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Come on! The horse design is well designed and doesn't seem to have any bad points. If it were written according to the plot of My Little Pony, I should be able to write at least a hundred chapters, and it also includes daily life, so don't stop updating, I will keep reading. The premise is not to collapse.

White water horse head Lao Ma Hei's secret recipe of spicy salt and pepper Hot rapeseed~ Let's get some vinegar soul sauce Water it~~! White water horse head Lao Hei's secret recipe of salt and pepper Hot rapeseed~ Let's get some vinegar soul sauce Water it~~!

The divine book, let's not talk about it anymore! The emotional drama is really good to watch! The forbidden love between the wasteland shadow demon and the pony princess (although not yet) (but it is not forbidden, both families have met and have a very good relationship...), The only drawback is that one chapter per day is a bit short... @MYLIMIT Did you hear it? ! Write more! (Actually, I also know that one chapter with four to five thousand words is enough for others to cover two chapters a day... But I can't help but it's so good and I want to keep reading!)

Hurrah! Quite pretty! Author, you must live!

It's really good! It feels like reliving an old dream. I want to watch it again, but there is no Black Moon in the original work and I won't read it [Cherish it carefully] [Cherish it carefully]

It's very good-looking, and it's not like other pony fans who engage in dark stories or harem stories. The protagonist, Ma She, is well designed, cruel to enemies and kind to friends. I hope the author can continue writing without interruption or unfinished work. Come on, author

This is the best My Little Pony fanfic I have ever seen.

Keep up the good work, author, I like it very much [blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

It vividly tells the story of Black Moon in detail. I feel that Black Moon is a rogue and handsome person. In fact, I particularly like King Sombra in the original work, especially in the comics. And the author just brought out the black moon from it

It's good to read, I love reading it, but I don't read much (because I write novels) The protagonist is created naturally [like], m6's character is in line with the original work [like], and the change curve is gentle [like], it will not make people feel abrupt [like], and the original plot is very exciting Just say that The novel is very good, and the author is also very good [eating melon] Highly recommended. I estimate that I will have to collaborate with this author on my novels in the future, but neither party has decided whether to write it or not [Chigua]

I've only read Chapter 24, but I can tell it's a high-quality fanfic. The protagonist is very strong! But being strong is not out of the ordinary. Twilight's character and strength are better than those in the original work. The relationship between the two is also very clear! No different than a couple! The most important point is that the author can well depict the impact of the protagonist, and there are still many differences in details from the original work. Many fan fictions fail to do this.

The writing is great, but I really hope the order of the extra episodes can be adjusted! I saw your comment before that Tomato is not allowed to open hell separately. You can put the manuscript away first, and then when the main plot here is about to end, you can separate it for him at the end. Form a side story!

The content is clear, the plot develops smoothly, the characters are realistic, and a real world is restored, making us feel immersed in it when reading. Again, to feel good about yourself, this book is recommended for everyone with eyes to read.

Very nice, a little more integrated than other My Little Ponies, I don't know if it's a single female protagonist or a harem story.

A very good article, with a complete setting and a lot of words in each chapter. Discord's first confrontation with Black Moon. Discord's demeanor was a bit OOC, even though it was acted. But when Discord faced the night's poisonous words and attacks, his demeanor in the script he wrote would never become angry. The Fun Man would never do anything that would harm his own personality. He would only do things that harm the personality of others and make fun of others. Things got better later on. He had the momentum of the King of Chaos, and the same goes for Whitewash. There is still the Fun Man's spirit and strong strength. He is really good, including the follow-up plots, especially the Curse of Fate plot and the time-traveling plot to Gotham City, which is hot-blooded and bloody. The supporting characters are also well portrayed, including Fan Sipan, who is highly intelligent, strategic, elegant and graceful, like the second male lead, and some small daily details, such as the protagonist will emphasize to others that he only likes some obedient children, as well as some of the protagonist's scheming, and being strict with his wife, all very detailed. I recommend you to check it out 🙂

Great author! I have read the whole story, it is very good, and there are also some occasional extras. Meaning. I personally think it's very good. And the most important one point. Exactly 500 pieces! Except for Guigui and a few author. I haven't seen any author who can write so many more. Although I don't know why the author didn't update it, it's very good. Look forward to it. Awaiting your update. [Laugh][laugh][laugh]

To be honest, this is the best My Little Pony fanfic I have ever seen! ! ! Both the plot and the characterization are perfect! This is a novel that will make you hooked after just a few chapters! [Praise]

It's well written and has a fan base that will listen. Black Moon's character is written very fully. But I have one more thing to say, author, please, give me an administrator.

It's a very good book with a positive energy, the plot is quite interesting, and the characters in the book are vividly written. Moreover, the CP between the protagonist and Twilight Yue is really good, which even makes me afraid to read the next book. I want to keep the good memories [smile] There are only 4 stars because I prefer reading books about villains, but I don't object to CP. Another reason is that I don't like the feeling of the protagonist being manipulated, such as Fuck, Discord, etc. Although it is for the protagonist's good, there is also fate that is even more annoying. In summary, those who love reading friendship and CP are in luck. Those who prefer villains can also read it, but only if you can tolerate the positive energy. Just like me, I decided to give up the book after reading the sixth volume, but I was very sad that I could never see Twilight Black CP again [crying][crying][crying][crying] Farewell, I'm going to look for the next book about Zi CP. It's strange, why does it feel like the black moon has been turned green [crying] Can the author reply to me after reading this and comfort my hurt heart?

Good-looking is good-looking [Blowing kisses] It's necessary to have so many∠～ Those who like the protagonist who does not travel through time and space Families who like the protagonist to take the villain template Just come and see it [laughs] You can watch it even if you are not a pony fan (w jo bushi)

It's so good to watch, especially those funny scenes in Hei Ye and the sweet interactions between Twilight Yue and Hei Ye, they are all very good to watch. This book fulfilled all my wishes for little Maria. 👍👍👍👍👍

The plot of Pony is very good. It was my first time to read Pony. It was this book that pulled me into Pony's world, allowed me to see Pony's new future, and also introduced me to various excellent works. I really appreciate the author. (In addition, I am the first on the list, and the author likes >ᴗoಣ)

I don't know why I still like to watch this kind of pure love with a single heroine than without a harem, it's so awesome

At present, the appearance of Black Moon is like a DLC for the original plot. It is a more interesting process. Force is supreme. It is also a rare villain (race) protagonist. I am looking forward to the future more and more [laughing]

🌈I recently read The Evil Boss and Hell Inn and really liked it. When I was looking for fan fiction, I saw the recommendation of this book in the community. I didn't like My Little Pony (I haven't read it), so I prefer to read the extras. 🎉The extras written by the author are very good [blowing kiss] like [love] [love] [love]

I haven't read many My Little Pony fanfics, but this one is really good. It's very comfortable to read. The poisonous points end at the place where I saw them, and there are basically no poisonous points. [Sending my heart][Sending my heart][Sending my heart]

Your novels are like stars shining in the sea of ​​literature, and your talents and talents are like trickles that merge into rivers and flow between the lines. Every time you read your articles, you feel like you are in a wonderland, your heart moves with the words and you can't help yourself. However, your updates are gradually slowing down, which makes me eager to look forward to it. I hope you will take pity on the pain of our readers who are eager to read, write quickly, and give you new chapters as soon as possible. @MYLIMIT

It's very interesting. It's the first time I've read Pony Ma's book for so long. I just feel that the extra chapters at the end are too dramatic. If possible, I think it would be better to have an extra chapter at the end. Now I just read one chapter of the main story, skip to the extra chapter, and then watch the extra chapter after finishing the main story. It's the first time I've seen an extra chapter of more than 70 chapters. I'll tell you the truth [face covering] [OK]

I want to see the black mist in hell [please update] Aba Aba (˘̩̩̩ε˘̩ƪ), after reading this extra episode, I don't want to read the main plot anymore [crying] From the first chapter to more than 70 chapters, I skipped all the main plots in the middle. Then I turned back and wanted to read it again, but found that I couldn't get into it [Petrochemical] It immediately cracked

It's quite interesting. In fact, I didn't feel much about this book at first. The foreshadowing at the beginning is a little long, and I haven't seen such in-depth foreshadowing and framing before. Fortunately, I kept reading, otherwise I would have missed such a good Marven. Now I can see the later stages without even realizing it.