a tomato, but should be created in Dianjia. Comments: Boss, please update soon! !
Come on author, your writing is great! [Blowing kiss]
It's not easy to find a book that you can read these days, but this one is just fine!
It should be about ordinary people traveling through time. The identity of the killer is enough to be written in a time-traveling style.
It has a great and novel setting, which is also different from the Grammar novels I have seen. The plot and characters are also great, and it has no positive reviews. However, it is not updated every day. Will it be completed in my lifetime?
New book for newcomers. Wang Po sells melons and boasts about herself. The protagonist created in this book is not intended to be very powerful, and I even slightly reduced the sense of existence in many places about "superpowers". What I want to describe more is the mentality of an ordinary "person" when facing changes and the confusion of the unknown. And they all have flaws and no one is perfect. There will be many contrasting things in the plot. For example, things that seem evil belong to justice. No matter which emotion reaches the extreme, it will become "pollution". For me personally, this story is what I want to tell everyone. It will be very interesting. Hope you guys like it.
I haven't read much of it so far, and I really like the story and world view presented by the author. However, some of the author's writing habits make me uncomfortable, which greatly affects the reading experience. In the article, there are some places where the sentence should be broken. The author stops the sentence. It is very tiring to read the two sentences together, and the word "de" is often abused in irrelevant places, which affects the reading. I hope the author can pay attention to these places. The story itself is quite attractive.
It's very beautiful. It's as exciting as Lord of Mysteries.
OMG! I actually saw the mysterious genre in 🍅! ! This is incredible! I had a feeling that this book would be 🔥, and the writing would have that flavor. Come on come on! ! !
Very good, so far there is no problem, the bookshelf has been added
My feeling (smooth, attractive content, clear characters) summary: If you like the slow reading, I recommend reading it, and if you don't like it, you can keep it. Comments: The pace of the new book is slow, and it is difficult for people to keep following it. The slow pace does not mean that there are no ups and downs. It is a bit dull. The following content is easy to see. The author Qianmen likes to add characters. After writing two chapters, I feel like I already know what this character will do.
It looks good and feels very stable. It's pretty good for newcomers, but it's just a little lacking. Come on.
It's beautiful, come on
The writing is very good. After reading this, I think the character creation is still very good, and the story framework is also OK. It is not a cool novel in the popular sense, but this kind of step-by-step development feels very good. I have followed it.
The writing was so humbling, it was beyond words [laughing evilly]
Looks good, come on!
The characters are ok, the plot is ok, but why is there a knife? ~Author, why don't you ko (just kidding)
This book is obviously very good, why are there so few people reading it?
It's good-looking, the writing style is top-notch among Tomatoes, and the characters are very distinct. It doesn't have the same stereotyped protagonists as in other novels. Most of the supporting characters will also have memorable points. The style of painting is a bit mysterious and the plot is smooth. I don't know why it is not popular...
The plot structure is ingenious and the writing is delicate. This article should not be a tomato, but should be created in Dianjia. Comments: Boss, please update soon! !
Come on author, your writing is great! [Blowing kiss]
It's not easy to find a book that you can read these days, but this one is just fine!
It should be about ordinary people traveling through time. The identity of the killer is enough to be written in a time-traveling style.
It has a great and novel setting, which is also different from the Grammar novels I have seen. The plot and characters are also great, and it has no positive reviews. However, it is not updated every day. Will it be completed in my lifetime?