Warhammer****

Reasons for the Iron Man Rebellion: First of all, the golden people are gone, and only ordinary humans and stone people are left. The number of stone men was too small to control so many, so the iron man was created Then came the golden age In the middle and late stages of the Golden Age, humans played too much and followed the old path of the Eldar. Iron Man really can't stand it anymore and wants to clear up his policy (The main reason why Iron Man is said to hate intelligence is because it has no soul at all and is not affected by subspace) After that, Iron Man was attacked by the whole galaxy (including Eldar and other aliens) The natural result is that the iron man is defeated (there is no way, a good tiger cannot fight against a pack of wolves) As a result, he stabbed a human in the back just after beating the alien. After that, there is the subspace storm that we love to see (Electronic Demon is a translation problem)

Author, do you dare to use more punctuation marks?

The author writes more. Whenever you write more, I will leave this piece of my heart to you. And the original version?

The reason why I feel good about it may be because the story is very good, the characters are full-bodied, there are many details, and the characters have strong personalities. However, the reason why I didn't give it five stars is because there are many typos and many sentences without punctuation. Overall, it is pretty good.

Brother, please be careful to divide it into sections in the future. Don't make it too long.

A bit abstract, but really good?

It would be fine if there were more punctuation marks😌

Although I don't understand it, the world view of Warhammer is really big

Come across such a good book by chance (a message from an unknown person)

It suited my taste and I finished reading it in one sitting.

All I can say is, full of faints!

A pretty good book

Is the author considering looking for polish?

Fast pace, not bad😄

Beautiful and highly recommended

Good Warhammer article

It's too short and not enough to read.

The book is okay, but the author made the ribs and insects too simple. It can be seen that he is too lazy to write too much.

On a dark, windy, rainy night, I can see my golden house.

Not too bad, not tangled up, the writing is crisp and clear

It's very good, but the segmentation doesn't work well and makes it uncomfortable to watch.

You can cook and eat again and again

A very good book, but the punctuation and formatting are not very good.

Although there are some flaws, the story alone is still good

The plot is smooth, but it needs to be written carefully.

Finally a humorous version of the good Warhammer book